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Offline Moquel  
#21 Posted : 08 June 2011 03:50:46(UTC)
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DEAR MERCY [4:50]

Songwriters: Radio Vine.
Prouducers: David Orangement, Radio Vine, Jesse Path, Odeal Frank Meloidy.




MERCY ENTRY

He comes at the brutal times in everyone's life. When it rains, it pours. When death comes knocking on the door; he is sure he is enforced for death to be the worry of sorry eyes. He is a man with no heart, no feeling, nor human. His a man who only wish will change, similar to the devil. He is here, car accidents, he is there, death in this world, he stands closely, when God is closer than a whisper, he can never beat God but people like a man with a cold heart, a life of hell and brutal behavior. He stands there, looking deeply into my eyes. He takes me everywhere he goes and I let him. I'm afriad to stand up for myself. He grabs me in anger and I let him do it. I only cry because I dont know what's going to happen next. He knocks on my door, oh shit- what if I dont answer then I have to force him worster tomorrow. I cant talk this shit no more- why wont you leave me the fuck alone? Winds blow in my windows, break my prisoned life and he takes me to a world I wish I can destory. He laughs, he feeds from my weakness, he smiles with my aggestion and he ALWAYS ALWAYS will win. When I hear dance songs and I try to dance, he dances with me. He grabs me off the floor and takes me on a ride. All visions and flashbacks of my life, flashes of flames he is right there, his hands near me every fame of my life. I look into my life and realize- when I opened a door, my weakness will let him in. " The best way to defeat him Density is to be strong againest him" the words of a wise woman told me. I listened and I got up to write him a little poem I like to call Dear Mercy
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PROUDUCTION

I walked in, sick of this. I walk up and throw all of my things down on the floor and slams the door. " Miss Vine.." I stopped her. " Give me a dance with a funk hip to it.." Black circles around my eyes, skin pale and my heart beats. My release from this man is the scariest thing I ever experienced before. Odeal Frank, a 45 year old woman with a taste of dance music. Jesse comes back to offer a special effects of a door locking, a man screaming with chills me during recording.I walk to the booth as Odeal brings up with a easy dance pop songs with techno and instrumentals in severel beat panels in the song. The hook and chrous features a melody toned high vocals from me and it makes me exciting, my heart beats faster when Odeal uses her music mastermind to create the techno panels faster than the original beats, the panel and the fast step of music keeps you on the edge of your foot. I dance around the studio, happy but when I get my lyrics in my hand- the same feeling when I walked in the studio is felt again. I relax my vocals and here I go, I hope he is listening.

LYRICS

Mercy, Romance. I love you forever.
Shoot me down and I will bullet you Mercy.
No more pain, take me as I'm at. This song will
show you what I mean.


Verse 1:
You think I'm scared
fear is not the deadly truth
I will only run if you chase
be a strong woman by any meets.
You will not come to my doorstep,
knocking for bad reasons.
Take your luck somewhere
I'm going to fight you
until you're died.

Hook:
I run,
everyone chases me
He's the leader of them all,
their scared of him at once
He tells them to do this
or he will mark them
but I'm not the one
I will say no, no more pain
for me. Let me write something
I hope you read.

Chrous:
I'm not the case of a
bad romance. I can say sorry if
that's what you want. Hold me down,
let me cry out to the world, but dont let
me bleed my honest truth. He comes when it bad,
sometimes when it goods. Dont know the reason why.
Dear Mercy I say, you're lonely without me.
You need me to be powerful.
(break)
I will not deal you favors,
drop down to my knees
and pray for your attention.
You're the bad part of me
but I will not kill myself
(because) you try to over rule
me this time. This time is hard, I will fight,
bring it on. Let's end this right.

Verse 2:
You touch me I see things
I never will see again.
I listen when you say things
I get scared sometimes.
No more of weakness. Gotta be strong sometimes.
You think that I'm your mind
you take over my body instead.

Pre-Hook:
I walk by your side
because I'm scared
I listen to your rulings
because I'm scared
Someone told me walk away
you pull me back and dont allow
me to be strong anyway.
I have to do this for myself
listen to the way you destroy me.
Read, pause. Take a deep breath and let's
go far tonight.

[Say Hook + Chrous]

Bridge 1:
I open up to you
tears drop from your
eyes. (I know)
I been on this road so long
you must thought I couldnt
escape. I have been with you
you are bad tension to me.
And I give you all of me
but I have nothing left.

[Hook + Chrous, beat slows down dramatically for the bridge 2]

Bridge 2:
When I finally
ran away from you
You were speechless
by my anger too.
I know you must be
heart broken, but from the start
You was the worst for me
I run like hell,
but I made it hell
of far.

[Speeds it beat fast among Hook and Chrous]

Dear Mercy [x10, fades into the song]


[Radio screams Mercy 10 songs after the fade out with no instrumental in the background]


NIGHT OF FOREVER

I'm sweating in a hot room with blankets over my face. I hear a loud bang at the door and I start to cry. I turn on the radio as my song is heard. The banging stops. I run to the get the radio and put it near the door. A loud scream is heard. " Goodbye.." I drop down as I feel asleep slowly..
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#22 Posted : 10 June 2011 05:03:47(UTC)
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TWO SHOOTS, TOO MANY [5:00]

Songwriter: Radio Vine
Prouducer: Sir Zulla



ENTRY OF DEATH

I woke up from a cold sweat, looking around the room in panic. Sometimes I will wonder where am I, trying in the same place I went to sleep in. When I was a kid, I will always wake up somewhere else, only because Mrs. Pearl use to say I sleepwalked. I never believed that. I heard the TV on in the living room, rememebering that I was watching the news last night.

REPORTER: A wife of New York with five children was shoot today by her husband of twenty years..

I walked slowly towards the TV, tears rushing in. I looked at the screen and saw that it was Martha, a girl I grew up near the orphan. She was much older than me but I always looked up to her. She was a sweet girl, very smart and talented. She played the guitar. The picture of the once loved and happy woman popped up on the screen as I fall down and my eyes shut.

Quote:
I remember when I was about nine and my orphan care taker, Mrs. Pearl was outside, watering the flowers. I went in her room, being nosey and I was a very curious little girl. I went in her dresser, with many clothes of a woman stuck in the old days. She was sorta a princess living in a reality. She will always wear these bows in her hair, but had a strong love for children. Oh gosh, she was a woman I loved. She always kept her door locked and told us dont never go in her room even when she wasnt there. I will just wonder, I wonder what's in there, why doesnt she want the children in there. So when she went outside, I found the perfect chance to see what she was hiding. I ran to her room before she made it back and I was looking thought the dresser and I found a silver pistol. I looked at it, like a pierce of candy. It was a heaven moment. I only saw guns in movies, never knew that it was actually a item because I was just a child. I remember just a loud bang, a bang so loud; my ears vibrate with faint. I also remember looking up in to light in the hospital. I reached to the side and didnt feel anyone. SHIT! I thought, what the fuck did I do? I founded out. This scar on my foot came from me being curious. After that moment, I realize in my life people have try to shoot me down because of my dreams, hopes and future because of a illness this strong, they thought it was UNPOSSIBLE to do the shit I wanted too. You cant shoot down before it's too late.. I look down and saw that scar and I grabbed my notepack. Love, romance and my past all came in with a emotional but yet inviting song.


SOUND ZULLA

Sir Zulla is married to Lady Zulla, he creates the best vision of a song possible. I called him, feeling low for him to come in the studio and the same day we meant up. He took the influence on how fast a machine gun will shot and turned into a fast voilence pop song about death and life. It also took the amazing vision of what bullets will sound like flying and mixed it with the shooting of a machine gun and turned it into a instrumental of a song. He added a hard knocked bass but doesnt go completly though when the machined beat with effects of a crying woman turned into a soundly piano but what makes the beat unique is- the continous fist banging in the background that blends with the instrumental.

LYRICS


HOOK:
Pull the trigger
Let's make love to
the gun that shot me before
Out-run the bullet
I hope you make it far
You didnt think
it will kill me this first
Should of thought
about a better plan.
You shot me Twice
Too Times, too many
Now look at me
Gone and never coming back.


[Sound of guns are heard with crying of a woman]

VERSE 1:
Pictures and people
all around me, wondering
what happened to me.
Laying in a circle of
death, you regret
hurting me. You look
at me with misery, I wish
I can get back up
and change the ways
we did things. You shot me
two shoots, too many.

CHROUS:
We want down, down, down
many bullets falling down,
down, down and we continue to
fight until one is hurt at the end.

HOOK:
Pull the trigger
Let's make love to
the gun that shot me before
Out-run the bullet
I hope you make it far
You didnt think
it will kill me this first
Should of thought
about a better plan.
You shot me Twice
Too Times, too many
Now look at me
Gone and never coming back.


[Loud shouts and news reporting are heard
along with the short bass, but stops when the guns are heard again]

VERSE 2:
Tell me when
me and you will
get along. Bring
a gun between us. Let
us release the pain, the anger
of the past. You grab a gun when
we are argueing and I'm scared on
what's next. Shots aiming at me,
you shot me once, I fall, you shot me
again, I die. You shot me two times,
too many doll.

CHROUS:
We want down, down, down
many bullets falling down,
down, down and we continue to
fight until one is hurt at the end.

HOOK:
Pull the trigger
Let's make love to
the gun that shot me before
Out-run the bullet
I hope you make it far
You didnt think
it will kill me this fast
Should of thought
about a better plan.
You shot me Twice
Too Times, too many
Now look at me
Gone and never coming back.


BRIDGE:
You try to wake me up,
but I dont listen. You tell me
sorry but I dont speak. You give me a kiss
but I dont kiss back. You realize I'm gone
and now we are down down.


[SAY HOOK + CHROUS (X5) WITH BULLET SOUNDING]

You sin with me,
you kissed me
you are a murder
because of anger
now what are you going
to do? Suppose to be your love
but went down with you. You are prisoned
and I'm buried, oh baby, we should
have fixed this while we had a chance.

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