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#41 Posted : 19 August 2014 13:23:34(UTC)
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Zack waited as the judged gave there positive feedback, "Everyone give Marina another round of applause, next we have Erik Zullo This is going to be Exciting."



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"Sup guys. Names Erik Zullo, remember it! *smiles*. Very glad to be here tonight on Starfactory. The catchy lil indie jam I'll be singing tonight is called There's No Hiding It. This Indie record is more modern, it has an indie pop feeling toward it but it definitely has a message in it. For me, I love the ladies so I thought it would be no better way for me to enter this competition then to speak about a certain lady."

The good looking Erik Zullo smiles at the camera with his guitar in his hand as the song begins to start. He keeps on smiling and starts singing as well as playing his guitar along. Throughout the performance Erik keeps his vocals control and he often walks around the stage adding to the energy of his performance and touching the hands of the fans in the crowd. Through out the performance you can hear screeching female fans cheering for Erik and it really gave him a boost of confidence, which is something he really doesn't need as Erik is a naturally confident person and if shows during his performance. The track is about a love that goes astray but at the end of the day, they always find themselves back to each other and he continues to fall head overhills. The quite complicated lyrics are a bit simplistic at the same time and Erik has fun performing his first record on star factory. When the song is done he finds his way back to center stage and smiles before taking the guitar off his shoulder.

In a past life I think I’ve known her,
But like sand through my fingers she slipped on through the years
She deserved better I once told her, yet I was the one sat alone by their stairs
Love waited all along back home where I belong
But I broke those hearts, because
Lovers fight and I walk drenched on rainy days and in terrible nights,
The buses glowed like lights in doorways.
Low days are my horizon and now I never dream,
But thoughts of her haunt me and turn it all to steam.

There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood alight
I can’t deny,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night
There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood, alight
I can’t deny it this time around,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night


Clothed plain, with a lost grace only she loves with her haunted eyes,
But they breathe life into mine once more
Now I live with a ghost in hiding by the shore
And she sticks to my skin, she always asks for more

There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood alight
I can’t deny,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night
There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood, alight
I can’t deny it this time around,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night


But that first time I heard you cry
Your tears rang out a sigh
And my fears got big so fast,
Something worse then a bad romance

There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood alight
I can’t deny,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night
There’s no hiding it,
I want to drive her wild and set her blood, alight
I can’t deny it this time around,
I want to feel her flame burn my skin at night



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#42 Posted : 19 August 2014 13:34:13(UTC)
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Evangeline smiles brightly at Erik, clapping her hands happily for him. "Erik, what can I tell you that you don't already know?" she asks, grinning. "You're a very attractive man--" She's cut off by a group of girls in the audience cheering for that statement. Evangeline blushes deeply, embarrassed to tell somebody that they're good looking, still a little uncomfortable with it. "And when you sing these songs about driving these girls crazy, you know that you're going to get a lot of attention and a lot of fans. I think Will said it earlier - there's a certain look that people are looking for, and you have it. If I had one criticism..." She takes in a deep breath, not good at giving critique to anybody. "For an indie song, I wouldn't say you quite grasped the genre the way other contestants did tonight. And that's not a bad thing! Some genres aren't for everybody, obviously. You're not going to see me up on stage, rapping or anything like that." The audience laughs. "You have a very pop vibe to your lyrics, and it's just not what I think the indie genre listeners would be looking for. But like I said before, you're cute, so I'm sure you'll be back next week, and we'll get to see what kind of performance you give then."
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#43 Posted : 19 August 2014 13:37:48(UTC)
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Will clapped

"You know, the girls are gonna go crazy over you. This was a very energetic performance so I give you kudos on that but like Evangeline said, although these weren't very typical lyrics and it was essentially a a great song, it was very pop driven. So if there's ever a pop week I know you will shine. Definitely a great performance however. Nice work. I know Indie was challenging but like I said to Joshua earlier, its a very bendable genre so you get a pass. Plus, the way you were the crowd tonight was not like any other tonight man. Good job!
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#45 Posted : 20 August 2014 01:48:05(UTC)
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OOC: That was a good first day with a lot of good songs that I enjoyed, in my Sig Click the button and it will take you to the poll to pick your favorite. Vote as MANY TIMES AS YOU WANT! FOR WHOEVER YOU WANT! Voting will end Sunday 24 of August. If Any votes come in on sunday THEY WILL NOT COUNT I will be monitoring the votes and it DOES have a GPS feature so I can see where the votes are coming from, so don't why to cheat votes out by putting certain people at the top or the bottom, be honest. If you need to review the song click on the Picture in my sig and the song will be here. Have fun and vote vote vote.

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#46 Posted : 26 August 2014 10:12:20(UTC)
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Last week we had our contestants come to the stage and give their indie performance, and already we can tell this may be one of the most talented shows we had to date. While some struggle with the songs Kim-Lee Wong unable to really get through with his classical training, and Erik bringing more of a pop sound than anything others were made for this with even a surprised Valerie performed well and and YoungHood shocked, but it was Joshua and Marina that really shined in their first performance. Who will have the song of the Week? and who is going home? Tonight on StarFactory!


Zack came onto the stage with all the contestants behind him. "Hellooo LA! Did you guys enjoy last week indie show? Well tonight it going to be even crazier, the guys behind me have been waiting all week to see who made it to this week and who is in danger of going home. Lets not hold them to suspense any longer. Can Joshua and Marina come to the front of the stage?"

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Marina walked out onto the stage. Her heart was beating, she had a smile on her face as she walked out and stood next to Zack. The audience applauded her loudly
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Joshua followed behind Marina and looked out at the crowd with a smile as he stood on the other side of Zack his heart was also racing he was happy to hear the applauds from the audience he gave a small wave then turned his attention over to Zack

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#49 Posted : 26 August 2014 10:22:32(UTC)
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"Marina, Evangeline said that you blew the challenge away, and will said that you really surprised him and that you had the look of a star but did America only see you as just a pretty face?" Zack then went to Joshua "Joshua, The judges loved your talent and said that you took to challenge with the training you got from your sister, but Will said that you sounded lyrically more pop mixed with indie. Did America agree with them or did they look the musical blend." Zack waited a while before looking at them "well after counting the votes, by the slimmest of margins, The song of the week was the "Only Thing I'll Miss" By Joshua."

Zack waited for everyone to stop cheering, "Now for the elimination, unfortunately for us. Both GiGi and Bonnie Summers had emergencies and had to withdraw from the show. Both of them very talented but they couldn't break themselves away having more important issues to deal with. We wish them all the best, and hope to see them in the future,"


Now we had two people leave tonight, and these challenge is going to be even harder. Tonight we have a special guest he has been on tour, drop mixtapes, and his debut album Kidd At the Adult Table went gold. The Chaos urban act winner Kidd Amaze is here so that means this week is the hip hop challenge and Kidd has added a little extra something to this week to spice things up. Come back, and you will hear Kidd Amaze perform here live."

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#50 Posted : 26 August 2014 12:43:32(UTC)
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Kidd Amaze Backstage
Kidd was backstage finally away from the tv. Being home was all good and all but he did miss the people of being out with the public. He remember his first show on the radio and nervous still but he took in a deep breath and went out on the stage after getting himself ready. On the stage was a spotlight, and the stage nothing else he wanted it be something simple and still was the first time he performed this song before.


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At the beginning the spoken words come out and when they do people start to say it as well like it is a chant for good luck, and fortune.

“this microphone in the hands of any of the boys in the back is just a microphone, but in the hands of a dangerous man like myself it becomes a pipe-bomb. These words that I speak spoken by anybody else are just words strung loosely together to form sentences. What I say I mean, and what I mean I say, and they become anthems!”

Okay now people tell me that I make it
What is left for me to prove
I’m already up on the score cards
So I should just stick and move
But I keep going inside and trading blow for blow
Hand to hand, fist to fist, MMA we toe to toe

In the background you can see a dark red flashing as it hit a downbeat to the music as if to represent a heartbeat. While the lights behind him pulse he becomes more active but still standing in one general spot.

Watched it grow, to something that I can no longer contain
Always buck authority, and then went against the grain
Found a lane to do myself fast track toward the throne
Now people watch their tone, that kid here is amazing
Only rookie that got respected without hazing
Outgrew all the people that I was phasing
See, I’m here to raising the bar because I’m here to represent
In the event that you get tired of raps that are being sent
My niggas told me “Why you hungry,” when my fridge is always full
I’m just here to line shit up because I feel that there is a pull
Revolution in the making and I’m the start of a riot
People don’t want to hear it that why they want it quiet
So if this is that something that never gets heard
Tell them that I have shit on lock and passed out, like the word
Feeling that this is gospel that only for you could see it
But no worries I’ll have enough for everyone get to read it

The lights start to flicker twice now, the music starts to grow and build. Kidd is on stage pacing a little.

Don’t let them tell about me rather you get the auto
Work hard, look hardly working has always been the motto
Friends I haven’t seen in a while looking like they hit the lotto
Showing up random and then expecting me to follow
I lead in everything but in the relationship with my girl
You getting that acting, producing money and still rocking the rap world
You didn’t think I was going to be to follow up
Man no matter what I get my hands on it’s not enough
So I what is there left to prove? What did I do this for?
With myself in a group and rapping acting, I want more
Number one album, with the sellout tours
That isn’t enough for me I still need more
Greedy with everything that people get sore
And sore, more and more, step up and get send to the floor
Why do I still feel like I haven’t pushed myself to the brink
Why every time I hear rap now I just sit back and think
“I need to take this over, this is mine, and I own it”
Have people quoting my shit so well I could have clone it

As if to have a ah-ha moment he stops to tell everyone about what has happen in his life. How he can't stop even if he wanted to, his need for more, never being satisfy is what drives him. How he can't settle even if others are content and happy. How he now feels like he is getting to the point that no one can talk to him because he can do whatever he wants to. He is in charge of not only himself but the generations of people after him. he then walks over to far left of the stage and looks as if he is rapping/talking to the people

Listen and Be Amazed tour man that was like a drone strike
They see that I’m coming with more power than a radiation spike
So what is left for a guy like me?
Polarized Cena tell everyone that you can’t stop me
Funny I never followed a blueprint that everyone wanted to copy
I’m a young nigga so why does it seems like I lived more than life
Finally famous yea I made it, but is it really worth the price
Man we run it all, We standing tall
Don’t worry bout others cause we’re the one go get it
And I’m going to get it, Old randy moss
I’m catching everything my way that being toss
You not on my team then go take your loss

He turns his attention to the right side of the room, going over to almost ask them "what should I do, about my need to be better, that drive that doesn't stop." He looks almost confused but them calms himself, saying he might get a little crazy but he still has everything under control even when it doesn't look like it.

A lot me told me why work has hard as you do?
And why you do as much as you do?
You got everyone looking to go hop on tracks
And you seeing royalty so I think you got some stacks
Looking at stars and wondering if this ever going to last
So for now I just get my mind and put this shit on blast
Yea, young nigga on the fast lane, carry things from the past
That I could never forget, but I always got a plan
I never slip and I never panic
And when it comes to my raps I always get a little manic
And just like a know it all I always had the last say
When comes over a beat I always come in to slay
That why I say just what I feel and if I’m lying then where the proof
Reason why these niggas wear long chains is their prepping for the noose
But people tell me that I make it
What is left for me to prove
I’m already up on the score cards
So I should just stick and move
But I keep going inside and trading blow for blow
Hand to hand, fist to fist, MMA we toe to toe
Watched it grow, to something that I can no longer contain
Always buck authority, and then went against the grain
Found a lane to do myself, fast track toward the throne
Jay and Kanye watch the back, wipe out attack of the clone

Once the song is over he lowers the mic and the light fade out, as well as the music and he sees the lights come on and everyone cheer,


Sounds Like:
big Sean- First Quarter


Zack comes on stage and shakes Kidd's hand. "Everyone give it up for Kidd Amaze one more time." He waits until everyone stops and then continues "So, Kidd Everyone wants to know what is the added twist on this you putting on these contestant. "Alright, I got my start for my name because the DJ threw words at me and I made a rhyme out of it. So You guys are going to be given topics to rap about."

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#51 Posted : 27 August 2014 01:08:44(UTC)
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OOC: I'm sorry I had car trouble last night so I was leaving work and it took me an hour to get my truck started. Anyway this week challenge is hip-hop. I'm not expecting everyone to rap, but to make it more interesting and Original I got seven random words that you you have to make your song about. So here are to the words
Santa
Butter
Algebra
Metamorphosis
Calvary
Zodiac
Freckles

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#52 Posted : 08 September 2014 10:58:55(UTC)
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Last time on StarFactory Kidd Amaze came to the stage and showed his name is quite amazing. While he left the stage he gave our contestants not only a demanding hip hop challenge but he gave out words on what the songs should be about. A big shift from the last indie challenge who will have the song the tops this week and who will be going home? it all happens here tonight on StarFactory!

ZacK comes out onto the stage as the camera can panning in. "Welcome everyone to StarFactory, Tonight you are going to see some hip-hop like you never seen it before and to add to the challenge we got songs about Santa, Algebra, Butter, Zodiac, Freckles, Calvary? Well let's hope that the contestant found ways to work those things into the song, so Lets talk about what happen last week while we get our first contestant to the stage."

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#53 Posted : 08 September 2014 11:24:36(UTC)
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Kidd Amaze was once known as a underground rapper that would like nothing else but to keep making music. Now he is making waves too. Number one debut album that went platinum and is going to be headlining a world tour as the Chaos Urban Act winner and is nominated as FCA Urban act. Funny how he got his name by rapping on the radio about things like pencil, headphones, coffee, and card. Now he has set that challenge for our contestant will they answer the call or will they fall short?


Coming to the Stage right now Kim-Lee who as a little disappointed about last week, now he comes to the stage to try and redeem himself.

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"The last time I was here they said that I wasn't really able to convey the message that I wanted to. I really had a hard time getting into the challenge and the fact that I would have to do it around a word was going to be even harder. Thankfully hip hop doesn't mean hardcore rapping or very rapping that much. So I kind of just went with the math one and from there it just kind of fell together. I really don't to be the one to go home. But I already feel like I need to come big or I might just be the one to go but I'm hoping that this song makes it.



"Coming to the stage, Kim-Lee with the song Work it out."

Kim-Lee comes to the stage and start to sing strong and powerful. with a suit on and a band behind him.

We need to get on the same page, you and I
Cause I’m simple and you’re so complex

Ohhh,
How we going to work this out
Just try to work this out baby.

I never really focus on being together
I was the all on my own, in my prime
But then you came around girl,
You did a lot to change, my mind
You knew just want to do, to make me think about us
But I can’t seem to imagine what with all the fuss, with just lust
See I, I’m not afraid to try
But if you want to be with me
I need a ride or die

So how we do we work this out
Tell me out do we work this out
So how we do we work this out
Tell me out do we work this out

You want to try to add yourself
But you know it’s more complicated than that


Kim-Lee starts to take the suit off and has a hoodie underneath throwing the hood up and start to rap the next verse.

See, I was perfectly fine being the constant
But then you threw a variable to create non-sense
Now I met I problem that I can’t solve
Because there is more than one involve
So we going to have to piece it out and break it down
I don’t want to let this fall to the ground
Get it to place where both sides can agree
And if it works then maybe it was meant to be
Working on the calculations but that only logical
Being attracted to you that is just biological
Cute face, nice shape, and pretty eyes
Make me want to learn more about you I can’t lie
Wondering if you make guys cries
I’m willing to work it if you are willing to try

He then pulls the hood down and goes back to singing effortlessly.

See I, I’m not afraid to try
If you want to be with me, then I need a ride or die

So how we do we work this out
Tell me out do we work this out
So how we do we work this out
Tell me out do we work this out

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John Legend Who Do We Think We Are.

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Zack comes on stage with Kim-Lee still on, "Wow, that was something else! Everyone that's was Kim-Lee, Now let's meet the judges for tonight. First you saw her on Jimmy Fallon, miss Extra, Extra Jennifer Armstrong. Then We Have the talented and gifted Will Rocca. And Our guest judge who know a thing or two about Hip hop Our performer from last week Kidd Amaze. So judges what did you think of the song?"

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Jennifer claps after the performance and introduction, smiling with her now blue hair.

"Okay, Kim, I'm going to be super honest. I thought it was great! I really liked how you created the whole mathematical equation, like my head kinda hurts now." She giggles. "But I think you approached this rather smartly. You could've done something like '2+2 = me and you' and I would've been like 'Oh god' but you were smart so I applaud that! I think you certainly redeemed yourself from last week."

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#56 Posted : 08 September 2014 12:07:16(UTC)
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Kidd: Nods his head and looking at Kim-Lee, "You know I got to say that this was different from what I thought algebra song was going to be about, it was really a good showing and I really enjoyed the song it was very good show."


Zack let Kim-Lee leave the stage "Alright, now for a little different feel, here to do the song I'm White, Curtis Wakefield."

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Curtis went first last time and it did okay but it wasn't the best he could do putting him in the middle of the pack "So we go at a challenge and it has to be about certain word. so I'm went with freckles and I was going to do with another level, I'm going to go all out with this challenge because I don't know if I will be able to make it, so I'm just going to go out and have fun."


Curtis comes out looking like a young vanilla ice with the baggy clothes and the shades. "Ayo DJ, give me a beat."

The Beat

Now I don’t normally do this,
But the last thing I want is to get diss
By my lack of pattern and country don’t-you-know
So jump-jump and away we go,
This is going to be a real bad blemish
White-guy rapping could make any real rapper squeamish
I could kick a flow even with the lack of melanin
Country style ascent that mingles jelling in
And it sprinkles about the song like polka spots
Freckles about the body I just want to connect the dots
Well my name is C-U,-R-T,-I-S
Yes first instrument, guitar I guess
So what it to ya that I’m doing the best to stay on beat
It’s bad enough that I have two left feet
I was such a square that I perfected the dance
I want to say I’m sorry to the rappers in advance

Cause I’m white, white and I got the mic
Throw up the deuces, cause this thing is tight
Yea I’m white, and I have got freckles
I don’t do stand ups but when I do I heckle


I wasn’t cool, I didn’t think I could rhyme
But since this is the challenge I’m thinking it’s time
I do poetry as a kid to impress the ladies
But I make sure to strap up I don’t want babies
And I got a thing with pretty girls with red hair
Not having ginger kids so best beware
I have soul that I try to take care
And they know-know
Had the rapper in the back hang his head in woe
Was never lucky enough to catch a tiger by the toe
Oh if I should let go, let it go
Heck no you should hang it by its foot’s pinky
I never go bad like I was made from a twinkie
See any cute girls I give them a winkie
And that was the emoticon
I want people to try to turn me on
Like a broken clap on
Yes shower me with applause like I’m rocky
I’m just have freckles don’t call me blotchy
Two things I know are Mexicans
Is tacos and mariachi

Cause I’m white, white and I got the mic
Throw up the deuces, cause this thing is tight
Yea I’m white, and I have got freckles
I don’t do stand ups but when I do I heckle

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#57 Posted : 08 September 2014 12:40:45(UTC)
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YoungHood surprised a lot of people with his Indie hip hop slash now he looks like he is ready to go with his new sound. "So what I'm going to do is really keep the pressure on, I didn't really now what to write about, I was going to write about myself but since the challenge I had to come out with something different. You going to see it, though just watch."


Performing his song "Patient Zero" Young Hood.

He comes out with glasses and casual clothes. as he raps with no music to it.


Patient zero is now showing signs aggression
Maybe is because rap out now is regression
Changing how the cells seem to be rearranging
Cancerous tumors seem to be all around
And the immune system going on full lock down

He takes the tie off and throws the glasses he had away as he continues rapping.

The experiment that had kills and modify
Zero has the drive to overcome and rectify
Now the body seems to have found the fix
Keeping working cells while broken ones get hic
Crazy for me to be alive it must be cause of luck
or it cause for rap i don't give a flying fuck

the takes off the dress shoes and unbuttons his shirt now people start to bring him certain things medicine tray, gets him a straight jacket

this rap game is mine like my swag struck
a lot of you rappers have stupid on stuck
Seriously, but I’m the one that never had "it"
Since I’m with numbers maybe I’m a rabbit
Rabid looking at you with a mouth of foam
Feeling chrome in my hand as i aim for dome

he starts to get more aggressive as people start to contain him but really hold his mic for him.

And I’m worst at home can't be left alone
So while sit in a room jacket tight and press
I don't stress i plan a formula to test
Paradox the strongest out and wait the rest
now you might have guess that I'm more then i seem
thinking that I'm amazing doesn't sound so extreme
raw natural talent and uncut by any pressure
what I'm really capable of yet to be measure
now i so be national treasure and the 10 wonder
rolling with powerful noise like thunder
leaving any other rapper in asunder
wondering what it be without me
can't see a world where rap can breathe

the in the song he change from being in casual clothes, to being a crazy man almost out of control until he was put put down.

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#58 Posted : 08 September 2014 12:41:28(UTC)
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VALERIE HUE - WEEK TWO

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"Hip-hop challenge?! *laughs* What?! I was immediately nervous when I found out that that was the second week's challenge. I hardly ever even listen to the genre, so I had no idea how to prepare this week at all. So I called my one of my brothers, and he told me the names of some people in the hip-hop music world, and I got really drawn to the soulfulness of some of their performances. I decided that that's what I was going to base my song off of this week - the soul of hip-hop. Of course, then Starfactory had to throw a wrench in my plan and give us topics to rap about! *laughs* Some of the topics were so crazy! Butter? Algebra? I couldn't even think of how to start writing a song about those topics, much less a song with a genre I hardly know anything about! But I saw that one of the topics was "zodiac," and that really drew me in. I've never been one to believe much in astrology or numerology or anything like that, but it's always been really interesting to me. So I decided to pick that as my topic.

The song that I wrote is called You're My Pisces. By the end of writing it, the song was much more comical than I originally intended it to be, but I like it that way. Basically the song is about a woman who is breaking up with a man because she doesn't think that their signs are compatible. This hasn't ever happened to me before, but I had a friend who wouldn't date guys if they were a certain sign, even if she really liked them. I think the fact that so much stock is put into these astrological symbols is fancinating. So even though the woman in the song knows that she loves this person, this is the last night she's choosing to spend with him because of him being a Pisces. One of the lines I wrote was 'I'm just fire and you're just water,' because Pisces is a water sign, while Leo - which is what I am - is a fire sign. It works on a lot of levels in the song.

I don't know what the other contestants are planning to do tonight, but I think I'm going to stand out because my song isn't entirely rap. I do rap a little bit near the end... but it's not the focus of the song. Like I said before, I really wanted my focus to be on the soulful passion that rappers seem to have when they're 'spitting bars' - is that the right term? did I say that right? - so a lot of my song is just some R&B style emotion. I hope it's alright, and everybody likes it!"


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The lights cast a bright red color over the stage as Valerie stands in the center. The crowd's reaction to seeing her starts off strong, and begins to fade in the anticipation of her starting her piece. Even though Valerie has always felt that she has a certain cute charm to her apperance, she has never felt 'sexy' or 'hot,' which explains why her outfit this week is simple and fitting, even though this week, she could have probably shown a little skin and gotten away with it. Her long sleeve white shirt with navy and pink speckles lays on her body in all the correct places, the bottom part of the shirt tucked into a pleated navy skirt. She looks more like a librarian or a teacher than a nineteen year old participating in a hip-hop challenge, but if anything, that adds more to Valerie's charm. There's an obvious air of nervousness to her as the music she wrote begins. The confident girl that they saw last week disappeared the moment Valerie became out of her element. Her whispy voice comes through the dramatic music, strong and clear, but her eyes focus on a space on the ceiling, too nervous to look anywhere else.

Small restaurant
Can't let anyone see me here
Candlelight
My lip quivers when you are near
I love you
But what you are, I can't ignore
You're just not who I've been searching for

I know that this might really feel like love
But I know the stars are not smiling down upon us
So this is the end, baby

I know you won't put up a fight
You're my Pisces
Wish we could have shared our whole lives
You're my Pisces
One day I will find Mr. Right
You're my Pisces
I am yours until the daylight
You're my Pisces
You're my Pisces
Tonight


After Valerie sings the chorus the first time, her voice belting out the last line, the audience cheers loudly for her. This is exactly the boost of confidence that she needed. Her eyes shift from the spot on the ceiling that she was so interested in to the crowd and the judges. She begins to loosen up, moving around the stage more and interacting with the crowd around the stage while she's singing. Somebody in the crowd holds up a sign that says: "VALERIE HUE: WE LOVE YOU," which makes Valerie smile brightly. She's proving to the audience that they don't know what to expect from this short little redhead, and that she'll always be around to surprise them.

In my room
We sigh as I take off my jacket
Don't be sad
Men like you are just my bad habit
You might cry
But that will not change our new status
I'm just fire and you're just water

I know that this might really feel like love
But I know the stars are not smiling down upon us
So this is the end, baby

I know you won't put up a fight
You're my Pisces
Wish we could have shared our whole lives
You're my Pisces
One day I will find Mr. Right
You're my Pisces
I am yours until the daylight
You're my Pisces
You're my Pisces
Tonight


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A small confident grin grows on Valerie's face as she continues to sing, knowing that the part that she had once been so nervous about was coming up. There's almost a complete change in her body language when the very small rap part comes, as if Valerie were saying, "This is what I have, this is what I can offer this week's competition, and I'm going to do it as well as I can." When she finishes, the crowd seems to think that what she has to offer is perfectly fine, because they answer her back with some resounding cheers, and even some laughs at the last line:

I can never be with you
That's exactly what the stars tell me
And we both know that the stars have never lied to me before
I can be over you in a couple days
Unless you change your birthday, you can't see this face
Flowers and chocolate, useless
None of these gifts will make me change my mind
One day you'll understand
The zodiac is science, listen to me, baby!

I know you won't put up a fight
You're my Pisces
Wish we could have shared our whole lives
You're my Pisces
One day I will find Mr. Right
You're my Pisces
I am yours until the daylight
You're my Pisces
You're my Pisces
You're my Pisces
You're my Pisces
Tonight


The music ends on a cut, the stage turning pitch black the moment it does. Valerie's strong, but breathy voice has resonated throughout the crowd. She turns towards the judges and gives them a little shrug. She knows that in terms of the challenge, she did the least amount of what they asked for possible, but she also knows that she took the challenge, showed off her strengths, and then sprinkled the challenge that they gave them over the top. It probably wasn't what the rest of the contestants did, but she hoped it would make her stand out, and possibly even let people see more of Valerie for who she is.


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K. Michelle - V.S.O.P.


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#59 Posted : 08 September 2014 13:10:06(UTC)
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Joshua walks onto the stage after being announced and smiles out at the crowd then the judges "So this is called She Can Get It sorry if it's a little explicit" he laughs a little before the music starts Joshua didn't have a guitar this time as the song didn't require one Joshua was nervous about this challenge as they had to use certain words plus he wasn't a hip hop kinda guy the song starts and Joshua begins singing immediately as he sing the chorus which is accompanied by a little dance routine as well he also adds a few runs in the chorus before going into the verse where he begins rapping which sounded a bit odd on him but at the same time good it sort of went with him in a strange way Joshua continued rapping and moving around the stage heading over to the audience and touching their hands and even to the judges he continues through his song before it eventually comes to an end he then waits to hear the judges comments

Ooh can't count all the things we're gonna
Do ain't gonna stop no
Oh I know what she wants tonight she
Can get it

I seen her there across the room bout a million
Faces but all I see is you she's hotter than the
Sun wanna take a picture, kodak she's like a fire
Sign, zodiac and I can tell from the way she moves
She's a maniac she licking her lips moving her hips
Watching her go down this ain't an opportunity
I'm about to miss I'm gonna give her what she wants
Yeah I'll give it to her she knows what she doing but
She don't care we ain't looking for love yeah we're
Both too young maybe a hook up just a little fun

Ooh can't count all the things we're gonna
Do ain't gonna stop no
Oh I know what she wants tonight she's
Can get it
She can get it yeah she can get it I know she
Wants it

We both know it's going down I could tell by the
Way she's staring she wants it now and I'm gonna
Give it let it go let it go we're gonna lose control
She's on my naughty list call me Santa gonna
Give her a gift that she wants and we ain't gonna stop
Nu uh

Ooh can't count all the things we're gonna
Do ain't gonna stop no
Oh I know what she wants tonight she's
Can get it
She can get it yeah she can get it I know she
Wants it

Yeah it's going down just like this I'm put it down
On you like this yeah I'm gonna go all out we gonna
Go all night gonna turn the lights out yeah

Ooh can't count all the things we're gonna
Do ain't gonna stop no
Oh I know what she wants tonight she's
Can get it
She can get it yeah she can get it I know she
Wants it

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#60 Posted : 09 September 2014 12:36:50(UTC)
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OOC: So voting starts now right now and I will be here to close the them Sunday at 10AM eastern time to make up a little bit of time. but their you have it using PollCode vote for the song of the week, and I pushing hard to get you guys to vote vote vote.

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