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Offline snap_itshannah  
#1 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:36:23(UTC)
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TITLE: A Flatline Blur
BY: Destinee Girard/Adele Gillet
GENRE: Indie rock, folk rock, alternative rock
LABEL: Liberation/Nomad Records


The song starts off with a mellow acoustic guitar being played. The song has a very relaxed, almost depressing feel to it, as if the singers have given up on life, and are just getting out their life story before they die. It's an odd choice for the first song on the album, but DESTINEE&ADELE are anything but an ordinary band. Adele's lower pitched voice comes in first, as she sings about the depressing idea of the people that you think are your friends avoiding you. When Destinee's higher pitched, almost operetic, voice joins in in the fourth line of the first verse, the song takes on an even more depressing style. Both of their voices mixed together takes on the feel of a church choir. As Destinee begins the second verse, the sound of a violin starts to play along with the guitar. The violin plays a Southern soul sort of feel as Destinee's angelic, high voice sings about the awkward conversations that at least everybody has had once in their lives. The song remains the same tempo, but Destinee and Adele's voice pick up the pace in the third verse, as Adele starts it off, her voice perfectly incapsulating the image she is trying to portray in the first three lines; the image of a dark bar or cafe, where only lonely people stay. When Destinee starts to sing, her voice adds a sense of psychological anxiety. Although her voice is beautiful and pure, she sings about the strange actions that are associated with being alone for a long period of time. The song has taken on a slightly disturbing tone, even though the melody and beat have never changed. When Destinee and Adele sing the one line together, the unannounced combination of their voices is almost like a shot to the heart. The last two lines of the third verse have a sense of regret and "giving up" to them, both Destinee and Adele's voices going a bit lower as they sing their lines. There's a small instrumental break as the guitar continues on with it's painfully somber melody. A banjo being plucked joins in for a brief moment, giving the song another layer of lonliness that is associated with being in the deep South. Adele starts off the next verse, as she often does, with her deep, beautiful voice setting up the mood once again of an abandoned bar or restaurant where somebody is playing the piano. When both of their voices come together, the idea of "wordless words" and "nerves" become a choir event, reiterating the uselessness of life sometimes. The music seems to get softer when Destinee sings the last line of the fourth verse. The instruments continue on, as if they were playing out the song, when they suddenly all stop, and Adele sings, in almost a whisper, the last line of the song. There is one last note from the guitar, and the song ends.

Destinee
Adele
Both


My friends are working on avoiding me
So when we meet, I keep my mouth really busy
Talk out my nervous energy

It never works
I throw darts at the wall and get sloppy


But it's alright now
If I seem surprised, it's just a joke I'm trying out
But if it floats, I guess I'll keep it around


A woman gestures lazily
Through the hood in my eyes, I see her shaking her jewelry
It casts a perfect light on me

I feel moved, and that's strange
But lately, I've been acting really strangely
So it's alright now

I'm keeping distracted to blunt my reactions
And anyhow
You think less when there's less for you to think about

A paralyzed puppet sits stiff in the window
Grinding his teeth and playing piano
All his songs bleed together in a flatline blur

A broken litany of worthless words
Creating space while your drinks get served
I know it gets on your nerves

Just try to pretend like it's not work

[color=orange]A little denial never hurts


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#2 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:40:55(UTC)
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erich:i will never believe these girls are actually french. they capture americana at it's best.its a good thing you two are blonde,or else you'd be fighting me off with sticks.
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#3 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:43:45(UTC)
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Adele: Ahem. I'm am not blonde, thank you very much. Only Destinee is.

Destinee: Adele couldn't pull off being blonde even if she tried.

Adele: Psh...

Destinee: Yeah, I take that back. Adele actually looks really good as a blonde...

Adele: But thank you!
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#4 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:50:58(UTC)
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OOC: Good work as always, especially on the lyrics :3 on a completely unrelated note, how are you getting the youtube embed bbcode to work? it's being ornery with me, which is why I haven't had a soundalike on any of my rp's for a while.
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#5 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:51:37(UTC)
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erich:so you are not,miss adele.and thus i have been proven to be a whole lot less smooth than i thought."* drinks from his flask,knowing the old hess charm is just a myth*
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#6 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:54:02(UTC)
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OOC: Thanks, doll.

Um... I reckon I'm still doing it the way I've always done it. [YOUTUBE]youtubechannelthingyweeeeeh[/YOUTUBE]
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#7 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:56:18(UTC)
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erich:so you are not,miss adele.and thus i have been proven to be a whole lot less smooth than i thought."* drinks from his flask,knowing the old hess charm is just a myth*


Adele: Psh, maybe you ought to lay off of that flask a little then. Can't even make out basic colors.
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#8 Posted : 21 April 2013 12:58:43(UTC)
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OOC: hmm i guess it's my punkass computer or something then, because that's what I've been doing. damn compooters. i'm half asian and i barely know how to work this thing. i'm a disgrace!
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#9 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:02:27(UTC)
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OOC: hmm i guess it's my punkass computer or something then, because that's what I've been doing. damn compooters. i'm half asian and i barely know how to work this thing. i'm a disgrace!


OOC: You know, sweetie, sometimes I think I know things about you, and then you say something like, "I'm half asian," and my head is blown. Stop that.
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#10 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:05:32(UTC)
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ooc:half asian mr jones? you should at least be able to build a computer from a calculator and an old gameboy.


erich:perhaps.*he looks at the flask and tosses it over his shoulder.* in my defense,you two do look similar.for all i know,you may be a real blonde. i have never gawked at your eyebrows.
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#11 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:09:30(UTC)
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OOC: I suppose the mental picture you folks have of me is henceforth going to have squinty-er eyes?
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#12 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:14:01(UTC)
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ooc:yes,after knowing your middle name,i had you looking like kal penn with long hair and a gotee. yes,i know how racist this sounds.
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#13 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:18:14(UTC)
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OOC: If I looked like Kal Penn with long hair and a goatee that'd be awesome. I'd totally rock the indian metalhead look.
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#14 Posted : 21 April 2013 13:22:30(UTC)
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ooc:i;d love to pull off that look too.indians and their fucking awesome hair.
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#16 Posted : 21 April 2013 14:08:46(UTC)
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OOC: I can never figure out how old you are either. I can't handle this. #high #drunk #dead
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#17 Posted : 21 April 2013 14:31:18(UTC)
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#18 Posted : 21 April 2013 14:32:05(UTC)
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#19 Posted : 22 April 2013 00:14:16(UTC)
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#20 Posted : 22 April 2013 00:19:18(UTC)
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Hayden: Am I the only one who read this multiple times because I have a dirty mind? 'So when we meet, I keep my mouth really busy' The song is awesome girls, really loving what you're doing.

OOC: Great job once again :)


Adele: That was definitely the intent. To be sexual.

Destinee: It was...?


OOC: Thank you so much, T. :)
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