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Offline kandii  
#1 Posted : 19 May 2013 06:22:08(UTC)
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Album : Epiphany
Track : Mirror
Artist : Coke
Length : 5:O6
Genre : PBR&B
Label : Tric-Jam Records
Written By : Airemese Smith , Nina Tarantino


Quote:
" That self evaluation in the mirror ... its always dreadful . Forced to face everything you have been trying to hide , the reality , because no matter how much makeup you have on , mirrors don't lie . "


Background of the Lyrics
The song is kind of split into 2 parts , the first verse , written by me , is about a conversation between a girl and her mirror . She seems quite delusional because her boyfriend has left for good , but she is still holding on , refusing to let go . It occurs a lot of times because a girl is afraid of getting hurt and so she throws her self in this la la land where every one of her relationships last forever . The second verse , written by Rum , is about a girl ranting herself in her bathroom mirror . She smiles all day , but behind closed doors is a depressed drunk . ( At the same time it could be about a stripper ... model ... even singer ) She has strong feelings about the worth of her life , because she feels that she isn't being "real" . She is an emotional train wreck inside but she is forced to act strong . Everybody sees her as this and as that , but they don't pay attention to the real her . So now here they are , in front of this mirror , talking to it and asking it questions . Then breaking down with the words : I just want to love me , I want to make myself love me .

The Description of the Song
You can hear Coke vocalizing just as the beat falls in . She sings the first three lines in a soft tone and the fourth one with a little bit of an attitude , getting defensive . Really because she knows he wont , but she doesn't want to believe it . Then you hear Coke's voice fade in a little louder , its the mirror talking to her . Her voice goes back to a soft tone , like she is full of doubt's while having an epiphany . When she gets to the bridge , the beat remains on the same , just the last bang missing , making a drastic change in the feeling . That last missing bang , making you feel like the truth has just hit you . Like you've just opened your eyes and now can finally see the truth . She's asking the mirror questions , questions she already knows the answer to . Her voice is a neutral tone during the whole bridge but gets lower as she sings " Your looking at her now , are you satisfied now ? " because it is the Mirror talking , but really its herself . Once she starts singing the hook , you can hear 2 different versions of her voices , which is the 2 girls in front of the mirror . One version of Coke's voice is high , the other is low and they are in perfect harmony . During the chorus , her voice is a little weaker , and you can hear the pain and struggle in it as she tries to tell the mirror what to say and why . In the second verse her voice is very high , but again on a soft tone , giving off a bitter feeling on this version . You can hear her take breaths in between every line , making it sound like she was crying and sniffling in between everything she is saying . Then on the last 2 lines her voice drops from being high to being very low . Just then the bridge and hook and starts again just like it did the first time , just different words . The chorus is the same as well but you can hear Coke vocalize over it and drag some words in a different tone . As soon as the Chorus is over the music ends but Coke's voice fades in and out in a neutral tone singing the outro and ending the song .



[Verse 1]
My man left me the other day
On his way out , pushed me out of his way
But I know he'll be back soon
Don't look at me like you don't know that too
Your fear of reality
Threw you in this indefinite fantasy
I guess I should stop talking to myself
Staring at these reflections of myself

[Bridge]
Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the one destined to fall ?
Your looking at her now
Are you satisfied now ?
Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the weakest of them all ?
Your looking at her now
Are you satisfied now ?

[Hook]
Listen mirror as I beg and plead
Cant you lie a bit
So I can lie a bit , to myself
No no no no , no no no no
Watch mirror as I put on this mask
Cant you just lie a bit
So I can lie a bit , to myself
No no no no , no no no no

[Chorus]
Just tell me I'm lovely
Only for tonight, Only for ...
Even though I'm trashy
I just want to love me
( That's all I want , that's all I want )
I want to make myself love me

[Verse 2]
I've been staring here forever
Surprised you haven't cracked yet
Tell me what's up with this long endeavor
Why haven't I just died yet ?
God forgive me for thinking like this
But you know I don't mean it
Cause you know I'm a coward
Made of the very Tequila I devour

[Bridge]
Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the most broken of them all ?
Your looking at her now
Are you satisfied now ?
Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the real stranger after all ?
Your looking at her now
Are you satisfied now ?

[Hook]
Listen mirror as I beg and plead
Cant you lie a bit
So I can lie a bit , to myself
No no no no , no no no no
Watch mirror as I put on this mask
Cant you just lie a bit
So I can lie a bit , to myself
No no no no , no no no no

[Chorus]
Just tell me I'm lovely
Only for tonight, Only for ...
Even though I'm trashy
I just want to love me
( That's all I want , that's all I want )
I want to make myself love me

[Outro]
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Who's the greatest of them all ?
She's nowhere to be found
You should try looking around





Edited by user 19 May 2013 18:29:55(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

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#2 Posted : 19 May 2013 06:32:21(UTC)
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Amy-Jayne:- wow this song is epic girl I'm your number 2 fan



ooc:- well done Kandii the lyrics are great the artwork is awesome too well done :)
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Offline kandii  
#3 Posted : 19 May 2013 06:45:58(UTC)
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Originally Posted by: AmyJayneXoX Go to Quoted Post
Amy-Jayne:- wow this song is epic girl I'm your number 2 fan

ooc:- well done Kandii the lyrics are great the artwork is awesome too well done :)


Coke : Really ? Aww thanks , Rum and I appreciate it :D

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#4 Posted : 19 May 2013 07:47:10(UTC)
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