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Offline RoseJapanFan  
#21 Posted : 10 August 2012 07:52:00(UTC)
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Lily: It's really risky, to me, to put an instrumental song on an album but somehow, by some grace, you've managed to make it work for you. How do you do it?? :) No offense but this might be my favorite track. I love instrumentals, there's something about them making you feel a certain way without the use of lyrics, that appeals to me.
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#22 Posted : 10 August 2012 07:54:34(UTC)
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Jason: Thanks Lily! Yeah, I totally get what you mean about instrumental tracks. They don't have to use lyrics to evoke images or memories or whatever. You can associate them with what you wish as opposed to the meaning of the song being dictated to you through lyrics. Plus, they allow people to focus more on the instrumental side of things, something which is sadly ignored a lot today.
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#23 Posted : 10 August 2012 08:04:30(UTC)
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Jimmy: I must say old friend, big departure from what you used to do with Mind an such, but I'm even more impressed! You've grown as a lyricist and an overall songwriter and that's something anyone can appreciate. Brilliant stuff mate, brilliant stuff.
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Jimmy Him- Lead Guitar,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Davey Matlock- Bass,Guitars,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Kit Saunders- Drums,additional percussion
Jaska Latvala- Rhythm Guitar,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Jack Burton- Keyboards,Keytar

Satyr in the Frost(Melodic Black Metal,think Satyricon/Mayhem/Early Dimmu Borgir/Immortal)
Sigmund-Vocals and Rhythm guitar
Celt-Drums
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now now, *hugs and steals wallet*

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The Nimrods wrote:
xNightsidex wrote:
Sooo...

What's everyone else do in the real world?


Sell pot and jerk off

JK, or am i?


At the same time?


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well your shit out of luck because they believe in you.....

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#24 Posted : 10 August 2012 08:14:13(UTC)
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Jason: Seriously thanks Jimmy, long time no speak! Yeah, this is definitely different to Mind, but I'm glad people are taking to it. It's great that you like it.
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#25 Posted : 10 August 2012 08:17:02(UTC)
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Jimmy: A long time indeed man, I've been busy a lot but I'm sticking around for a while this time.
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Jimmy Him- Lead Guitar,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Davey Matlock- Bass,Guitars,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Kit Saunders- Drums,additional percussion
Jaska Latvala- Rhythm Guitar,Vocals,Primary Songwriter
Jack Burton- Keyboards,Keytar

Satyr in the Frost(Melodic Black Metal,think Satyricon/Mayhem/Early Dimmu Borgir/Immortal)
Sigmund-Vocals and Rhythm guitar
Celt-Drums
Saxon-Lead Guitar
Sauron-Keyboard
Gris-Bass
Rincewind wrote:
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I knew you'd be back! *cries*


now now, *hugs and steals wallet*

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Gildermershina wrote:
The Nimrods wrote:
xNightsidex wrote:
Sooo...

What's everyone else do in the real world?


Sell pot and jerk off

JK, or am i?


At the same time?


Rincewind wrote:
Synxhard wrote:
I don't believe in jeans...


well your shit out of luck because they believe in you.....

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#26 Posted : 11 August 2012 07:50:28(UTC)
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7. A Fool in Love is a Fool Nonetheless (3:17) (Art Pop/ Dream Pop)

The mood is set by a pretty slow lo-fi recorded marching drum beat and some unusual, ethereal flutes playing an upbeat, yet strangely unsettling melody. This goes on for a short well, not too long, about 10 seconds, before a low key piano melody in waltz timing appears. It makes you feel as if you’re floating deep underwater, passing all the weird little fishies. A few more bars of this unusual, creative melody continue until Jason starts singing. His vocals are quiet, yet filled with a strange sort of sense of optimism and passion, and are recorded deliberately lo-fi, so as to fit with the rest of the song. He isn’t exactly singing in a high pitch, but it’s extremely difficult to pinpoint, due to the fact that it weaves in and out of the song with ease. Other, more obscure instruments come into the mix during the second part of the song, such as a Moog synthesizer, a clarinet, an accordion and a harp, although these are all played very subtly, so as not to disturb the main focus of the song, which is it’s wonky, waltzy melody. In the second part of the song, Jason changes from an unusual lo-fi tone to a clean, deep vocal, one which is almost half-singing and half-talking. He sounds as if he has just been woken up from his sleep to sing these lines. In the distance, the synths are getting more and more obvious, although they never reach a point where they explode, they instead just settle for a more average volume. On the third part of the song, Jason continues singing in the melody, but all instruments besides the harp and a thick ambient layer in the background exit. Jason is singing in a similar manner for the first 4 lines but, for the last 3, his voice erupts like a mountain of soul and he vocalises and truly shows off his expertise as a singer, before his voice trails off and it fades back into the normal, comfortable melody in the beginning, with Jason once again singing in his quiet, lo-fi voice the last part of the song. One piano note then ends the song as it rings out.

Come on, please try and get home to me...
It’s been many, many hours and I’m stuck here alone...
I need you, I always have.
I missed you, I’ll admit to that.

I’ll be waiting here for you in silence.
I’ll be waiting until you come to your senses.
I feel the wind buckle beneath the weight.
I feel a flower of love blossom from of the seeds of hate.

I hear thunder.
I hear crying.
I see lightning...
And my soul dying.
There are voices...
Then there is shaking,
A perfect porcelain heart is breaking.

You never realised what we could always be.
You never realised you were perfect only for me.




Jason: “All I remember of this song is how difficult it was to produce, in honesty. Fucking hell, seriously, it took me weeks just to perfect one little background noise. I wrote it on my friend’s piano just as an experiment. I just took a simple waltz rhythm and tried to pile up everything around that and, eventually, I came up with this. I try to think of “Fool” as what would happen if an alien was commissioned to write a love song for the human race, musically. Although it sounds like it’s one of the more... minimal, should I say, tracks on the album, it probably has the most variation in music throughout the whole thing. It’s certainly one of the most immediate and catchy songs, I think, due to the simplicity of the melody but it’s also one of the most beautiful melodies I’ve ever written because of this. I think this is a mistake I made when I was younger with Mind. I just thought GAAAH LOADS OF ARPEGGIOS AND CRESCENDOS AND THAT WILL MAKE IT A BETTER SONG but, now I’ve had time to truly study my music, I can appreciate what would make a song like this work. Lyrically, this is probably me at my lowest ever point. When I was truly, truly depressed and had no fucking idea what to do with my life. They’re not the most substantial lyrics I’ve ever written, but they are truly from the heart and are very meaningful to me, at least. I usually write the music and the lyrics separately and then piece the two together, but I just felt the lyrics flow from me as soon as I started writing this... all it took was a few piano notes and boom, I had an idea for the song. So yeah. That’s that.”


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Best Band - Mind
Best Album - Shattered Fairytale by Mind
Technical Ecstasy - Jason Smith (x3)
Best Solo Male - Jason Smith
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Best Producer - Jason Smith

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#27 Posted : 13 August 2012 00:58:41(UTC)
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8. Gone (5:27) (Indie Folk/ Indie Pop)

Immediately, a quick, quite upbeat, pretty melody is played on an acoustic guitar. This sets up the main skeleton for the beginning of the song and it continues for a couple of bars, with a slight tambourine in the background barely audible, until Jason decides to start singing in a nice, smooth, relatively loud tone. He is pretty high pitched comparatively. On the last line of the verse, the tambourines get a bit louder and you can hear a banjo being played. There is also a few other voices being heard in the background, all of which belong to Jason. One of them is a quiet falsetto, one of them is almost like a low pitched hum and the other is just back up for the main vocal. The structure of this song is odd. There are two verses in the song and two different types of verses that come after each of them. To make it less complicated, the second structured verses will be referred to as choruses. Once the song goes into the chorus, the banjo and tambourine are at the forefront of the song, alongside the guitar playing a slightly more melancholy, emotional melody, with Jason singing in a high pitched style more similar to Justin Vernon of Bon Iver. This melody and style continues for the whole chorus, with more instruments being played in the background, such as the accordion, which can be heard playing a few notes quite sadly, yet strangely optimistically, as is the theme with the whole album. It goes into another verse now, with the tambourine and banjo becoming a more common sound. The vocals from Jason are pretty much the same now, but you can hear in the background what sounds like a female choir going “ooooh-oooh-oooooh-ooooooh” quite beautifully. Actual drumming can be heard on the last line this time. True to form, once it goes into the chorus, the tambourines turn to actual drumming and the female choir continue to vocalise over the top of a melancholy vocal from Jason, who sounds more and more close to the emotional edge as he progresses. Out of all the tracks on the album, this one probably has the most emotional vocals. After this chorus though, something special happens. All the instruments collide and form one massive happy, uplifting, loud melody as all the vocals start to chant vocalisations over the top of it. Pianos can now also be heard quickly tapping away. The song continues this happy chant for about 40 seconds, before all the instruments slowly start to play themselves out and devolve into just the chanting and the piano. Everything begins to slow down as the chanting then fades out, leaving one piano note ringing to end the song.

Oh my friend, you lay your head on the ground.
Close your eyes and sleep forevermore.
After all the turbulence, this fate waits for all of us,
This I know. I’ve been there 2 times before.

And for love, I’d go straight right into hell.
And my love was a chiming and lonesome bell.
Crying out across the mountain streams and hills so far away.
I will wait. I will wait.

Oh my friend, I’m gonna stay alive for you.
But my friend, my mind has been abused.
Beaten, broken, bent, but there is still time to be fixed,
Just you see. Wait for me, unconsciously.

Then you’ll find that the gates have opened up.
I’ll shout to heavens and my voice will cause a flood.
And you’ll know where I am...
You will sense where I am.
In the end, we all bleed the same blood.




Jason: “As you may be able to tell, this song is by far the most personal on the album and was extremely difficult to record due to the sheer emotional weight. To people who don’t know the story behind the lyrics and stuff, it just sounds like an uplifting indie folk song and, fair play to them, I wouldn’t expect any more, but the actual subject matter is extremely dark. I, umm... I wrote this song straight after my best friend, Eric Quillington of Infinite, passed away due to Huntington’s, which is, as you know, what all the profits of this album are going towards fighting, and I just spent days on end completely lost and broken. Writing this song was really the only way I could find to, ya know, release all my feelings. It’s also partially about how I was just having mixed feelings towards life in general. The end part of the song is where I decided I’d give life another go and carry on loving my family. Catharsis, if you will. I won’t talk at length about the whole situation because it was publicised, rather unfairly in my opinion. I think the family and friends of Eric would have appreciated it if it was made slightly more private and he wasn’t hounded until the end of his life. You would expect that this was very complex to make and you’d be right. I spent a long time just trying to find my voice, make sure I did the song justice. Because, whilst I want to make all the songs as good as they potentially can be, this was the one I wanted to get right the most. I was at a crossroads for ages on what vocal style I should choose, but... I eventually found it and I, somehow, managed to do it. It’s all pretty much a blur now, if I’m honest. I got a gospel choir on this song as well, to help out. They were my backup option, if you will. It’s either this or Pop Song for the Plebeians for the next single, I think. I like to compare the two songs because they’re absolute polar opposites, trying to reach completely different destinations, yet they both have attributes which appeal to people.”


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Awards (stroking myself and thinking I'm superior):
@Chaos awards:
Best Band - Mind
Best Album - Shattered Fairytale by Mind
Technical Ecstasy - Jason Smith (x3)
Best Solo Male - Jason Smith
Birdies:
Best Producer - Jason Smith

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#28 Posted : 14 August 2012 02:59:55(UTC)
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9. Railway Children (1:24) (Art Rock/ Post-Rock)

The sound of some machine being turned on and a heavy, quite loud, inhaling breath is heard. The breath sounds as if it’s been distorted or manipulated in some form to give it the sound of one of those old radio broadcasts. About three vocal layers then enter the song, vocalising eerily over the top of it. One lone synthesizer can be heard playing the occasional note in the same melody as the vocals, one which is half major and half minor. Other than that, the song is creepily empty, but in a way that makes you want to keep on listening. The ghostly song progresses for a few more bars, before Jason’s voice, also made to sound as if it’s been distorted through an old radio, starts to coo through the lyrics sadly. He is using a high voice, similar to the last song, except, instead of evoking images of life and strength, it evokes images of spirits and darkness. His voice cuts through the songs eerie melody extremely well. The synths continue throughout the song unchanged mostly, except for a slight shift in melody towards the end. On the last three lines of each of the verses, the vocalisations in the background change melody to a slower, higher pitched one, consisting of two long notes that drift about. As it enters the second verse, another vocal layer, except a clean, undistorted, lower pitch one can be heard doing the same vocalisations now. The song progresses with the same formula throughout aside from a small synth flourish that happens towards the latter end of the verse, where they do a slight arpeggio and the lower pitch vocal layer follows that melody. It ends with the vocals carrying on and leading into the next song.

It is a funny story and it’s been too long to remember what I did to you.
And after a while we realise it’s all in vain and we move on to something new.
All these imperfections bring to my attention that... I miss you too.
The truth is that it’s not that I don’t want you back again, it’s just I’m thinking what’s best for you.
And I’ve been true.
True... true.
It’s all true.

All the children on the railway float towards the stars, but they slip away.
I know this in my heart, in my ego and my soul, I belong to another day.
Or maybe it’s a nightmare and I refuse to wake up and see in my last breath.
Despite what I may have thought or said in the past, you were always the best...
The best for me...
Me...
It’s me, all me...




Jason: “I originally had this down as a small acoustic ditty that I was gonna do with an EP at some point. It was originally just an eerie little instrumental, but I eventually felt words just pouring out of me as my life gradually started to fall apart. I mean, I don’t actually remember much from my disappearance, but I do remember that I found this in my pocket once I’d returned home and I quite liked it. And it fitted. I decided that just doing it acoustic made it sound like some soppy emo ballad though and I felt that I wanted it to evoke images of walking through an abandoned hospital or something, trying to follow a ghost. My mind works in weird ways, but if you can actually imagine that, that’s what I wanted to get out of it. Since the track is almost entirely vocally based, it was quite easy to record. I just had various layers of my voice doing harmonies, ranging from the very high pitched to the very low pitched. I played about with the settings and I eventually stumbled across what would make the vocal setting that made it so special to me. The synth here is simple, but very effective. I didn’t want it to be completely bare, so I added something to just guide the vocals along. It was the first instrument I tracked for the whole album. I was originally gonna record an album full of this type of stuff, but it was too difficult to write.”



10. Sorry (0:39) (Art Rock/ Post-Rock)

One powerful, heavily distorted guitar chord cuts through the ambience and atmosphere created through the last track. This is soon followed by another one, and another, until it forms an unusually upbeat, but still quite eerie and sad melody. The synths, by this point, have now turned into organs and the vocalisations, which are also following this same melody, are no longer distorted, but sound clean and like a church choir. Quite quickly, this continues, before a marching drum beat, piano playing melancholy arpeggios and fast acoustic guitar also appear out of the darkness to give the song a full, even at times, optimistic feel, in contrast to the darkness and eeriness of the previous track which led directly into this. Once this melody and set up have been established, Jason then proceeds to sing the lyrics of the song in a very powerful, emotional voice, amongst the most beautiful moments on the whole album. The organs get louder and louder, as do the drum beats and the choir float across the track like a cloud. On the absolute final line of the song, the distorted electric guitar from the beginning of the song cuts through playing the same melody, as all the other instruments drop out, before Jason absolutely belts it out. It then reverts to the acoustic guitar playing the melody and Jason softly cooing the song out.

Don’t think I’m not afraid.
Don’t think of what’s been past.
Don’t think of what’s been said.
This flame is gonna last.

And don’t ever think that I’ve left you alone.




Jason: “Railway Children didn’t seem quite right when I completed it. I just felt I needed to say something... more substantial, before I went into Bite the Bullet, which is the most emotionally packed and lyrically dense song on the whole album. Sorry is a song that came straight from my heart. I wrote it the day I got back from disappearing. It’s not very long at all, but it doesn’t need to be. It does what it sets out to do in about 40 seconds and that’s what makes it so special to me. People will inevitably ask me why I didn’t just put this on to the end of Railway Children and there’s a good reason for that. The two songs were written in completely different mindsets, completely different zones and will completely different goals in mind. This is an extremely dark, yet optimistic love song; Railway Children is a song about everything tumbling down. It wouldn’t make sense for them to be stuck together. Recording this was actually surprisingly difficult; too difficult for a song which only lasts 40 seconds. I had to keep shifting the vocal settings, and get the choir in to do one more track. Also, I accidentally lost the original drums, so I had to do a completely different drum beat in time for the song. Luckily, it actually sounded better than the original. It all works out in the end.”


SOUNDS LIKE (0-4:14 - Railway Children, 4:52 onwards - Sorry):
Awards (stroking myself and thinking I'm superior):
@Chaos awards:
Best Band - Mind
Best Album - Shattered Fairytale by Mind
Technical Ecstasy - Jason Smith (x3)
Best Solo Male - Jason Smith
Birdies:
Best Producer - Jason Smith

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#29 Posted : 15 August 2012 02:59:50(UTC)
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11. Bite the Bullet (5:08) (Art Rock/ Indie Pop)

Immediately, you hear a guitar play a singular note over and over again relatively quickly for a few seconds. Soon after this, a relaxed falsetto vocal by Jason alongside some deeply mixed low synths comes into the song. As soon as the vocals come in, the guitar switches to a dark, yet strangely upbeat melody, which is simple, but extremely effective. As Jason sings these lyrics in his falsetto, you can very faintly here another vocal track of him harmonising with a low pitch baritone, although it’s not clearly audible. This carries on for a quite a while, building up atmosphere and ambience in the background, with most of the track focused primarily on the lyrics of the song. After the first couple of verses, a drum beat, somewhat resembling a relatively slow march, enters the fray, as do some symphonic elements, although they are downplayed and not extremely noticeable. Another guitar layer is added on top of it, in the same key and with the same feel as the main melody, but slightly different in that there are only two notes. A simplistic bass guitar is also added at this point. Once all the instruments have been added into the song, Jason continues singing his falsetto, alongside other vocal tracks of harmonised falsetto, tenor and baritones. The music gets gradually louder and louder, with more unorthodox instruments like flutes, harps and accordions being added in playing similar melodies until it reaches a symphony of different sounds. After another verse, all the sounds boil back down into the simple acoustic guitar that was there at the beginning. Jason continues singing in the same melody, before all the instruments are reintroduced, with a slightly faster marching beat now in the song. There is also slightly more ambience than there was before, making it somewhat resemble Sigur Ros. One more verse of the song is sung, before it all slowly fades back into the guitar and Jason singing, except there isn’t any ambience anymore, it is just a lo-fi recording of Jason and a guitar, so as to give the song a more “pure” and “natural” sound. Once all the lyrics have been completed, both Jason and the guitar finish, and it fades into relatively loud ambience. A continuous drone of whale noises, radio broadcasts, synths and chatter go on for roughly 30 seconds, before everything cuts to a close.

It was only in my dreams that that I thought I could save you,
My feelings were all there for you to misconstrue,
And I told you “there’s no point, because we are all dying”,
The leaves were falling round me and the wind was sighing,
I turned around and walked until my feet were bleeding,
Took shelter in my mind where my emotions were receding,
But no one ever forced you to look out for me,
The rain eventually fell back into the sea.

You toss and you turn, it was only a nightmare,
You’re crying in your bed, it’s a pitiful sight, well,
I wanted you to know I’ll always be there for you,
Cos in the end it’s always just us two,
And I too miss the comfort and conformity,
I’m the one to blame, babe, I’m really sorry,
But sorrow isn’t as good a healer as time,
And sorrow won’t guarantee that you’ll be mine,

Again, I ask of you “do you still love me?”,
And during the taking of breath, I wallow in pity,
I wait for an answer, my heart starts pounding,
I’m beginning to wonder how my words are sounding,
To you, you reply, and it begins again,
I cry and you cry, and we shake our heads,
We shake each other, trying to make each other understand,
Why this could never be more than a line in the sand.

I bite the bullet, you claw and you gnash your teeth,
At my soul all chewed up, and glazed over with grief,
We’ll look back on this, it’ll all come to haunt us,
Our demons at the door all constantly taunt us,
But we’re too good for them, we’re too good for mistakes,
We’re too good to bother cleaning the mess that we made,
Too good for love, we’re too good for lying,
We’ve always been too good, even though we’re dying.

The past is the past, the present is merely a footnote,
The future is the boring prose that I wrote,
I swear that I always will be watching out for you,
No one else anymore, it’s just us two.




Jason: “Out of all the songs on the album, I’d say that this one is probably the one that means the most to me. It is probably the centrepiece of the album, maybe even more so that the final song. It just encompasses all the attributes of the album in one song; it’s very lyrically dense and heartfelt, the instrumentation is catchy, melancholic and melodic and it has that faint trace of ambience and beauty. I’m pretty certain that this is gonna be a fan favourite, anyway. Even counting Mind songs, I would say that this is one of the best songs I’ve ever written as well, because it actually worked out the exact way I wanted it to. Another reason why it stands out is because it’s the only song on the album where I recorded literally all of the instruments, even the drums and all the weird instruments that build up towards the end, which is a great source of pride for me. Of course, there’s a reason why it’s so lyrically dense... I wrote it over the course of 3 days and it really sums up my feelings at that point. I was lonely, depressed, and unsure of my future. I also touch upon the fact that I felt that I was better off alone; I didn’t deserve anyone to look out for me. I think that this is probably the most direct song in terms of emotion. I definitely wear my heart on my sleeve hear and this song goes into detail about the themes of love and loss. Although the lyrics may look like they’re getting happier towards the end, I wrote them with a deliberate sense of false optimism and arrogance. It’s a very dark song, actually, despite the fact it’s one of the poppiest on the album.”


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Awards (stroking myself and thinking I'm superior):
@Chaos awards:
Best Band - Mind
Best Album - Shattered Fairytale by Mind
Technical Ecstasy - Jason Smith (x3)
Best Solo Male - Jason Smith
Birdies:
Best Producer - Jason Smith

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#30 Posted : 15 August 2012 03:05:03(UTC)
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Serenity: All of these songs are great man. Especially the last one! Good luck with the album and everything.. Well I mean I don't have to wish you good luck because the album will do well anyways :)
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