So this is the first chapter of what would be a prequel to the book I was working on and posted here in this thread. I started re-writing what I had posted here and was only a little ways in when I started working on an idea for a novel with Hana in July of last year. I liked the idea and adapted it to work for the characters I had in my original idea and this is what I came up with.
Maybe someday, I will begin writing something and actually finish it instead of just getting 1/4th of the way through and decided to re-write the whole thing...or write a prequel...or just write something else entirely.
AMBORN I The sky was clear and Amborn couldn’t help but enjoy himself. The halls of Pintera were never anything if not perfect, but Amborn often found himself staring in bewilderment while taking in the sheer beauty that seemed to radiate through every room and hallway. This place is Heaven. Sometimes he would have to remind himself of that fact. Amborn had been dead for thirteen years but he still caught himself occasionally forgetting it all completely. The memories of his past life remained however, and it was those memories that would set him off into long periods of reflection and soul searching. My soul is all I have left. He thought.
“Amborn,” A voice called from down the hall. Amborn turned to see who it was and smiled gently upon recognition.
“BreShee, I was not expecting to see you until tomorrow.” He said. BreShee was a happy person who often laughed at things that others would have found droll. So when Amborn found her to be frowning, he knew something was wrong. “What is the matter?” He asked.
“They’ve called the council to a meeting, Amborn.” She began. “I’ve been asking around but nobody would tell me what is going on.” She paused. Amborn grinned.
“Well, we may have to attend this councils meeting ourselves then.” He said.
Something terrible has happened. Amborn knew very little of what normally went on behind the Councilors Doors but it was common knowledge among the dead that a meeting meant trouble. Has there been a tragedy? The last meeting had been to discuss a war that was taking place on Earth amongst a nation divided upon itself over slavery. What has happened now?
“Do you think the war could have started again anew, Amborn?” BreShee asked with a trembling voice. Bright and cheerful as she is, she breaks easily under pressure, thought Amborn.
“No,” he said. “The war was ended. This must be something else,” Hopefully something less detrimental.
"Have you heard anything?” She asked desperately as they walked down the bare granite hallways.
“BreShee, you know as well as I that the councilors do not speak to anyone who is not among their ranks. Even the Angels are often left without vital information.”
That should not be, thought Amborn. The Angels are a select group of souls pulled from the dead to keep peace among the lands and peoples of Earth. What is the purpose of the councilors? The question was often asked among the common souls, but never answered by anything more truthful than modern gossip.
The walls were growing less grey and more silver with every step now. A few flights of stairs and they shall turn to gold. It wasn’t true necessarily, just another rumor that floated around the hordes of souls with nothing to do. Truthfully, the walls were only ever silver or grey. Surely everyone should know this by now? By the time Amborn has spent that thought and its ramblings, they had reached the Councilors Door. Known for being twice as large as any other door in Pintera, they were also legendarily hard to get through. I will have to lie to them if BreShee and I are to get inside.
A small sliding panel on the door opened to reveal a mouth on the other side.
“Speak your business quickly Amborn or be gone! We are conducting a meeting.” Spoke the mouth.
“Someone has broken another hole through the clouds, sir. I must ask the councilors for aid, it will only take a moment.” It’s a logical lie. There had often been trouble making spirits who found it entertaining to break the clouds and watch others fall through.
“We are not taking visitors now, we are conducting a meeting!” The mouth was obviously twisting in anger.
“Please! I only need to ask them for a vile of rain.” He replied. “Only the councilors have such a thing!”
Amborn watched the mouth as it thought silently. This should be interesting…
“Very well then, you may pass.”
Immediately, the giant doors began to swing open to reveal the long stairway inside. The mouth was only a manifestation to welcome visitors, so BreShee and Amborn would be alone in the stairwell. Everything hinges on our being alone here. As long as no one else tried to get through the doors before it was time, Amborn would be able to sneak up the stairs and listen in on the meeting before introducing himself to ask for the rain water. It’s not fool proof, but it will have to do, he thought.
Slowly and somewhat awkwardly he began to ascend the steps on his hands and knees. He kept his head low and his body pressed against the granite walls as close as possible, but he was still a rather open target and his robes were making noise as well. I will have to go slower than I intended. After a long while and a lot of scrapes later, Amborn reached the point at which he would have to stop to keep from being seen. Here, he could easily hear the conversations going on in the room above and stay quiet enough to be unheard. BreShee had stayed at the bottom to keep watch on the door just as planned. Everything is going perfectly.
“Perhaps it is too early yet to be making hasty decisions.” A low voice said from above the stairs.
“Perhaps you would have us wait until disaster strikes us? Or would you rather pretend nothing has happened at all?” This voice was closer to Amborn than the other and the initial sound of it make him tense up.
“I would do no such thing Herlese, I only meant that there could have been an error in the assessment of the situation.” Both voices were speaking slowly and Amborn was struggling to make out every word.
“Litese, we both know that every caution is taken so that no errors can be made. Besides that, we have both seen the crisis for ourselves and know the severity of the situation.”
Are there only the two of them? Amborn had never known how many councilors there actually were, but he had always assumed that there would be several. Perhaps there are only two. But just as the thought crossed his mind, a third voice began speaking.
“Both of you will calm down until we hear from Ortanu. He will give us our orders as he always has.”
There were grumblings and whimpers but Litese and Herlese seemed to agree with the third voice. Who could this Ortanu be? Are the councilors sorted into ranks? Or maybe Ortanu is who they are counseling for… Amborn was trying to understand everything he was hearing but none of it made much sense. If I knew more about what went on behind these doors I would have figured something out by now. Suddenly, Amborn felt a strange sensation travel down his spine. His stomach jumped and he turned over on his back to look behind him. That was when he saw Him.
“Only the councilors are supposed to know what goes on beyond those doors Amborn. Yet here you are.”
The voice was powerful and seemed to be made up of many voices speaking as one. Amborn held his head as the words reverberated through his ears.
“Stand up, let us go and speak to our friends.”
Amborn nodded as he looked up into the man’s face. He has no face! Instead of the features
Amborn was expecting to see, he looked up to find that there was a white light pouring out through the slight hole in the man’s hood. Amborn grabbed at his eyes and nearly fell over but the man grabbed his hand and pulled him back to his feet.
“Careful now, we don’t want to keep our friends waiting.”
Amborn was still rubbing his eyes when he glanced around the man to see if BreShee was still at the bottom of the stairs. She was, but she seemed to be oblivious to the situation. BreShee was standing guard as if nothing was happening and no one else was in the room. Amborn took his gaze to the floor and turned around as the man nudged him to keep walking forward into the room above the stairs. What will happen to me? What have I done? He kept asking himself. The room above was rather smaller than Amborn expected and was only occupied by the three people whom he had been eavesdropping on just moments before. They looked at him with confused stares but blinked and turned away just as quickly. The man who had brought him in pointed to an empty chair and motioned for Amborn to sit down. After doing so Amborn watched the man go to the larger chair at the front of the room. Is this man Ortanu? Could this be who the other three were speaking of?
For a while Amborn expected the man to speak, but before long he realized that they were all content to just stare at him. Amborn took his gaze and matched each of them to make sure that he was correct and the sat back in his chair rather uncomfortably.
“I have to ask you, are you ever going to tell us what you are doing here?” Asked the man whom Amborn had marked as Litese.
“Oh,” Amborn was scared and confused but he tried to explain as best he could manage. “I had to come to ask for a vile of rain.” They won’t believe it.
Herlese, Litese, and the third man all smiled and looked towards the man who had brought Amborn in.
“Amborn, I would ask you to tell the truth please.” He said.
“But…” Amborn was at a loss. “Who are you?” He asked suddenly. I shouldn’t have spoken out of turn.
“My name is Ortanu here. I have had other names, but I believe Ortanu will do. I am the head of the council.”
Amborn tried to understand but found himself left with more questions instead.
“Amborn, you have been dead for thirteen years correct?”
Amborn nodded nervously.
“You know much more of…Heaven…than most of the others. Yet the mysteries of the Councilors have eluded you, and you found yourself curious as to our doings and purposes. Is that also correct?”
Amborn looked on in wonder, but nodded just the same.
“So when you’re trusted friend BreShee came to you worried about the fate of our universe and the meaning of our meeting today, you jumped at the opportunity to spy on us. Yes?”
Amborn nodded one final time before sitting up. Ortanu was smiling kindly he could sense, even if he could not see it visually. Litese and Herlese were grinning slightly while the third man grimaced.
“How did you know all this?” Amborn asked.
“I know much more than you might expect Amborn. We will get to this later on. For now, I have to ask you a question. Will you hear it?”
“Of course,” he replied.
“Do you really want to know why we are meeting today?” Ortanu asked simply.
Amborn had to think a while before answering, but finally decided to say…
“Yes.”
Ortanu smiled and the feeling of happiness seemed to fill the entire room.
“Then I will have to ask you to go and fetch your friend at the bottom of the stairs. No doubt she will want to share the moment with us.”
He waved Amborn back down the stairs and Amborn happily obeyed. Why am I not being punished? Can it possibly be this simple? He asked himself as he slowly slipped his foot down the first few steps. BreShee was still happily watching the door when he walked up behind her. She took no notice of the sounds of his footfalls or the sound of his voice when he called her name so he tapped her on the shoulder. Only then did she respond. She turned and jumped when she saw him.
“What are you doing down here? Did you hear anything?” She asked as she turned her head to peer up the stairs.
“I was caught,” he began slowly.
“What? How?” She interrupted.
“BreShee, they want us to attend the meeting. Come on, we have to get back.” Amborn took control of the conversation and then grabbed her by the elbow to lead her up the stairs.
“Why do they want us to attend the meeting?” She asked quickly before reaching the room.
“I…” Amborn paused. “I don’t know.” He said.
The Councilors were all beaming with smiles spare the third man. Amborn looked at him as they entered and their eyes met. For a second Amborn thought he had recognized the look in his eyes but he didn’t get the chance to think about it. Ortanu grabbed BreShee by the shoulder and sat her down with another room filling smile.
“Well, we are all here then.” He said. “Now let us introduce ourselves…I am Ortanu. This man to the left of me is Litese,”
Litese was an older man with dirty blonde hair and a mid length beard that was shaggy around his chin. He wore a white cloak and golden wrist bands, but his feet bore only plain sandals.
“To my right is Herlese,” continued Ortanu.
Dressed in a grey cloak worn thin and dusty, Herlese hardly looked the part of a Councilor.
But he wore the same warm smile as Litese and Ortanu. His hair was brown and dirty, but his beard was black and thin.
“And this solemn fellow is Zaleth.”
Clothed all in black and bathing in the shadows, Zaleth’s appearance matched his scowl. The only thing about him that wasn’t dark was his hair and beard which were both as white as snow. His hair had been cut short while his beard was long and wild.
Ortanu looked towards BreShee and stared at her a while before continuing.
“Well?” He asked.
BreShee was noticeably confused and hid it much worse than Amborn had.
“What?” She asked.
Amborn hung his head to hide his fear.
“Well, nothing I suppose.” Ortanu finished. “I guess we should just get on with the business at hand.”
Ortanu held out a hand and the stone table they were sitting at turned to glass. He then stood and scraped his finger down the length of it before sitting back down. Amborn looked on in amazement as the glass displayed an image of a hole the size of which he had never seen before. The hole was dark and vast with no foreseeable bottom. Slowly, the view through the glass traveled down the hole as the colors within changed from black to grey and finally again to white. With that, the table returned to its original stone form. The Councilors sat back calmly while BreShee looked towards Amborn with her mouth open and her eyes wide. Ortanu leaned back in his chair.
“That my friends, is the reason we have all gathered here today.” He said.
“What exactly is it?” BreShee dared to ask.
“It is The Inforrest.” Spoke Zaleth for the first time since BreShee had arrived.
“Indeed,” Said Ortanu in a much more grave tone than he had used moments before. “The image that you have seen is known as The Inforrest. It is not just a hole as you may have perceived it to be however…it is a passageway.” He turned his head to Amborn. “Most of all, it is a mistake.”
Amborn gulped quietly and the sounds in the room all became silent at once.
“What sort of passageway? Where does it go?” He asked.
“To Hell; To Heaven, and all that lies between,” replied Zaleth as he stepped out from the shadows. His black cloak shuffled across the floor as he sat down across from Amborn.
“What does lie between them?” Asked BreShee naively.
“Darkness,” said Zaleth. “How was it opened Ortanu?”
“I…” Ortanu sounded worried and the emotion rang throughout the room, shaking the very walls.
“I cannot see.”
Zaleth looked deeply into Amborn’s eyes and then shortly at BreShee.
“Why are they here?” He asked sharply.
“They were curious…I have chosen them to close the passage.”
Litese and Herlese smiled at them both but Zaleth balked.
“You should punish them for breaking into this place. How did they even get in without detection?”
“I knew they were coming Zaleth. The door was arranged to allow their entry. Watch your tone.” Ortanu replied and anger filled the air.
“I apologize,” Zaleth sat back. “How are they supposed to close the passage and why not choose one of us?”
“The Inforrest was designed to only be accessible by me. No other soul may approach it. However, one who harbors my light and will may enter easily if they enter for truth. With you three, I cannot be sure of your motives and intensions. The Inforrest is a vast source of power and the wrong person could end the worlds.”
“I would never do such a thing!” Said Litese nervously while Herlese nodded and Zaleth shook his head.
“What makes you so certain that these two are well intentioned?” Asked Zaleth spitefully.
“I know because I created them. I know their hearts.”
Amborn looked on as the four Councilors exchanged varying expressions. They were all staring at each other but they all seemed to understand each other’s thoughts. Their silence lasted for several minutes before being broken suddenly.
“I’m sorry my friends,” Said Ortanu as he stood to lead BreShee and Amborn down the steps.
“We will have to finish this meeting amongst ourselves. I will send for you when the time comes.”
“But what are we supposed to do?” asked BreShee urgently as they stepped through the doorway at the bottom of the stairs.
“Prepare yourselves. The road to The Inforrest is hard and dark and no soul can expect to make it through and come out the same as they entered.”
The door shut and Amborn looked to BreShee who was rubbing her eyes.
“What did you get me into?” He asked.
“Trouble.” She replied.
EDIT: When copying and pasting from Word, the italics on Amborn's "thoughts" was removed so I have to apologize if it's hard to read and understand. Edited by user 25 May 2012 23:05:04(UTC)
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