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Offline GirlSpice  
#1 Posted : 30 December 2011 01:16:43(UTC)
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Steven walked in, staring down at a weak, near-anorexic body that stared up at him, one look into her eyes alone showed that she was fragile and broken inside. He smiled.

"I bet all your little fans are missing their Vanity, aren't they? I've read the fan forums. Talking about how great a next album would have been, what you would have achieved, the performances you would have done..."

She closed her eyes as he ran his hand through her hair. Part of her just wanted to push him away, run out of the room and find some way of escaping, she knew Steven had already made the house like some sort of maze, she could hear him coming every time, he'd have to unlock a dozen or so locks just to get to her. They were all around the house, what chance did she have? Just thinking of it all drained her, she just didn't have the energy anymore, she'd already tried to escape and it only left her with a load of bruises over her body. He seemed pretty pleased with himself. She was sick of being some sort of doll he could torture whenever he pleased, the last time he kidnapped her, she swore that she wouldn't let this happen to herself again.

"Why don't you speak to me, huh? We used to have such a good time together, don't you remember?"

He wore the most smug smile she'd ever seen, she hated it, having to look at that for these past six months had made her go slightly insane. She tried to always see the light in the situation, sometimes she'd even slightly laugh to herself in this dull, grey room, thinking "Well, it can't get any worse than this" and, "These situations are gonna make for some great lyrics for a new album one day", she didn't even know if she was getting out, but she had to keep hoping. She knew she'd kill herself if she didn't keep reminding herself about the things she loved most in life.

"We always have a good time, we do, we really do."

She thought back to a few days ago, she couldn't remember exactly how long ago it was, what was the point in keeping up with the date and time? The world had simply stopped for her, as she slowly rotted away in this small, enclosed space. In fact, it was quite nice for a little while not to worry about the time, or where to get to, what to do, time was always some sort of barrier for her, preventing us all from achieving what we want to, it's like a countdown. And once the countdown is over, there's no second chances.

His greasy face right next to hers, biting at her neck as his rough stubble brushed against her skin like sandpaper, she whimpered, her hands were held out, open, touching his shoulders, but she didn't have the power to push him off. He reached down and grabbed her exposed breasts, as he forced his way inbetween her legs, his spare arm locked around her neck, holding her down as she could barely breathe. She shook her head, wanting to erase the memory.

It wasn't the first time he'd done such a thing to her, in fact, it'd become something she expected every time he walked into the room. She no longer had the fight in her, the last time she did, she'd gotten a fist to the face and a black eye. Of course, a black eye was better than twenty minutes of the torture he'd put her through, but she got to a point where she simply stopped caring about anything. She had even offered herself to him once, asking him to let her go in return, he took the offer, but never let her go. Deep down, she knew that's what he'd do.

"What are you thinking about?"

He shouldn't ask questions that he wouldn't like the answer to.
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#2 Posted : 30 December 2011 01:18:52(UTC)
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OOC: Round of applause. Can't wait to see where this goes. Seriously brilliant start allowing just enough of a story to shine through while keeping it a mystery :)

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#3 Posted : 30 December 2011 01:24:19(UTC)
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OOC: Thank you! That means a lot considering you're amazing when it comes to story writing. :)
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#4 Posted : 30 December 2011 02:14:08(UTC)
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OOC: Whoa, that was seriously incredible. Keep up with this, I'm super excited to see where it all goes!
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OOC: I'm extremely excited for this, well written! Miss Vanity will always be one of my favorite characters that you created :)
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#6 Posted : 30 December 2011 02:46:36(UTC)
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#7 Posted : 30 December 2011 05:33:36(UTC)
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#8 Posted : 30 December 2011 08:12:23(UTC)
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OOC: It's definately amazing! It's so well written and easy to read! Looking forward to read more and so glad about Miss Vanity being still alive!


MY ACTIVE ACTS
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#9 Posted : 30 December 2011 11:51:56(UTC)
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OOC: Can't believe I missed this before. This was greatly written and made for a very good read. Looking forward to seeing how this evolves.
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#10 Posted : 02 January 2012 11:11:55(UTC)
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She heard his footsteps growing closer to the door. Three, two, one... it opened. Steven looked worried, he was slightly red in the face, covered in sweat. He hurried over to her, pulling at her arm to make her stand. She barely had the energy to, he'd feed her the bare minimum once a day, and that was only if she was lucky and he was in a good mood. Her weak, fragile body refused her to stand.

"Get up. They've found out... the police have found out."

It was the words she had been longing to hear, she knew they would find out sooner or later. She would have preferred it sooner rather than the past six months she had been waiting, but she was just glad more than anything. Staying silent, she tried with all her power to stand as he dragged her out of the room. Steven covered her mouth, walking up and down, he had no clue what to do, beginning to panic. He had to make an escape, his eyes looked over to the boarded-up door.

He pulled at her, covering her mouth. What was the point? She didn't have any intention on saying a word or screaming for help. Maybe she was just bored of trying. Stepping out the back in her bare feet and along the dark alley, she hadn't been outside in months, she seemed to appreciate everything more now. She took a deep breath and took in the colours around her, the dull room she had been trapped in had made her almost breathless at such a simple thing. It was the most ordinary of things now that made everything seem clear. She had to find a way to escape from him, his hands still tightly gripping her wrists.

She heard a car drive down the open road that was in sight, Steven poked his head around the corner of the alley and gasped slightly. He turned around and pulled Vanity violently, trying to go back in the direction they just came in, she fell as he knelt down and whispered to her, trying to pull her back up.

"Get up, fucking get up. I'm not playing around. I'll kill you. Now get up."

It was then she became desperate for some help, the thought of being locked away again was her biggest fear. Being out in the open finally made her realise that this was her only chance. She knew the police were there, seeing the red and blue police lights flash onto the brick walls beside her, they felt so close, yet miles away at this point. She went to scream, but he suddenly covered her mouth in time; beginning to drag backwards as water filled her eyes, reaching out to try and cling onto something that she couldn't find.
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#11 Posted : 02 January 2012 11:15:42(UTC)
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#12 Posted : 02 January 2012 11:20:22(UTC)
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#13 Posted : 03 January 2012 07:02:07(UTC)
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"You wanted to scream and get away, didn't you? What did I tell you about trying to get away?"

His angry eyes stared into hers, she whimpered, laying hopelessly on the cold ground. He pulled her hair violently, before pushing her away as her head was forced down onto the concrete, holding her head in pain. She didn't move, tears falling from her eyes at the thought of an escape being just around the corner from here, down the alley and right onto the open road where the police were, she knew if she tried anything again, Steven would probably finish her off, her thin, lifeless body couldn't handle anything else.

He forced her up by her hair with one hand, his other covering her mouth, forcing her further down another back street, she saw him heading towards a car, knowing clearly what his plan was. He was gonna find some other location to hide away at and lock her up once again. He hurriedly opened the car door and tried to push her in quickly, her hands placed anywhere on the outside of the car to stop herself from going in. He kicked at her legs to try and get her to go in, but she simply fell back down onto the concrete, screaming out for help. It was now or never, she had to do something.

Steven looked down the road, waiting any moment for a whole group of police officers to race down it.

"You stupid bitch, you're gonna regret that."

With no one else in sight, he let out a sigh of relief, and then attempted to pull Vanity up again. His wrists were suddenly gripped harshly from behind as he let go of her, they were pulled behind his back and handcuffed. He turned around to see the one sight he didn't want to see. They were there. It was over.
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#14 Posted : 03 January 2012 07:19:14(UTC)
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OOC: I so wish i could get into character right now and shun his ass :P Seriously though, this is fantastic. Really loved reading this.
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#15 Posted : 03 January 2012 07:36:37(UTC)
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#16 Posted : 03 January 2012 07:45:11(UTC)
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