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#1 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:04:11(UTC)
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HUNGER
OPPORTUNITY
DRIVE
STARFACTORY!





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After the banner pops up and opening track plays, you are brought to a huge arena with many fans all sitting in the audience, cheering for the night. You then see a man walking from the staircase walkway that bring you from floor two of the stage to the main stage. It's Damion Holmes, he has a smile on her face as he walks down the steps and to center stage smoothly with a gray tuxedo on. A smile on his face. When he finds his way to center stage he brings the mic to his mouth


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Welcome to STARFACTORY!!!!!!!


After the crowd pops in cheer, he runs his hands through his hands

"I mean, wow, this is going to be a big show, we are searching for the next big musician, who wouldn't want that?!"


"BUT, this won't be able to happen without the amazing judges/mentor, each special in their own way"


Automatically, a spot in the audience, above the fans are, a spotlight is shown with seats all placed next to each other, unable to see who is behind them.



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"The first mentor, is known for his slick attitude, and the musical talent he posses, seemingly shooting to the top of the musical charts at such a young age, and having the creativity of someone in the business that's twice his age, everyone, HAYDEN MERJOS!


Hayden's seat turns around and the crowd starts cheering


"The next mentor, she has become one of the most creative and recognized female's in recent history. Her last album 'Waking Up' became one of the best selling of 2011, and if it's not her beautiful voice that shows us she's a wonderful artist, then maybe you should hear her play the piano....everyone, ALICIA LENA!


Alicia's seat then turns around, the crowd also cheers


"The next mentor, has become one of the most successful young stars of our time. Her album The Voice Of Me has broken records, and her sophomore album "Exiled" showed us that debut's don't always write out a stars career as the album has become one of the most respected albums in years, with platinum plaques under her name that stars twice her age don't get and a voice to die for, give it up for MICHELLE GREEN!"


Michelle's seat, also turns around, cheering continues



"Our next mentor, has become one of the most recognized and successful females in the industry. After her sophomore effort, 'Halfway There' made her one of the most popular acts around, with the album becoming the longest running album of 2010 and pushing out 3 #1's, its not all about the sales however, she also possesses creative excellence in her music and with millions of records sold in her twenties, this female looks to only be going stronger, EVERYONE, BRITTANY KNOX!"



Brittany's seat turns around, and the crowd cheers


"And last but not least, this man knows what success is. Being the powerhouse behind legendary label, Chaos Records, or being the leading mean of Blood of Wecz, this man knows what success, money, and monopoly is. With respect in the industry and money at his fingers...everyone, SCOTT R.H!!!!"


Scott chair then turns around, after, a spotlight goes on Damion Holmes





"This week the contestants had to take part in Mentor Mayhem, this challenge consisted of making a cover of each contestants respectable mentors songs. Each mentor had to do the job of helping their act pull this off....EVERYONE, the first performer of the night, GIVE IT UP FOR KELI...O'..DAYYYYYYYYY!!!!"



1:00 - Damion Holmes Opening
1:10 - KELI O'DAY Performance
1:15 - 1:25 JUDGES
1:30 - EDWARD BARÁT Performance
1:35 - 1:45 JUDGES
1:50 - CASEY JOHNSON Performance
1:55 - 2:05 JUDGES
2:10 - AUBREY MIKKEL Performance
2:15 - 2:25 JUDGES
2:30 - ELMNT Performance
2:35 - 2:45 JUDGES
2:50 - MIDNIGHT COFFEE RUN Performance
2:55 - 3:05 JUDGES
3:10 - LASHES Performance
3:15 - 3:25 JUDGES
3:30 - ASHLEY GRIMMIE Performance
3:35 - 3:45 JUDGES
3:50 - THE DEVIL YOU KNOW Performance
3:55 - 4:05 JUDGES

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#2 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:10:15(UTC)
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Keli O'Day - Take Me On



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Last week was really stressful, I just couldn't quite find the right song and I just picked a random one at the last minute. I also found myself in the bottom lineage which really shook me. Thankfully I still got to choose my mentor and I picked the lovely Hayden. People say he is difficult to work with but he is a great mentor and really knows what I'm about. The song I will be singing is Hayden's 'Take Me On'. I love this song because the lyrics are great and it has that whole relaxed acoustic guitar thing going on and I just love the sound of the guitar. Hayden has been a great help and has been so supportive, I don't care what people say but once you get to know Hayden he is a playful little kitten. I'm going to ive it my all and make my mentor proud!


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Ooooooooh, yeah, yeah, yeah

[Verse 1]
It happened one warm summer night
The wind and rain collided right
Below the stars and fell all over me

I saw it all before my eyes
How she used the gray to twist the sky
And the flash of light to cut the rolling sea

And on top of the hill where God sits on his throne
A gentle giant wave appeared and took him down below

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[Chorus]
Take me on
All alone, take me on take me on
All of life take me on, take me onnn, love take me on, take me on, onn take me on, take me on
Take me on, ohhh take me on

[Verse 2]
As the wave came close I tried to flee
But it swept me right off my feet
And a gentle touch pulled me down below

There were dolphins dancing everywhere
And mermaids with red glowing hair
And God shone on his throne like the sun

Passing wisdom trees filled with golden leaves
I could feel the warmth of a perfect melody

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[Chorus]
Take me on!
All of life take me on, take me onn,
All of life take me on, take me onnn onnn all life take me on, take me on
Yeah Yeah take me on

Bluuue, blue Ve-elv, velvet Sea
Bluuue, Ve-elv, velvet Sea

Overhead twelve fairies flew
And lit the sky green, red and blue
And the stars rearranged just for you

Take me on, take me on, take me on, take me on, take me on

Take me on


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[[OOC: Sorry for the lack of detail, had so many computer problems and honestly this was just thrown together in the space of ten minutes]]

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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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#3 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:15:28(UTC)
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GIVE IT UP FOR....KELIIIIII O'DAYYYY!!!!!



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#4 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:18:18(UTC)
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Brittany smiles after watching her


Brittany: Awwwwww, this was such a good performance. I think the emotion you have when you perform is really special and I think your just a great singer. The only thing I would say is that your nerves seem to get the best of you and certain parts may come across as pitchy. Don't let the nerves get the best of you because your an excellent singer. So other than your nerves, excellent performance!!
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#5 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:19:37(UTC)
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Hayden: I thought it was a very great song, first of all, sounds like it should have been a real hit. (Clears his throat and grins) But anyway, I thought overall it was a great performance. Your tone and the song matched up, your vocals were amazing, I could almost say you sung it better than I did, almost. I would say that there's a little room for some improvement because while playing an acoustic song, you have to be careful. It's not one of the most energetic songs and that's okay but I'd suggest maybe adding some of your own 'swag' into it and make it your own song, other than that incredible job and I'm very pleased with the outcome of our practice sessions. (Smiles)
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Alicia: That was a good performance Keli and it was a nice way to open the show. I think after being in the bottom lineage last week probably put a little more pressure on you more than the other acts and being the first performer tonight would have surely added to the pressure but I think that you came out and gave a strong performance. I think your song choice this week was a perfect fit for you and I hope to see more from you in the competition, I think you can be pleased with your efforts this week.
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Michelle: Aren't you talented!? I must say that you did the original version justice....I'd say better than the original. *winks at Hayden*. I'm going to agree on what Hayden said about adding your own 'swag', it was a great performance but I want to see what Keli can do, it seemed more like a direct copy of the song. I'm sure that you will continue to grow and explore more with your music and I just can't wait to see more of Ms O'Day!
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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
JAMIE JACKSON • KONSTANTIN • FAYETTE • SAYYID


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#8 Posted : 30 April 2012 03:29:31(UTC)
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Damion appears back on the stage


Thank you Judges, and once again, give it up for KELI ODAY! I like that name by the way, its nice *smiles at Keli*. The next performer, is pretty confident about his time here on Starfactory, can he live up to the expectations? GIVE IT UP FOR ....EDWARD BARÁT!!!!
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EDWARD BARÁT – STARFACTORY PERFORMANCE
29 April, 2012
Brittany Knox - Me Against The World

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PRE-SHOW


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“I think the show last week was quite good and I got the opportunity to showcase the type of music that I’d like to create in the future and it was great to be chosen by Brittany Knox because she’s a judge that I think I relate to more than perhaps the other judges because when she broke out into the industry people initially judged her on her image and she dealt with a lot of judgement, but she proved people wrong and became one of the biggest stars in the world. I think Brittany is the ideal mentor for me and this week I get to show a different side to me, I’ll be performing one of Brittany’s biggest tracks and it’s an opportunity to show a certain amount of diversity this week which is something that I’m looking forward to.
Earlier in the week I sat down with Brittany to go through her back catalogue of music and I was amazed by the diversity that she has an artist, it definitely surprised me that she’s actually drifted in and out of rock music in a large portion of her songs and there was actually a lot more songs that I felt fit me, but when we discussed ‘Me Against The World’ it was 100% clear to me that this is the best song for me to perform, it has a nice rock sounding backdrop and there’s a lot of space to manoeuvre vocally and lyrically it speaks to me a lot, it’s definitely the type of song that I could see me releasing in the future.”


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LIVE PERFORMANCE

As the lights dim a little and the announcer calls out the name of Edward Barát to the stage, the anticipation builds slowly and the audience cheer lightly as Edward makes his way through the backstage area and onto the large stage in front of the capacity audience and the five judges including his own mentor Brittany Knox, as he makes his way to the centre of the stage he nods at Brittany and gives a small smile to her as they’ve worked together for the past week on choosing the right song and changing the arrangement a little, the lights dim even further, making the whole room a lot more darkened with the exception of the stage area where backlights and a spotlight shine on the dark haired individual, he brushes his hair slightly and stands poised as the band start up the song with a piano introduction as the guitar and drums finally kick in the songs pace instantly increases as Edward wraps his hands around the microphone as he begins singing the opening lines to the song in a soft and emotional tone which almost seems a million miles from the angry and aggressive tones that he used the previous week but the opening lyrics to the song calls for a softer almost worn down tone which he provides, showing a versatility as he sings;

“Oooh, with judging eyes and a lonely heart
You’re hoping to watch my dreams fall apart
I’ll step to the stage with those eyes judging me
It’s time to prove to you, that this is where I want to be
This is where I belong
Watch me sing this song

There’s people all around
Talking about pressure bringing me down
But the thing that they can’t see
Is that this is where I’m supposed to be
This is where I belong
Watch me sing this song

They write their lies in the papers
About the person they think they see
But they don’t know
THE REAL ME!!!”


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The audience applaud as he screams out the previous line, “THE REAL ME!!!” and holds the note in a high almost Led Zeppelin-esque screech and as he sings the note, he raises his arm up in the air, as he finishes hitting the note he brings his arm back down quickly in perfect timing with the drum beat and as the pace of the music increases again, he takes the microphone from the stand and moves closer to the guitarist that is playing behind him, watching the electric solo and tapping his hand on his knee in time with the beat from the drummer, he struts around the stage with energy before making his way back to the centre of the stage and places the microphone back on the stand and stares out at the audience in front of him with a confident smirk on his face, he looks at a young girl in the front row that is screaming loudest and waving her arms back and forth and winks at her before continuing the song in a high vibrato style, belting out the chorus as loudly as he possibly can and singing it as if the song was meant for him;

“It’s just me against the world
The pressure is burning down on me
It’s just me against the world
I’m not the image they want to see
It’s just me against the world
The truth is out there, so set it free
It’s just me against the world
I’ll take everything they throw at me

They write in the papers and magazines
It’s their addiction just like alcohol and nicotine
They’ll try and they’ll try to bring me down
But I’ll get back up and stand my ground

An image isn’t all that you should be looking for
Beyond this appearance, there is something more
If you take a step back and take a chance on me
You’ll see the person that I could be

It’s just me against the world
The pressure is burning down on me
It’s just me against the world
I’m not the image they want to see
It’s just me against the world
The truth is out there, so set it free
It’s just me against the world
I’ll take everything they throw at me”
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GIVE IT UP FOR....EDWARD BARAT!!!!!



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Michelle: That was a really great performance Edward! You certainly know how to work the stage and the crowd. It's a great song and the lyrics are really meaningful which is good because those types of songs set apart singers and 'singers', because you really have to connect with the lyrics and put in a lot of emotion because the song itself is very deep and you did that perfectly, I hope you're here for a long time to come.
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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

JOSHUA GRIMMIE • LINCOLN • LAYLA • MERCEDES • MICHELLE GREEN
ANDREA • DENEIL • CHICAGO NOBODY • BLOOM • SONNY • VICTORIA BLACK
REUBEN • ELLIE-GRACE SUMMERS • ALFIE SUMMERS • MICAH DELISLE
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Hayden: That was a show there Mr. Barat! The great thing about you is that you don't even need flashy lights or anything but yet you capture everyone's attention and you hold it until the end of the performance. Your range is amazing, your ability to perform is great. I wanna say one thing though; I think you should keep doing those crazy notes because that might just set you apart from everyone else in this competition, excellent job Edward. (He claps for him)
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Brittany has a huge smile on her face

Brittany: Edward this was really, really good. I like the fact that, like the judges said after Keli performed, you actually covered the song with originality and your voice blows me away. I told you this when we met to talk about the song you sang. Always be original and your very original, from your style to the way you sing, your just different and that's what I like about you, so this was a great performance. I thought this would be great but you broke my expectations, which is a good thing so I applaud you Edward. Also, you performed one of my own favorite songs because this brings me back to a time when I was dealing with personal problems and I rememebering being in the studio and emotionally singing this song, and you pulled it off so well, it's always good to hear someone very talented covering your music, TEAM KNOX!!!
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Alicia: That was good performance Edward. I think the song choice seems to fit your style quite nicely and your vocals were pretty good, the differing range in your vocals is something that you could use further on in the competition and that could be a unique thing especially when your competing with the quality of these contestant. Good luck
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Thank you Judges, and give it up for EDWARD BARÁT!!! This guy has a voice! How did you pull of that screech man? *He laughs*, next up we have the southern belle! HER NAME IS.......CASEY JOHNSON!!!!

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CASEY JOHNSON - WEEK 2 STARFACTORY PERFORMANCE

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"Last week went better than I thought it would! I mean a girl was on pins and needles thinkin I wasn't gonna get picked but thank God I did! I think the competition will be harder than I thought and I thought it was gonna be a tough one but I think all I have to do is open my mouth and just sang! That's all I been doin in my life, ever since I was a little girl. My mama used to put me in the church and hand me the microphone and say 'Sang Casey!' and I did it and people liked it so I kept doing it. I even met my mentor last week and he was just as nice and sweet as a basket of peaches with sugar on top! He was so handsome too, thought I might pass out and my teammates? They were so nice and all of them were so funny, made me laugh so hard!

Okay, so we sat down and tried to pick a song but we figured it would be hard since I don't know nothin about Heavy, Dark, Crazy Metal, whatever it's called, I thought we was in trouble! But since it said we could do songs that he produced, I think sweet baby Jesus was lookin out for me on that one, he sure did. We went through all the songs he produced and it seemed like we was there for hours and hours and hours but we finally found one! It was by Misery Loves Company, I love that name, and it's a Rock song and I do love me some Rock songs. I surely hope I impress this week, I wanna be set apart from everyone else y'know? I mean I want people to go through everyone and be like 'I like that Casey Johnson, she shol' can sing!' I wanna make everyone back in Georgia proud of me and I wanna go somewhere with my music. Well that's all I got to say about that, so let me go. Ya'll know I can talk and talk for days now."
- Casey Johnson


[Misery Loves Company - Forget Everything (Orinally F*** Everything) Edited Version]

The camera pans around to the dark filtered stage where the blonde haired country girl, Casey Johnson is standing with just a microphone and the weight of expectation as the live studio audience become completely silent while they await in anticipation for her performance. She looks across at the five famous mentors including her own mentor Scott R.H, she flashes a quick smile in their direction before she gets her cue from the backing band as they lead the young singer into the song with the soft melodical guitar introduction as well as the repetitive drum beat which provides the energy to the song and instantly forces the audience into life, Casey smiles widely as the introduction finally reaches the opening lines to the song and she stands still at the center of the stage and tightly places both hands onto the microphone, she closes her eyes for a few moments in order to compose herself and she opens them up again and stares out to the audience in front of her, she opens her mouth and begins singing the song initially with a soft and emotional vocal

”Sometimes I wondered if to him I was invisible
He was always the type that seemed so invincible
Truth be told I could of done more to make it last
I wish I could look back at it all and think we had a blast

He liked to throw me around,
Woulda got away with it if I didn’t make sound
Now he will hear this song,
And hopefully realize that he was so damn wrong

Forget the world, forget my life, forget everything to do with you
I chose to love him, he split my life in half
Forget him, forget his smile, forget his kiss, and forget his laugh!
Woah!”


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As the song progresses, she confidently walks across the stage with the microphone in her hands, using the crowd reaction to its fullest as she reaches out to the audience members closest to the stage, they scream as she sings to them with a more assertive and confident vocal and the closeness between singer and audience is clear as those in the front row can be heard singing along to the country girl and cheering loudly as she makes them a part of the performance, her confidence with the song and it’s melody is clear as she makes her way back across to the center of the stage in perfect time to sing the next lines of the song on perfect note, she places the microphone back into the stand and holds onto the side of it again as she hits a high note halfway through the chorus, with confidence and aggression providing the rocky edge that the song asks for with its lyrics and setting up the final verses of the song perfectly;

“Did I really come across as a desperate girl?
I was young back then, just trying to loose my duck
At the time my life was really running downhill
It seemed like my band mates hated me for having skill
They knew I was better than they could be
All I needed was an audience and they could see

He liked to throw me around,
Woulda got away with it if I didn’t make sound
Now he will hear this song,
And hopefully realize that he was so damn wrong

Forget the world, forget my life, forget everything to do with you
I chose to love him, he split my life in half
Forget him, forget his smile, forget his kiss, and forget his laugh!
Woah!

(Instrumental as Casey adds in her own vocalizing. Casey decides to show off her vocal range in this part, giving off strong vocals and really playing around with the song.)

Oooooooh, yeaaaah
Woooooaaaaah-oh!

Forget him, forget his smile, forget his kiss, and forget his laugh!
Forget him, forget his smile, forget his kiss, and forget his laugh!
Forget it all”


As the song finishes, Casey is stood center stage and with the final chord of the guitar being struck, Casey steps back from the microphone to take in the audiences reaction to the performance, glancing across at the five judges she feels confident that she put on the best performance that she could have today and feels confident enough in her own performance which is clear as a big smile appears across her face as the song ends and the cheering of the audience is left ringing in the ears of everybody in the room. She then waves to the crowd yelling out, "Thank ya'll, thank ya'll very much!"

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The Devil You Know, minus Vincent see Casey on stage and begin to chant her name.
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I feel numb, born with a weak heart
I guess I must be having fun


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GIVE IT UP FOR....CASEY JOHNSON!!!!!



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Brittany: Wow! Wow! WOW! I think you just showed how versatile you are! I mean, you can tell that this type of music isn't for you, but it isn't your fault that you are Scott's mentor...hehe...you did an amazing job darlin, you can tell that you have been practicing your inner rock, because I was nervous for you myself, I thought you wouldn't be able to do it...I was hoping you could..... and you just proved me wrong... I cannot lie. So for that, you have my respect. If I here was underestimating you, I know millions at home did too. And you just proved me wrong...GREAT performance.
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Alicia: That was a really great performance right there. You seem very down to earth and likeable which I'm sure will be an good thing as the competition progresses. I think choosing a Misery Loves Company song was a good decision because I'm not so sure how a Metal song would have work for you, but thankfully you chose a great song and you did it in your own way, you worked the crowd pretty well and your vocals were perfect. I think you could be here for a very long time and I'm looking forward to seeing what your capable of over the coming weeks. Great work
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