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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#1 Posted : 09 April 2013 11:32:29(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		I Am Atlas They said make a website so they know who you are Like you know about god unless he's in your heart Give that music industry all your bio Its so easy to put life on the web so here's the intro This is a soul in a song and a heart in a beat Its my life on a line This is Martin Luther King speech I guess the wold has to know about me A cookie cutter life for magazines not the black me So how do you think it is black and poor in Reno No more highschool just drugs and casino Momma lost our house over at the hilton Daddy stole a car lock it up til we miss him i'm just over here tryin to make a life But its hard to be dark when you're looking for light See all the injustice thats in front of me Make fun of me and spit on my hands man Music world know alout about the sins of humanity The sins they cast away are the sins I eat for breakfast So foolish in destiny to believe in serenity So when you come to my website looking for my bio Ask yourself do you want to know what I know? Tell me to make a website for the fans Like I'm kim Kardishian or some fuckin' white indie band Surely the world needs to know who you are They'll never cast your life aside like they have so far So come back its another verse More misfortune and another god damn curse But first please picture your life Picture your lies in a scene Remember who you are and that you'll never come clean Even when you gods above his robes white and mean Cant let me in your way for I'd just scruff up the scene Lets just pause for a moment Remember god for a moment My life is for him to judge It's for you on earth not to notice So why in the hell Should I write it all down Can't let my actions speak for themselves? I have to spell it all out? They said make a website so they know who you are Like you know about god unless he's in your heart Let us know you you really are Nothing changes and no one has cared so far And here we are for the last time you have to see my face And here we go you can laugh at misfortune and fame Here we go go away now we dont need you here You've fucked us from afar and you'll fuck us near Near to here so feel the fear I can hear the scream in my hear Dont ever have to call or have to see What its like to be me So if you like the beat let me make a record I am atlas and the rest is irrelevant I'll carry my world ontop of my shoulders Like I carried yours since you forced me across your borders Beat & Bass Classical in instrumentation the beat of the song is powerful and thumping. the bass drum thuds in perfect time creating a beat worthy of clapping or slamming feet along too. Cymbals slash along the way in a classic hip-hop sound. Hollow sounding toms pound the way but with the bass drum dominating the sound. The bass joins in with a funk sound staying subtle and quiet but keeping things going strong and steady the whole time repeating the same addicting line. Atmosphere In a jazzy escapade a small horn section creates the mood of the song at first. A guitar joins in as the verse really kicks in repeating an addicting riff. A muted trumpet contrasts sounds from a major rock driven riff to a minor melody repeated as the guitar fiddles around hammering and pulling in the background. The two instruments continue switching off and on usually with the guitar dominating but the horn creating a great, memorable contrast. Vocals Clean with no reverb, auto-tune, effects, or anything, Atlas raps with aggression and anger. An appalled tone sets the scene for a song that only escalates from distaste over his managers telling him he has to make a website and tell his stories and escalates to full on blasphemy against the white culture he feels he has been a victim of. Atlas sells it the whole way letting his anger punch and thrive at the most dramatic times and on the most dramatic lines Name: Atlas (Born Damon Lewis) Age: 18 Location: Reno, NV Genre: Rap, Hip-Hop Label: Unsigned Discography: Coming Later Tour: Coming Later Edited by user 09 April 2013 11:47:56(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
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erich hess		#2 Posted : 09 April 2013 11:36:01(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Moderators, Registered Joined: 09/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 42,827 Location: representing the 954 Thanks: 21866 times Was thanked: 18088 time(s) in 10509 post(s)		ooc:damn! better than any hip hop on the radio today. erich:holy fuck yes. i want more of this.
		"I'm not saying its even a good thing to own a chimpanzee. But that's freedom, folks." Alex Jones.

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snap_itshannah		#3 Posted : 09 April 2013 11:38:06(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 01/10/2012(UTC) Posts: 18,715 Thanks: 7755 times Was thanked: 6357 time(s) in 2889 post(s)		OOC: Fuckkkkkk me! This is awesome.

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TishaJackson!!!!		#4 Posted : 09 April 2013 11:44:59(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 31/07/2009(UTC) Posts: 2,661 Thanks: 622 times Was thanked: 1324 time(s) in 639 post(s)		OOC: I am begging you. Please keep him on here. We need more Hip-Hop on here! Amazing job with this. You turned shit up for me.


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AmyJayneXoX		#5 Posted : 09 April 2013 11:56:02(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 22/02/2013(UTC) Posts: 8,410 Location: Ashford Thanks: 4344 times Was thanked: 4045 time(s) in 1382 post(s)		ooc. we needed more hip hop artist and rappers so hats off to you as this is awesome

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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#6 Posted : 09 April 2013 13:12:10(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		OOC: He's not going anywhere! Writing lyrics for him is just fun. Most of the RPs will be lyrics focused so dont expect extravagant description but I'll keep working with him. I agree that we need more hip-hop. Even though its not the genre I'm most comfortable with I think I could make him in to a very fun and interesting artist. Love writing lyrics. Glad you're all enjoying it Atlas: Hey there Erich thanks for the comment I'll keep my songs goin' like girls to a british accent Guess thats why I cant get no head Cuz my voice is too awkward and I dont own a bed I guess I could get a girl if I gave her enough pressure But I'll be a nice guy and work on making my next song fresher
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theonlysorrow		#7 Posted : 09 April 2013 14:48:42(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 18/07/2011(UTC) Posts: 606 Location: Hove (NOT Brighton) Thanks: 244 times Was thanked: 152 time(s) in 86 post(s)		Nice work. I really enjoyed reading these. Rap was one of the things I wanted to try when I first joined but I couldn't get lyrics that were slick like this. It's awesome :)
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FiveT		#8 Posted : 10 April 2013 04:21:56(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 19/07/2010(UTC) Posts: 8,514 Thanks: 4174 times Was thanked: 3231 time(s) in 1294 post(s)		Joey: Man this is good! Gotta keep an eye on ya. OOC: Amazing work! I like how the description makes me easily imagine what the song sounds like.
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Andre Gandra		#9 Posted : 10 April 2013 05:53:27(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 12/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 4,147 Location: Brazil Thanks: 2880 times Was thanked: 3513 time(s) in 1683 post(s)		OOC: with this, you just show how versatile you can be on writing songs. it's amazing. Magie: I love hip hop, and this sounds like a classic old fashion hip hop song, raw and sarcastic, it's a great track.
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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#10 Posted : 10 April 2013 09:45:23(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		OOC: This is high praise. I'll try to keep it up when I start to really write his stuff. Thank you.
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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#11 Posted : 01 May 2013 12:26:29(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		A few weeks after he gained a large amount of attention and traffic on the internet for his song "I am Atlas" the young rapper out of Reno, Nevada got his first high profile collaboration by winning a spot on Tisha Jackson's song "Good Lovin'" next to Tisha (obviously) and rapper Chloe. The song is off Jackson's newest album "The Highway to Redemption". The song will be released as a single sometime in the future. LISTEN HERE
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TishaJackson!!!!		#12 Posted : 01 May 2013 12:44:35(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 31/07/2009(UTC) Posts: 2,661 Thanks: 622 times Was thanked: 1324 time(s) in 639 post(s)		Tisha: Sometime in May! Get ready for a video treatment :)



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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#13 Posted : 14 May 2013 08:46:09(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		Atlas Signed to Chaos Records: His Response Mmm step aside I'm going worldwide My words make homes Where yours never survive Mmm cant deny Under oath I'm here to testify When my track gets bought My words only intensify Youngest nigger on the charts how the hell they bring me here huh maybe its beats and philosophies Rhymes so hard I fulfill rap prophecies Uhh so no surprise they put me on their label Got so much chaos they know its no mistake Tracks so loud its a fucking earthquake shakin' up the ground make the the radio unstable So now all I know is were goin' hard in the rap game Fans go crazy record execs just have to act sane Other niggers make a career out of out of big talk This is big walk. Not big stocks. Dont need big cocks Dont need to beat no Isaack Lovelocks This aint olympics bitch this is space walks See niggers so many rhymes I depress you See all I can do is just best you so sad you're gonna need electroshock my songs so good call me Johann Sebastian Bach But lets get back on target this was never about me Dont want to sit in no tower like I'm a fuckin honoree Tell me am I an escapee a referee or an amputee because all my niggers look at me like they hatin me All my friends be actin like they replacin me Everyone on earth be lookin like they erasin' me Like Damon why you got a rap anyway injustice is a must its just our permanent handcuff its Its like all we ever do is get stepped upon Its like all I ever do is something wrong Its like they look at me like I'm an enemy Like I'm the fucking Dictatorship of the Bourgeoisie
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stephaniewazhere		#14 Posted : 14 May 2013 08:55:55(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 21/02/2009(UTC) Posts: 18,252 Thanks: 6248 times Was thanked: 7557 time(s) in 3439 post(s)		Stephanie Fierce: Congratulations Atlas! Very well deserved! You are incredibly talented, your deserve all the success, pop them bottles for me ;) BTW, Atlas killed his verse on one of my tracks, you will see very soon ;) Stpehy Fierce: You betta floss, you gonna the hottest rapper in the industry, mark my words homie!
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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#15 Posted : 14 May 2013 10:19:26(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		Atlas: hey Steph glad to hear you think I'm incredible With verses like ours success is just inevitable Makin' hits for hobbies like we're Hank Aaron Crushed so many other artists they say we must use serin
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TishaJackson!!!!		#16 Posted : 14 May 2013 11:31:09(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 31/07/2009(UTC) Posts: 2,661 Thanks: 622 times Was thanked: 1324 time(s) in 639 post(s)		Tisha: One of the most creative people my eyes have danced on. Congrats boo :)



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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#17 Posted : 11 July 2013 08:02:08(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		Debut Album August 2013 So I hear everyone is waiting patiently You a patient I guess I am a doctor PHD in rhyme, concentration in flow bitch when my album drops you're gonna know I'm recording for a release in August 2013 Hittin' so hard Muhammad Ali say ts mean Got a verse on some songs but nothing yet of my own So far I just rap about my big cock and dysfunctional home But you just wait I will prove myself I can be a good man I will improve myself I got guest appearances to make you cry I'll go on tour and kill so much you wanna die I got collabs with Chloe that are mad fun Billie Beckett might show, same with Matt Young There are many more those are just some Keep rappin' 'til I'm out of the slum So now you have another taste of whats to come So get my debut record; send it straight to number one Song Title Reveal #1 Severity Dreams (Feat. Billie Beckett) I am Atlas Shit Boys Say Edited by user 11 July 2013 08:04:05(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#18 Posted : 11 July 2013 16:38:43(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		Genre: Hip-Hop/Rap Release Date: 7/11/13 Label: Chaos Records Songwriter: Damon "Atlas" Lewis Producer: U-Mike, Damon "Atlas" Lewis, XPonent Length: 3:50 Overview Since April the up and coming rapper Atlas has been impressing the hip-hop world with his all music, no bullshit attitude and surprising talent at only eighteen' almost nineteen years old. Damon Lewis, or Atlas, as he is known onstage, has collaborated with Tisha Jackson (whom he is currently dating), Stephanie Fierce, Chloe, and Isaac Lovelock to name a few. Now after a few demos including the ironic internet sensation "I am Atlas", the young rapper from Reno, Nevada of all places is ready to show the world what he can do on his first single for airplay and itunes, and not only this; he's doing it alone with no collaborations. As his debut single, to say that "The Next Great Hip-Hop Song" is ambitious would be an understatement. He called it the next great hip-hop song so automatically the expectations are huge. Joined by the fairly classic, established producer U-Mike, and a younger, lesser known producer XPonent, Atlas makes a song derived from a sound that was popular at least ten or more years ago. The beat isn't hard. There are no heavy electronics. The song is built on a simple beat where the complexity of the drum tone doesn't go beyond a clap, and the bassline only matches this simplicity. Sweet subtle guitars and mild orchestral elements make up the main atmosphere of the song. A catchy horn lick hooks the listener in. Atlas's rapping and soulful singing in the chorus pull the song together, but the style is almost archaic in modern pop music. He is calm and declarative rather than angry. He takes a "tell it like it is" approach that is natural and believable, but risks leaving the listener wishing there was more. Lyrically, Atlas explains his musical choices. In the second verse he declares "Bass lines have been replaced with bass drops" making it clear that he does not intend to use heavy electronics and synthesizers in his songs or take up the latest trends. The song essentially serves as a second introduction for Atlas. THough filled with some classic rap themes of fame, and sex, the song is truly about Atlas's ambition. He clearly wants to be the next great rapper, but many of the lines (Nigga I never said I was the best/I'm just here saying my verses are very relevant) subtly suggest that he knows he isn't there yet. Responses "No other rapper has the sophistication of Atlas. so many of his lyrics require considerable outside, scholarly knowledge to understand. This song is a breath of fresh air." - Michael, Santa Barbara, CA "Boring. The beat is awful and he raps slow as hell" - Rachel, Cleveland, OH "The most ambitious debut single from a rap artist in years. Atlas sees himself being huge and he might be, but the song itself doesn't bring anything new to the table" - Rolling Stone "I dont know if Atlas is trying to be taken seriously or not. I dont know if hes trying to re-define hip-hop or just fuck around. But I know that for almost four minutes I was incredibly entertained." - NME Lyrics Summer time and I wait up For this fame to stay up Stay up and catch up to my name I aint no lame duck I am a full throttle sophisticated lyricist Kobe Bryant of words: Dont need no assist I can always hold my own Sorry if you're hella pissed But not really I'm not really sorry See only I could write this song No I never could do this wrong african safari, we eatin' calamari. So with quality like this why the fuck should I be sorry I'm just here to be the next great artist tHis is my second introduction. This is the smartest If you're still unsure about who I am Stick around I'll prove I aint no fucking scam stay for the next verse so you can fucking understand I dont cheat, i dont want to dirty my fucking hand This is the song The one you've been waiting for This is the song That make a song so much more This'll be the one You want to talk about This is the hip-hop song That'll bring the crowd out Oh now the first verse is over Introductions over so I'm right here for ya You already thinkin it so I'm askin it: What happened to hip hop Bass lines have been replaced with bass drops Everyone selling out. Everyone trying to get ontop Fuck I wont stop until it stops Ya'll niggas aren't hip hop; ya'll niggers unhip-pop oh I'm not here to try to save the genre It dont need saving I'm just rappin' a mantra We just need to be natural: less drama Bring back the hope and change, Barack Obama Can we stop acting like we all some fuckin profound shit We just fuckin hos, tight ass, round shit So no damn rapper should move to be a saint Sometimes we so sinful I think we must faint We gotta feed, drink and always fuck a blondie George Orwell knew it well, oh my Gandhi See I'm not workin for ye, I'm just workin for me I'm rappin for me. Rappin' to pay my fee But I'll fuckin' do it hard try not to go wrong Thats why I call it the next great song This is the song The one you've been waiting for This is the song That make a song so much more This'll be the one You want to talk about This is the hip-hop song That'll bring the crowd out Yeah listen, why is it whenever I hear the radio sound Its like all the rappers been buried in the ground Shit I dont wanna have to make great songs alone Do it on my own: no farm, home grown So come on everybody lets get busy Lets make a real record lets not get pissy Get it together no need to get hissy fit your sound this isnt pop so theres no need to get fizzy In due time I know I'll feel the spotlight Be so high like I'm flyin' over kites But for noe I dont need to be that arrogant Let my verses speak cause they're so elegant Nigga I never said I was the best I'm just here saying my verses are very relevant You can say I'm wrong and you can still be strong But you still gotta listen to my new hip hop song, lets go This is the song The one you've been waiting for This is the song That make a song so much more This'll be the one You want to talk about This is the hip-hop song That'll bring the crowd out Sounds Like Edited by user 11 July 2013 16:39:36(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
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genocidal king		#19 Posted : 11 July 2013 16:57:48(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Moderators, Registered Joined: 21/07/2009(UTC) Posts: 54,407 Location: Leeds, England Thanks: 3469 times Was thanked: 11549 time(s) in 5886 post(s)		OOC: Nice work. Always been impressed by Atlas since you started him out.


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Osprey037[Reported Failure]		#20 Posted : 12 July 2013 01:34:36(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2010(UTC) Posts: 2,348 Thanks: 1149 times Was thanked: 1780 time(s) in 805 post(s)		Originally Posted by: genocidal king OOC: Nice work. Always been impressed by Atlas since you started him out. OOC: thanks. I'm glad you enjoy him. I certainly enjoy writing his songs.
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