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#1 Posted : 13 August 2011 11:34:34(UTC)
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Michelle Green - Exiled
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Title: Exiled
Release Date: October 2011
Recorded: December 2010 - August 2011
Genre: Indie pop, electropop, folk pop
Label: Chaos Records
Producer: Ryan Ross Hernandez, Red X, Gia Rose

Tracklisting
1. Exiled (3:57)
2. No Fear, No Shame (3:59)
3. Dance With Danger (3:42)
4. Sold My Soul (5:02)
5. Only When I'm Smiling (4:27)
6. You Drive Me Crazy (4:21)
7. You Just Lost Your Lover (Ft. Ryan Ross Hernandez) (3:18)
8. They Build Us Up, To Watch Us Fall (Ft. Katie Coyle) (4:47)
9. Nightlife (3:31)
10. Push Me So Far (4:21)
11. Soldier (4:01)
12. As The Angels Carry Me Home (3:52)

DELUXE EDITION TRACKS

13. Lullaby (3:16)
14. You Just Lost Your Lover Part II (Ft. Serenity White) (3:27)
15. Guilty As Charged (3:44)
16. Back To Black (5:35)

Introduction
"Exiled" is the second studio album from 16 year old English Indie pop singer-songwriter, Michelle Green. Set for release on August 21, 2011 by Chaos Records. Produced by Ryan Ross Hernandez, Red X and Gia Rose, the album has gained a lot of interest in the past few weeks in the run up to the album’s release date, as an earlier recorded version of You Just Lost Your Lover was released as a promo single, the song however failed to chart which has put the album under some intense scrutiny, questioning whether Michelle Green is just a one hit wonder.
So as the second half of the year is upon on us and several albums have already defined the music year so far with the likes of Alicia Lena, Katie Coyle, Glamazon, Victoria Black, Buzz and Hype, Riot In The Boulevard, Cherise and many more dominating the music industry it seems like the pressure is on the 16 year old indie pop songstress to prove that she is here for the long term, as everyone knows, the second album is the one that defines the artist, it’s where we find out what the artist is made of and whether they really have the ability to make it in the industry, so this is the most important stage of Michelle Green’s career so far, will the result by glorious success or catastrophic failure, it looks like only time will tell.

Background
In 2010 a fifteen year old singer-songwriter from Camden, London shot onto the music scene with her debut album The Voice Of Me, it became an instant success selling over four and a half million copies worldwide and peaking at number #1 on the Chart Heat album charts, it also spawned 3 huge Top20 singles, the number two hit Fifteen and Dark Days and Red Symphony, both peaking at number 1 on the Top20 Airplay Charts, so far she has sold over 7,250,000 records worldwide since her debut just over a year ago.
Michelle began working on the new songs for the album since the beginning of this year, You Just Lost Your Lover was born in January, seemingly written about her break-up from Matty but she confirmed in a recent interview that it wasn’t specifically about the young rapper, “Maybe subconsciously it appeared in the song but that wasn’t my intention when I was writing it nor was it the inspiration. However, people will interpret things in their own way and if that’s how It’s interpreted then I’m completely fine with that.”
She took a break from touring in March and spent time in London with her family and friends during this time she created the majority of the songs from the album and they were almost all completely composed on the piano, She stated in another recent interview that she was most proud of the songs on this album and claims that she feels that she’s grown up a lot since her debut album almost exactly one year ago. Songs like As The Angels Carry Me Home and They Build Us Up, To Watch Us Fall show a slight change in musical direction as Michelle decided to put more emphasis on the electropop sound that she debuted only briefly on The Voice Of Me.
She began recording promo versions of the songs at her home studio that she recently had built in her house in Camden and the promo version of You Just Lost Your Lover was released as a way to test out the new material and see how it works out, the result however, was considered somewhat of a disappointment as the song failed to chart, however the full studio version is expected to be released as the lead single from the album, it’s evident that she believes in these new songs and she seems intent on making her own decisions and trusting her own heart and instincts, will it pay off?.

Recording
Michelle began recording the album at The Hit Factory in New York between June and August 2011, she enlisted the help of producers, Ryan Ross Hernandez, Red X and Gia Rose, all of which brought their own skills to the table, Hernandez focussing on the purity of the instrumentals, Red X was primarily overseeing the Electronica instruments and Gia Rose helped push the Electropop sound to the forefront of the album and of course voice her opinions on the album, good and bad.
The recording process was somewhat inconsistent, as sessions would go on for two weeks then break for a period before the recording process continued, Michelle claims that it was very “stop and start.” Which she maintains has benefitted the album as she said in a recent interview, “I think it was better to have a break between recording sessions, I don’t think we could have made the album as well as it turned out had we have all spent a fixed period of time together in the studio, so I definitely think that the breaks helped the album a lot more, it also gave me a lot more creative freedom, where I could go away and re-work some songs that I felt weren’t working so well, so all in all I think the recording process benefitted the album immensely.”

Songwriters Analysis
“This album is probably the most important thing I’ve ever had to work on, Those who have followed me since my debut last year will no doubt be aware that the chance to become a musician is something I’ve wanted since I can remember so for me this had to be the best record I’ll ever make, I’ve put so much thought into this record and although the songs didn’t form until earlier this year, this second album was already in my thoughts since the day I released The Voice Of Me, I think we’re all aware of how important the second record is, it’s been spoken about so often about how the second album makes or breaks people’s careers, it’s the diving line, it separates the good from the great and it’s where you form the foundations for your future and it’s beyond any kind of pressure I’ve ever had to deal with, the fact that the rest of my career could be decided with this record is terrifying.
However I think I’ve achieved my golden moment with this album, it encompasses my debut by far and if I never make another record in my life I’ll know that I’ve gone out in style because I honestly think that I’ve created a really good record, something I can look at and be proud of, if my life doesn’t turn out the way I planned, I’ll still be able to look on this album and say, that’s what I achieved and the fact that I wrote the whole album, where on my debut I had some help from outside songwriters just makes it so much better, I can be proud of what I’ve created whether it has success or not, I honestly believe that this is my golden moment, maybe it’s not who knows but without being negative about myself, I honestly don’t know if I could outdo this album, but I’ll surely try, providing I get to continue to live my dream and have a long future in the music industry, I certainly feel well equipped for it.
The sound is slightly different from that of my debut album, The Voice Of Me was heavily influenced by a more grand sound, I performed some of the songs from that record with a freaking orchestra, at fifteen years old, how insane is that?, But I think this album will show the growth, I think maybe If I have one negative about my debut album is that I tried too hard to attempt to stay away from the mainstream pop sound, I used the orchestra which is something I’ve always wanted to do, but I think I just tried to move away from mainstream pop a little too much, with this record, I think it shows more of me, who I am, the kind of music that inspired it, it feels more modern, I think The Voice Of Me was kinda like, Woaaah this fifteen year old girl is doing these kinda old fashioned sounding songs, but now it’s sort of like, Ok, music is moving forward and I’m gonna create something that feels more right for me, a modern sound with the lyrics and music to match.
As you can tell I’m extremely excited about the record, so all there is to do now is sit back and listen, I hope you all enjoy what I’ve done, I love you all.”
- Michelle Green xx

Personnel
Michelle Green – Vocals, Piano, Keyboards, Synthesizers
Aaron Pritchard – Acoustic Guitar, Backing Vocals
David Russell – Drums, Percussion
Mariamma Swaray – Cello (tracks 5 and 8)
Katie Coyle – Acoustic Guitar, Vocals (track 8)
Ryan Ross Hernandez – Producer, Engineer, Mixing, Guitar (track 7)
Serenity White - Vocals (track 14 [Deluxe Edition])
Red X – Producer
Gia Rose – Producer, Mastering
Cherry Blossom – Artwork Design, Photography


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#2 Posted : 14 August 2011 02:17:00(UTC)
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"Exiled" to be released as the albums lead single!


Exiled


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Track Description
The fast paced synthesizer begins as the intro to the song, quickly followed by Keyboards a strong drum beat, the music increases in pace as the song moves on and Michelle begins singing the opening lines of the song at around the 24 second mark, the drum beats stop briefly as Michelle sings and then they return later on in the song as they start to beat furiously as Michelle sings, “You Don’t See What I Can See/Because I Failed They’re Gonna Banish Me/Away From The World And Normality/I’m, I’m, I’m … I’m Gonna Be.” And the drums continue then throughout, a soft almost unnoticeable acoustic guitar is playing throughout which helps to keep the music moving along nicely, the chorus provides a strong vocal from Michelle as she sings “I’m Gonna Be Exiled/Sent From This Planet Like An Unwanted Child/I’m Gonna Be Exiled By You/Dropped From Your Life Like A Bolt From The Blue.” The song is seemingly about the pressures of being in the music industry and the fickle nature that comes with it, Michelle providing the perfect vocals of softness mixed with a timid sense of anger.

The song closes with a repetitive and slow drum beat, matched along with the soft acoustic guitar, an almost regretful feeling and an air of anger from Michelle seems to appear when she slowly sings out the final part of the song, “You Don’t See What I Can See/Because I Failed They’re Gonna Banish Me/Away From The World And Normality/I’m, I’m, I’m … I’m Gonna Be/I’m Gonna Be Exiled/Sent From This Planet Like An Unwanted Child/I’m Gonna Be Exiled By You/Dropped From Your Life Like A Bolt From The Blue.”

Songwriter’s Analysis
“This is a song which is kind of about the music industry, it’s like so fickle sometimes and some really great artists just disappear into obscurity because of how fickle the industry is, I guess in hindsight it could relate to the failure of You Just Lost Your Lover in the charts, but I did write the song before that so it wasn’t actually inspired by that, I guess I was kind of thinking about some artists I used to listen to and I think, where are they now, so many artists get dropped from their label because their song didn’t chart so well or something but there’s more to music than that, it can’t be all number 1 singles and monster hits, it’s about creating something that stands the test of time, something you can look back on in 20 or 30 years and go, wow I’m really proud of that and that’s kind of what I wanna be able to do in 20 years, hopefully look on this record and go, wow, I created that record at the age of 16 and it’s all my own work, that would mean more to me than commercial success.
In terms of the songs recording, it went pretty smoothly because I had sort of got what I wanted from the song before I headed into the studio, a couple of slight changes kinda enhanced the song a little and helped make things sound a little better but the recording of this track was pretty simple.”
- Michelle Green


In This World It Seems That All They Want Is Perfection
But They Don’t Know It Doesn’t Exist And All We Have Is No Direction
We’re Living Our Life One Day At A Time
Anything More Than That Would Seem Like A Crime
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Perfect Looks And A Perfect Heart
They Don’t Realise That Doesn’t Exist
They Don’t Know Where To Start
And I’m Making My Own Way
My Own Way
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You Don’t See What I Can See
Because I Failed They’re Gonna Banish Me
Away From The World And Normality
I’m, I’m, I’m … I’m Gonna Be
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I’m Gonna Be Exiled
Sent From This Planet Like An Unwanted Child
I’m Gonna Be Exiled By You
Dropped From Your Life Like A Bolt From The Blue
No More Music, No More Love
No More Laughter, None Of The Above
No More Failure And No More Luck
I’m About To Be Banish, I’ve Come Unstuck
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If I Fail, At Least I Failed Trying
If I Lose I Won’t Be Crying
If I Succeed Then I’ll Take The Praise
And Build Myself Up For The Media Craze
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But I’m Not Enough For The Judging Masses
Because They Just The World From Rose Coloured Glasses
They’ll Banish Me If I Fail This Time
But I’ll Take The Risk Because This Life Is Mine
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You Don’t See What I Can See
Because I Failed They’re Gonna Banish Me
Away From The World And Normality
I’m, I’m, I’m … I’m Gonna Be
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I’m Gonna Be Exiled
Sent From This Planet Like An Unwanted Child
I’m Gonna Be Exiled By You
Dropped From Your Life Like A Bolt From The Blue
No More Music, No More Love
No More Laughter, None Of The Above
No More Failure And No More Luck
I’m About To Be Banish, I’ve Come Unstuck
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You Don’t See What I Can See
Because I Failed They’re Gonna Banish Me
Away From The World And Normality
I’m, I’m, I’m … I’m Gonna Be
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I’m Gonna Be Exiled
Sent From This Planet Like An Unwanted Child
I’m Gonna Be Exiled By You
Dropped From Your Life Like A Bolt From The Blue
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#3 Posted : 29 August 2011 03:54:47(UTC)
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Michelle Goes Top 5 Again!


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After a few turbulent months of label switching, pushed back album dates and a flop single, Michelle Green returns to the Top 5 in the singles chart once again. "Exiled" which is the new lead single from the album of the same name went straight to No.4 in the charts today, making it her first Top 5 hit since "Red Symphony". The song also stands at No.21 in the Digital Download charts. Michelle's album "Exiled" will be released on Sunday with a Deluxe Edition following a few months later. The singer is said to be ecstatic about the success of the single and can't wait for all of you to hear her new album.
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THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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#4 Posted : 30 August 2011 04:54:46(UTC)
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No Fear, No Shame



Track Descrpition


The song starts of with 4 clicks of a pair of drum sticks before an aggressive drum beat kicks in alongside a violent strumming of an electric guitar. This sound carries through all the verses of the song. But in the chorus, the instruments become less urgent and calm down a lot to compliment Michelle's sweet sounding voice in the chorus. Michelle starts to sing 10 seconds into the song and starts by, almost screaming, the words "I'm not gonna smile for the cameras". The song almost sounds as it is being recorded live as it has a very raw edge to it. When the chorus begins with "No Fear, No Shame" Michelle's voice slows down and becomes more soothing. In the last verse, the guitar overpowers the drums and it almost sounds like she is singing a Rock 'N' Roll type of song. During the last 2 times she sings the chorus, her voice sounds louder and more stronger than in the previous choruses and a few high notes are thrown in to show her vocal range.

The song is about Michelle doing what she wants and being who she wants to be. She isn't worried about pleasing people or how people will perceive her, Michelle is just being herself and no one will stop her. The song is more aggressive than "Exiled" ,which kind of hinted that Michelle was angry about something but now she is letting rip!



Songwriter's Analysis

"I wrote this track after I finalised the original track-listing for the album back when it was titled 'Only When I'm Smiling'. I originally wanted it to be a b-side for a single but the song was just stuck in my head and it is so different to anything else I've done, in my opinion it deserved to be an album track. So I included it after I tore apart the album and mixed it up a bit. 'No Fear, No Shame' is a line from En Vogue's - 'You Don't Have To Worry' who I was listening a lot to at the time. I guess you could compare the song to 'Free Your Mind' by En Vogue as it has the same kind of attitude. This song probably won't be a single as it isn't exactly radio friendly with its aggressive lyrics and sound, but I don't care because I just want to make good music and make stuff that people enjoy. I must admit that my throat was killing me the day after I recorded this because I was basically screaming into a mic and doing high notes non-stop throughout this song, and I don't think I'll be performing this song live any time soon, I don't want to lose my voice on stage! The recording of this song did take a while but I love the final outcome."

- Michelle Green



I'm not gonna smile for the cameras
Or pose with a puppy or bat my lashes,
No no no more Ms. Nice Girl,
She's boring and doesn't like thrills
I don't care what they say,
I don't care what they do,
I'm me, all me, nothing can change that

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I ain't gonna be shy or naive
I'm a tough bitch, the almighty
Yeah yeah yeah I'm a rebel
Paparazzi love me, I'm trouble
I don't care what they print
I don't care what they think
I'm real, so real, nothing can change me

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Whoa whoa whoa
I'm free, I'm free
Oh Oh Oh
To be the real me, real me

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No Fear, No Shame
I don't give a...'bout what you say
No pain, No gain
I got here with hard work
No Fear, No shame
Everybody, everybody
No Fear, No shame
Everyone join me

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Just cos' I said I want you to die
Doesn't mean you have to go and spread lies
I I I'm not cocky,
I just love myself, cos' I'm the Queen Bee,
I don't care if you stare
I don't care, d-don't care
I'm hard, so hard, nothing can break me

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Whoa whoa whoa
I'm free, I'm free
Oh Oh Oh
To be the real me, real me

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No Fear, No Shame
I don't give a...'bout what you say
No pain, No gain
I got here with hard work
No Fear, No shame
Everybody, everybody
No Fear, No shame
Everyone join me

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Once you find yourself,
you just can't stop.
Find that confidence,
It will take you to the top.
I have no fear, no shame,
I'm the leader, playing my own game.
Just let me be who I am, who I'm not, who I wanna be!

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No Fear, No Shame
I don't give a...'bout what you say
No pain, No gain
I got here with hard work
No Fear, No shame
Everybody, everybody
No Fear, No shame
Everyone join me

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No Fear, No Shame
I don't give a...'bout what you say
No pain, No gain
I got here with hard work
No Fear, No shame
Everybody, everybody
No Fear, No shame
Everyone join me


SOUNDS LIKE;

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Aaron: I actually love you. No Fear, No Shame is amazing!


Michelle: Thanks so much Aaron, thanks for the love :)
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DANCE WITH DANGER


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Track Analysis


"Dance With Danger" starts off with a violin playing softly in the background. Michelle's voice slowly and smoothly sings over the violin for the first two verses. Her voice is very relaxed and singing softly, kind of like a singer in a small 1940's bar. She is singing almost seductively. Then, as the bridge to the chorus starts, the volume of her voice raises slightly and the violin starts becoming louder. By the time the chorus starts, a whole orchestra is playing alongside Michelle's strong emotional voice. As the next verse begins, the orchestra slowly fades but the strong violin is still going, complementing her voice greatly. The orchestra is again, in full swing during the chorus. In verse 3, her voice becomes more aggressive but still sounds beautiful. Michelle's vocals and the instruments speed up during verse 3 before returning to normal during the chorus. The song abruptly stops as soon as she sings the last word and one small violin note is played.


Songwriter's Comment


"This song is one of my favourites that I have ever done. I still remember writing it! One night I was watching this documentary on TV about a woman in America who is in love with her husband even though he is a really terrifying criminal but she can't stop herself from loving him. I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. So, that's what gave me inspiration to write it. I think this song is almost haunting because of the violin all the way through it from start to end but at the same time still feels uplifting when the whole orchestra plays. I think that this song is quite unique so that is why I chose to release this as a promo single for my fans to listen to while I was working on the album. It got such positive reception and I solely wrote the song which made me feel really proud."



Dance With Danger


Danger...have you ever danced with it?
Have you had it touch your skin?
Or breath right down your neck?

Have you ever had him next to you in bed?
A criminal who everyone fears.
He is dangerous but I don't care.

So I'll walk with him
Stand by his side
I'll share my first kiss with him
And have my last dance...

...with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
Holding it close to me
It is all that I can see
All I want to do is dance with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
I just want to dance with him...

A stranger....in the night
His mystery pulled me in so tight.
He is a 'bad one' that I love

So I'll walk with him
Stand by his side
I'll share my first kiss with him
And have my last dance...

...with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
Holding it close to me
It is all that I can see
All I want to do is dance with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
I just want to dance with him...

Waltz my last Waltz with him
Dance my last Dance with him
Live my whole life with him
We'll walk together and sing
Sing my last song with him
Share my last penny with him
Hold my hand in his

I just want to dance...

...with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
Holding it close to me
It is all that I can see
All I want to do is dance with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
I just want to dance with him...

...with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
Holding it close to me
It is all that I can see
All I want to do is dance with dange-e-er, dange-e-er
I just want to dance with him...


SOUNDS LIKE;

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THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
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YOU JUST LOST YOUR LOVER
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SNIPPET


After everything you've put me through
After all the tears have run down my face
It's about time I put you in your place
I just have some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time I find a better man
I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"
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THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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#12 Posted : 29 September 2011 05:56:44(UTC)
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SOLD MY SOUL


Track Analysis


"Sold My Soul" is the fourth track on the album and the second ballad. In fact it can even be called a power ballad due to Michelle's powerful and emotion filled vocals. The song is accompanied with a great heavy drum beat all the way through it. Michelle doesn't even give herself a chance to rest as it is high note after high note. 'Sold My Soul' is probably one of the oddest tracks on the album alongside "No Fear, No Shame" due to t's unique sound. The song is about Michelle comparing committing herself to music to selling her soul. This is due to the fact that it feels like people are constantly getting on at her and demanding her for more music.


Songwriters Comment


"This song is just like a big long rant (laughs). It is just letting all of my emotions and feeling come together and being let out in one big mammoth of a song. I let the aggression out in "No Fear, No Shame" but in this song I'm kind of explaining why I feel this way. I was always so shy and timid with my music and always wanting to please everyone but with this track I just completely went in head first and let my feelings do the writing, not caring how anyone else felt about the song. One thing that made me a bit apprehensive about people hearing the song was that it could seem a bit controversial, I mean after all, selling your soul to the devil is not everyday conversation. Also, when people heard the song when it leaked on YouTube there was a lot of comments saying 'She is with the Illuminati' and 'She sold her soul to the devil in exchange for success'. None of that is true, believe me! Anyway, I hope you all enjoy the song".



Sold My Soul


Little girl with the big voice
'You're next big thing kiddo!
It just felt like I....
....I just didn't have a choice.

Smile and wave at everyone
That feels like all I seem to do
Just trying to....
....to please everyone.

Why can't I just be me
And have some sense of normality?
Might as well have sold my soul
Cos' it's obvious that I'm not in control

So, I'll put pen to paper sell my soul
Might as well cos' I don't feel like myself
Everyone is shouting and demanding for Michelle
Who cares if she tired? What the hell!
I feel like all I do is put on show
Please everyone and then watch them go
It's clear that I have no control
I might as well have sold my soul

Crying my heart out but no one cares
They don't really give a damn,
Their only worry is....
.... is that I look goof live on air

Why can't I just be me
And have some sense of normality?
Might as well have sold my soul
Cos' it's obvious that I'm not in control

So, I'll put pen to paper sell my soul
Might as well cos' I don't feel like myself
Everyone is shouting and demanding for Michelle
Who cares if she tired? What the hell!
I feel like all I do is put on show
Please everyone and then watch them go
It's clear that I have no control
I might as well have sold my soul

Sell my soul, Sell my soul, Sell my soul, my soul
Sell my soul, Sell my soul, Sell my soul, my soul
Sell my soul, Sell my soul, Sell my soul, my soul

Working with Lucifer
To get my pay packet
Praying to demons
Just to have a number 1 smash hit,
Sorry but that's not for me
Now give me space to breathe
Just let me feel,
Free
Free
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

So, I'll put pen to paper sell my soul
Might as well cos' I don't feel like myself
Everyone is shouting and demanding for Michelle
Who cares if she tired? What the hell!
I feel like all I do is put on show
Please everyone and then watch them go
It's clear that I have no control
I might as well have sold my soul

So, I'll put pen to paper sell my soul
Might as well cos' I don't feel like myself
Everyone is shouting and demanding for Michelle
Who cares if she tired? What the hell!
I feel like all I do is put on show
Please everyone and then watch them go
It's clear that I have no control
I might as well have sold my soul




SOUNDS LIKE;
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PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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#13 Posted : 29 September 2011 06:24:49(UTC)
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ONLY WHEN I'M SMILING



Track Analysis


'Only When I'm Smiling' is a light yet meaningful song. The song has a very heavy R&B/Caribbean influence which is something Michelle has never done before. Although it has a nice tune and is sung very in a very uplifting tone, the lyrics are actually very meaningful. The track was recorded during phase 2 of the album and was supposed to be released as the second single instead of 'Soldier'. This song is more relaxed than all of the previous 4 tracks and is probably the most laid backed sounding track on the whole album.


Songwriters Comment


"This song is about a girl who has lots of emotional issues who tries to hide them from her boyfriend because she is scared that he will dump her because he won't be able to handle her feelings. In a way, I guess you could say this is sort of like I feel, well felt, towards the music industry; hiding my true self and feelings in order to please everyone else. This song was recorded halfway though the process or 'phase 2' as I call it. Phase 1 was when 'Dance With Danger' and a few early tracks were recorded, and 'phase 2' was when I wanted to call the album "Only When I'm Smiling" and now "phase 3" is where we are now. Anyway, I felt that this song was really memorable and wanted it to be the lead single or second single. But circumstances changed things"




You're a great man
The best I could've wished for
I just don't want to troubled you, that's all
You just don't it, when I'm feeling ****
You don't need all that trouble

I'll call you
when I'm feeling better
And we can chill like we usually do.
I just don't want to be a burden;
when I'm sad, I tend to bring everyone else down

Don't worry, my baby
It ain't your fault
It's just because I'm always like this
When I'm better, I'll give you a call

I want to see ya,
Only when I'm smiling
Cos' I don't wanna put you down.
I want to hold ya,
Only when I'm happy,
I don't wanna have you worried, running round.
I just want you to see the best in me
Cos' I don't want to bother you when I'm unhappy
I just want us to make the most it
Wear a smile and go along with it.
Oh boy, I just want to see ya
Only when I'm smiling.

Kiss my cheek,
And you'll make me feel uplifted
Like you always do, must be a gift.
I just hope you don't mind
If I keep my feeling to myself

Don't worry, my baby
It ain't your fault
It's just because I'm always like this
When I'm better, I'll give you a call

I want to see ya,
Only when I'm smiling
Cos' I don't wanna put you down.
I want to hold ya,
Only when I'm happy,
I don't wanna have you worried, running round.
I just want you to see the best in me
Cos' I don't want to bother you when I'm unhappy
I just want us to make the most it
Wear a smile and go along with it.
Oh boy, I just want to see ya
Only when I'm smiling.

Oh yeah, I know you wanna look out for me
But honey, please!
Just let me do this on my own and you'll see;
that I will come round in time.
Please don't think it's you
That's making me hide away
I just don't want you to see me sad
I just want to see you only when I'm smiling

I want to see ya,
Only when I'm smiling
Cos' I don't wanna put you down.
I want to hold ya,
Only when I'm happy,
I don't wanna have you worried, running round.
I just want you to see the best in me
Cos' I don't want to bother you when I'm unhappy
I just want us to make the most it
Wear a smile and go along with it.
Oh boy, I just want to see ya
Only when I'm smiling.

[20 Second Instrumental Until End]


SOUNDS LIKE;

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PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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#14 Posted : 29 September 2011 06:50:20(UTC)
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YOU DRIVE ME CRAZY


Track Analysis


The song has a very fast paced electro beat all the way through it. Michelle sings non stop and gives her most upbeat performance yet. The song contains deliberately over auto tuned verses to make Michelle sound robotic as she has never worked with auto tune before, she thought that she might as well have fun with it. Michelle write this track alongside ex-Brown Sugar member, Una Harvey. During the chorus, the auto tune dies down but hints of it are still there. The whole song was written and recorded with in 3 hours.


Songwriter's Comment


"This is one of the more 'fun' tracks on the album. I have never really done any dance stuff what so ever so I really wanted to go all out on this. It is very catchy and I sometimes find myself singing it. This song was written by myself and the amazing Una Harvey, who is a terrific woman who is very underrated in the business, it is a shame because she could be up there with the greatest. This song was brought in towards the end of recorded. I wrote this song with Una after I was unhappy with the second draft of the album and I wanted the album to be a mix of genres because the original draft sounded just like my debut album and the second draft was a bit too 'preachy'."


You Drive Me Crazy


Give me time, boy
Let me think, boy
You're always around me
Hardly any space to breathe
You got me going stir crazy
Cos I feel so trapped with you

Just back off-off-off-off
Let me have some time to myself
I feel like I'm totally trapped
And there's nothing I can do

You got me going crazy
I don't feel like I wanna be your lady
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Boy!
You've got me feeling demented
One day I'm gonna see red (and go)
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Yeah!

You drive me crazy
You drive me crazy

Go away, son
I don't want none
Of your hugging;
kissing and loving
I feel so smothered
I just want to get some air

Just back off-off-off-off
Let me have some time to myself
I feel like I'm totally trapped
And there's nothing I can do

You got me going crazy
I don't feel like I wanna be your lady
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Boy!
You've got me feeling demented
One day I'm gonna see red (and go)
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Yeah!

You drive me crazy
You drive me crazy

You got me going crazy
I don't feel like I wanna be your lady
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Boy!
You've got me feeling demented
One day I'm gonna see red (and go)
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Yeah!

You drive me crazy
You drive me crazy


I slowly pack my stuff
Whilst you're not looking
Slip out the back door
And run down the street and scream
'Freedom-dom-dom-da-dom'
'Freedom-dom-dom-da-dom'

You got me going crazy
I don't feel like I wanna be your lady
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Boy!
You've got me feeling demented
One day I'm gonna see red (and go)
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Yeah!

You drive me crazy
You drive me crazy

You got me going crazy
I don't feel like I wanna be your lady
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Boy!
You've got me feeling demented
One day I'm gonna see red (and go)
CRA-A-ZY
CRA-A-ZY
Yeah!

You drive me crazy
You drive me crazy

SOUNDS LIKE'
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PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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Stephanie Fierce: Outstanding album. Really love the songs!


OOC: Good job writing this so far, amazing lyrics as well :)
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YOU JUST LOST YOUR LOVER (FT. RYAN ROSS HERNANDEZ)


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Track Analysis


"You Just Lost Your Lover" is a fun up tempo track. Straight away you are already smiling when the playful drum and guitar start playing and Michelle's voice starts singing. The drum and guitar happily strut along all the way through the song and gives it a very quirky and uplifting sound. Michelle and Ryan's vocals also seem very uplifted and happy, as they sing together and complement each others vocals amazingly. During the pre-choruses, the guitar is more prominent then as we glide into the chorus everything kicks in; the amazing voices, the drum and symbols alongside the awesome guitar. This song has 3 completely different versions; a demo solo version, this pop/jazz version and an R&B Part 2 version of the song.



Songwriter's Comments


"This song is another favourite of mine. I mean, it has a great instrumental, fun lyrics and Ryan Ross Hernandez all wrapped together in it! What more could you ask for? This version is different to the promo of the song that I released. This one obviously has the amazing RRH oh it but this one is also a lot more upbeat. I recorded this track with Ryan near the beginning of the whole "Exiled" era, I think that this song, 'Exiled' and 'Dance With Danger' are the only original songs that I've kept from the album's first draft because they just felt special for some reason. If this was to be released as a single, I could just imagine a very fun and wacky music video for it! 'You Just Lost Your Lover' was great to record and working with Ryan was an absolute pleasure."




You Just Lost Your Lover


Michelle
Ryan
Both



After everything you've put me through
After all the tears have run down my face
It's about time I put you in your place
I just have some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time I find a better man
I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"

We always had that special bond
You loved me to infinity and beyond,
You made me feel on top of the world
But something nasty got right into you
And it tore me in two
I just didn't know what to do

But I found the light,
I found the strength to fight,
Don't come crawling back
Cos' I've moved and not going back

After everything you've put me through
After all the tears have run down my face
It's about time I put you in your place
I just have some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time I find a better man
I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"


She needs a better man like me
Who can hold her, make her happy as can be
I'll make her feel on top of the world
I will tend to her every time she calls
And I won't turn out like you, cos' I'm no fool
I'm just happy with my girl, we're playing it cool.

Yeah, she found the light
She has the strength to fight
Don't go crawling back to her
Or you'll have to go through me first


After everything you've put me through
After all the tears have run down my face
It's about time I put you in your place
I just have some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time I find a better man
I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"


I have found a man who can treat me right,
He knows how to be a gentleman.

I've found the greatest girl in the world,
She just has the most perfect smile,

In this world of lost lovers, broken hearted people
We found each other
(each other)
Thank God, I lost my old lover.

After everything you've put me through
After all the tears have run down my face
It's about time I put you in your place
I just have some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time I find a better man
I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"


After everything you've put her through
After all the tears have ran down her face
It was about time she put you in your place
She just has some words say;
"You just lost your lover today".
After all the drama had ended
After all doors have been slammed
It's about time she found a better man

I just want to tell you that;
"You just lost your lover; fact!"


SOUNDS LIKE;

Edited by user 30 September 2011 05:42:18(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

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JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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THEY BUILD US UP, TO WATCH US FALL (FT. KATIE COYLE)


Track Analysis


OOC: THE AMAZING TRACK ANALYSIS AND COMMENT IS CREDITED TO GENOCIDAL KING


The track They Build Us Up, To Watch Us Fall is a very cheery guitar based indie pop song based around the notion of how one can get built up so high as an artist and public figure, and yet have everyone try to tear them down from grace at the same time. The subject matter may seem strange to some, considering how happy the music sounds, but the end of the song is all about overcoming that oppressive attitude from media, controlling label bosses and other people in the industry to just be yourself, so, eventually at least, the happy nature of the music does actually correspond to the message within.
The track begins with an open strum across all six strings of the acoustic guitar, followed by a brief pause, and then Michelle counts "1,2,3,4" softly as she taps out four quiet beats on the hollow body of guitar. She then plays a funky, bright and airy little guitar riff which consists of quickly strummed happy sounding chords and the occasional single picked note, which somehow just manages to sound "summery".
This is replaced eventually by single chords played over the reasonably fast opening verse. The chords are not as major in key as in the intro, but they aren't exactly low in key either, just almost neutral. Michelle's voice in this song is a lot higher than in previous tracks, and allows her the chance to really show off a range of vocal ability. The pace at which the track moves and progresses, along with the varying vocal keys really showcases Michelle's skill. The first verse is sung with a quick, punchy vocal, and she launches into the second, with only a slight pause, and no change in style.
As the chorus approaches, Michelle lets out a slight "wooo", and the key change is quite dramatic. The chords are now definitely more upbeat and played very quickly. She strums them with a strength and vigour, which gives a real "ping" to the end of each strum, and adds to the energetic atmosphere. Despite the music speeding up considerably for the chorus, the only real change in the vocal pattern comes from the fact that it is a lot happier sounding. The tone of Michelle's voice is a lot cheerier and gives an image of her smiling to the listener and really enjoying the song.
There is no particularly obscure structure to the song. The simplicity is where it's beauty lies. It mostly continues in this style, as above, with two verses to each chorus, or one, until it reaches the final verse, which begins "They Look At You With Mild Disdain", at which point the guitar is phased out, and Michelle's voice is left standing alone. This mirrors the message of song in some ways, as it suggests a feeling of exposure and loneliness and being the target for everyone, with nowhere to hide. She sings this verse very slowly, and in a minor key. Her voice is soft, and sounds very sad, as she slowly meanders through a continuous vocal (there are no apparent line breaks, which allows it to sound more flowing and sad). This continues until the beginning of the last line, when one hard strum of the acoustic guitar chord heralds Michelle's triumphant final line, "Please Don't Give It Up Without A Fight!" She sings it with a pleading, almost call to arms. It sounds as if she is trying to really say something to people who feel like they are alone, or targeted in this way.
The track ends with a repeated "bridge" section, which is played over slowly strummed chords. Michelle's voice is slow and soft throughout. When the vocals finish, the track is bookended by the same open string strum on the guitar.


Songwriter's Comment


"This track is one of the most important tracks on the album to me. The whole meaning of the song is very personal. This song was written at first because of how I felt at Shooting Stars. I know Malory [Evans, former SSR boss] thinks I was having a go at her personally when I left, but I really wasn't. I just felt that to be at Shooting Star, you had to be on a pedestal all the time. They want to build real bona fide pop stars and divas, the kind that people love to see fall down. As I've said before, I just cannot subscribe to that model. I've never been around it, and so it made me uncomfortable. Getting Katie to feature on it was amazing, as she could relate to the song in many ways because I don't think that anyone has had as many falls as Katie, but I'm glad she's back to her old self. I hope you enjoy this track because me and Katie put a lot of effort into it and we did our best to please you all".




They Build Us Up, To Watch Us Fall


OOC: ALL LYRICS ARE CREDITED TO C4AJOH AND GENOCIDAL KING



Michelle
Katie
Both


You Are Our New Hope
Something To Believe In Is What They Said
You’re the Future Of The Industry
But We’ll Only Be Admired Once We’re Dead


We Only Aim For What We Can
I Wanted You To Know Just What I Do
Alliances In Good Times Always Stand
To Me In The End They All Fall Through

(chorus)
They Build Us Up, So Tall So High
We Feel So Brave, We Try To Fly
The Wax In Our Wings, Melts In The Sun
They Drag Us Down To Crash And Burn


And Now I’ve Achieved What I Planned
I Crossed The Barriers And Broke On Through
Through To This Promised Land
And They Just Build Us Up


Dreams Stand Tall And Strong Inside
In My Mind They're So Close To My Reach
But In Reality Dreams Are Meant To Hide
As Weak As Houses Built On A Beach


They Build Us Up, So Tall So High
We Feel So Brave, We Try To Fly
The Wax In Our Wings, Melts In The Sun
They Drag Us Down To Crash And Burn


They Build And Build And Build Us Up
Then They Knock Us Back Down
They Put Us On A Pedestal
But I’m Keeping This Damn Crown


They Build Us Up, So Tall So High
We Feel So Brave, We Try To Fly
The Wax In Our Wings, Melts In The Sun
They Drag Us Down To Crash And Burn


Paparazzi Following You
In The Hope To See You Fall
The Bridges That We’ve Built And Magic That We’ve Made
Don’t Seem To Stand For Nothing, Nothing At All


They Look At You With Mild Disdain
Remember When Your Future Looked So Bright
You Thought You Were Controlling This Game
Please Don't Give It Up Without A Fight!


They Build Us Up, So Tall So High
We Feel So Brave, We Try To Fly
The Wax In Our Wings, Melts In The Sun
They Drag Us Down To Crash And Burn


Well They … They Just Build Us Up
Just … Just To Watch Us Fall
We’ll Find Our Way
And We’ll Have It All


They Build Us Up
Just To Watch Us Fall
We’ll Find Our Way
And We’ll Have It All


SOUNDS LIKE

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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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#19 Posted : 01 October 2011 06:40:28(UTC)
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NIGHTLIFE



Track Analysis


"Nightlife" begins with a soft synth playing that gradually gets louder. At around 14 seconds into the track, Michelle starts to sing. The opening line; "The night life is my haven" will immediately grab your attention and will make you want to keep on listening to Michelle's sultry voice and the great beat. When the chorus kicks in; the beat is jumping and Michelle is singing her whole heart out, creating an almost anthem of a song. 'Nightlife' is generally just a fun track with no sentimental feelings behind like usual Michelle stuff, this one is just a true party tune. This was one of the last songs added to the album.



Songwriter's Comment


"Well, 'Nightlife' came about when I was reading some comments left on my official YouTube channel and they were saying stuff like; 'Michelle, you should do some dance music cos' you would sound awesome!' and other comments weren't as nice like; 'Michelle is so boring, her music is too mushy. Suzie is so much better!', So I just wanted to prove to people that I can have fun with my music. I know that a previous track 'You Drive Me Crazy' was a dance track but that still had the meaning of a bad relationship behind it, where as this song is just about having fun! It was great to record and I feel that it helped to lift up the whole album."


Nightlife


The night life is my haven
I love the way it makes me feel
The atmosphere gives me a thrill
And I'll be staying out until dawn breaks
But I'll still be wide awake, jumping all over the place

Tick Tick Tock on my watch
The hours flying past but we're still having a blast
It's the night life, baby
It gets you so hooked, it's all you can think about

You know I just love the night life
I get so excited when I party outside
Just now I just want to dance
I just love the night life
It makes me wanna move
I just love the night life

And now it's 2 in the morn'
But I'm not planning on turning in
I'm on a high, ready to begin
I'll be singing under street lights
Acting a little bit foolish, but I'm happy doing it

Beat Beat Beat goes my heart
Pumping so fast, I wish that this rush will last
It's the night life, honey
It has me hooked, It's all I can think about

You know I just love the night life
I get so excited when I party outside
Just now I just want to dance
I just love the night life
It makes me wanna move
I just love the night life

In the dark
The animals come out
Under the full moon
We all dance and shout
Now just turn the tune up
And watch us roll
As soon as the sun comes up,
It's time for us to go

You know I just love the night life
I get so excited when I party outside
Just now I just want to dance
I just love the night life
It makes me wanna move
I just love the night life

You know I just love the night life
I get so excited when I party outside
Just now I just want to dance
I just love the night life
It makes me wanna move
I just love the night life





SOUNDS LIKE;
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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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PUSH ME SO FAR


Track Analysis


'Push Me So Far' is one of the more relaxed songs on the album. It starts of with a very tranquil sounding low synth and a smooth low dream beat playing together. At 20 seconds into the song, Michelle starts singing in a beauty laid back voice as if she is in a meditated state. The smooth drum beat continues throughout the song and the synth becomes ever so louder. 'Push Me So Far' is an R&B track, something that Michelle is experimenting with and it is really paying off. In the 20 second instrumental part, the synth comes into play even more creating a more dance oriented sound. When the chorus starts again the music return to its original smooth and relaxing sound.


Songwriter's Comment


"I must say that this song was one of my favourites whilst recording. It is so laid back and I had a really great vibe the first time that I heard it. Originally, the song was for another artist but I grabbed it, haha. This is the only track on the album that I didn't write but I did however tweak some of the original lyrics. I knew that when I was re-working 'Exiled' that I needed another R&B track and this one just fitted perfectly, so once I heard that the song had been given to me, I was over the moon. I think that this song would be awesome if it was mixed by two awesome people *cough-Buzz & Hype-cough* but I'm still happy with the way it is. I hope that everyone enjoys this song as much as I do!"

You can only hurt me so much'
Before I turn untouchable
And the blows won't hurt (oh no)
You can push me so far
Before I dive overboard
And swim away from you,
I won't stand for this any more
I'm turning the key and walking out the door

Love. That's what I needed,
I turned to you when I was hurt
Thinking you'd supply it,
But I was so dumb, so wrong and stupid
You used me like a tissue
And disposed of me when I raised issues

You. You, just couldn't take it,
I wanted some affection,
But you only wanted to..
..Boss me around, order me and slag me
You silly little man
I hope that God strikes you down

Oh-uh-oh, Oh-uh-oh
You went and pushed me right over the edge
No-oh-oh, No-oh-oh
No I don't love you, I'm so glad I left

You can only hurt me so much'
Before I turn untouchable
And the blows won't hurt (oh no)
You can push me so far
Before I dive overboard
And swim away from you,
I won't stand for this any more
I'm turning the key and walking out the door

Hate. That's what I feel t'wards you`
I can't believe I trusted you
With my whole heart, emotions and feelings
I'm so glad you pushed me
Now I'm finally free

Oh-uh-oh, Oh-uh-oh
You went and pushed me right over the edge
No-oh-oh, No-oh-oh
No I don't love you, I'm so glad I left

You can only hurt me so much'
Before I turn untouchable
And the blows won't hurt (oh no)
You can push me so far
Before I dive overboard
And swim away from you,
I won't stand for this any more
I'm turning the key and walking out the door

[20 Seconds Instrumental]

You can only hurt me so much'
Before I turn untouchable
And the blows won't hurt (oh no)
You can push me so far
Before I dive overboard
And swim away from you,
I won't stand for this any more
I'm turning the key and walking out the door

You can only hurt me so much'
Before I turn untouchable
And the blows won't hurt (oh no)
You can push me so far
Before I dive overboard
And swim away from you,
I won't stand for this any more
I'm turning the key and walking out the door



SOUNDS LIKE;
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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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