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TP wrote:Or
I got testicles
Shaped like vegetables
An onion on the left
A cabbage on the right
And I'm feeling very lucky
Cuz I'm doing Alright
lol Lol, thats not very complex you know. I want people to be shocked but remember I said I don't like to mix fruits nor vegetable and sex. Thats why I hate eating banana's in front of guys.
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I'll always be willing to help, Steph. (:
Sample OTT bikz lyric bits'n'bobs -
Last winter I walked alone and I met you my dear friend
Knew that I had found somebody to stay with me until the end
Finally my true love is here one good omen I adore
Now I live with so many like you I am lucky nevermore
You're the luckiest thing
That has ever come unto me
Now your luck is nothing
I am living within a conspiracy
Do you know where you're going
Can you see me as before
Now with each deadly plume of your black lotus bloom
I become colourless and nevermore
Having you in my life is the most important thing to me
So I let you live in here and made a whole conspiracy
Every one of my friends is so special but you I live for
Now I must degenerate as you shall see me nevermore
I call it a conspiracy though some would call it an unkindness
Such a rude name for a wonderful lover suffering blindness
My eyes are slowly closing exactly at the same time as your
Black lotus is flowering we must be different nevermore
You stole the sun the moon the stars
And then you stole my heart
You created the world
Now it is only blurred
I'm on one knee to your claw
Love me forevermore
Now with each deadly plume of your black lotus bloom
I become colourless and nevermore
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There lay my second chance
I should have taken it in both hands
I should have let you take my hand away with you
Thought you were full of scorn
But you were but a rose with her thorns
And you were waiting to take my hand away with you
I'm on my way
Least I could do
Demons to slay
For you
I'll limp for you if you can't walk
I'll sing for you if you can't talk
I'll risk for you my lack of health
I'll care for you more than myself
No pride embarrassment or fear
No self-doubt or confusion here
I can't give all only relate
Since you asked for me Cate
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You've been my gimmick always long I may love you but I'm slipping
These locks of hair and pounds of sin synonymous for the clipping
I look so different and so wrong no longer me I'm just faking
When rulers fail and losers win then I'm all there for the taking
I can't stand up for falling down if I fail and lock myself in
I can't fall down for standing up if I win with this synonym
The floor is clean unlike my mind it's time for extra remaking
When failures rule and winners lose then I'm all there for the taking
Now my head's done time for the knife I don't need you when I'm starving
Litres of blood and pounds of sin synonymous for the carving
This may be the end of my life how much do I need the waking
When rulers fail and losers win then I'm all there for the taking
Cover the floor in blood and hair
No longer needed anywhere
Another suicide a death anonymous
I feel the pain inside it's all synonymous
Years as a fool when failures rule
Step in my shoes when winners lose
There's but a fool inside these shoes
Failures rule winners lose
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Lewis when I think of you wasting away
One year six months one week or just four days
How long will you last if you can't get what you need
When will your grim reaper come if no-one will bleed
Don't push back that perfect hair
Because I care too much to see what's there
I know it seems mythical but don't deny
It may be atypical but don't you cry
You don't have to beat the rest
Because you are the best
As long as you're my Lewis |
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WOW THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an Epic piece of ART how long did it took you to write that?
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Since Bik posted some of hers (which btw, has some of the most crisp imagery I've read, and it even sparked a little chill, bravo :D)... I'll share too. This is a song I finished a little while back called "Every Bitter Pill". - Tread on glass with broken feet and line your soles with lead
You say it takes away the pain, but no - it distracts you instead
You can ask all that you can of what the saints and sinners say
Though the truth that's close to home could easily blow you away
But that's up to fate
It's hard to be reciprocating when you're acting up like this
And you can't trace your own mistakes when you think they don't exist
You can cut me like a common cord when the line between us fails
But can your train of thought communicate when it's gone off the rails
Take a pencil and draw out your history's arc
Mark everyone you hurt as a mere anomaly on your chart
You can go to your church and have the saints and sinners pray
But redemption cannot save you when you wish the chance away
So keep swallowing every bitter pill
Dress it all up - just dress to kill
It's all a battle of the stronger will
And you're losing it
It's hard to be reciprocating when you're acting up like this
And you can't trace your own mistakes when you think they don't exist
You can cut me like a common cord when the line between us fails
But can your train of thought communicate when it's gone off the rails
How can you fight your demons off when they're not even there
And can you write your resolution knowing people might not care- My Blog: http://thisislewismason.tumblr.com/Visit that if you're interested enough to see what I write, as I post most new stuff on there. Off the top of my head, I think the first page has "Break It To You", "vampiresexist" and maybe "Hello January" on it which I'm particularly happy with. |
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xNightsidex wrote:I really want to hit Undelete to see what it said, hahah :P :L go for it, it was like my penis is from venis or something :P |
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Wow Lewis that good too, you guys make me look bad!! I feel like a kindergardener compared to that!
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Wow Lewis that good too, you guys make me look bad!! I feel like a kindergardener compared to that! Well, ACTUALLY i just hacked into their accounts and posted them for Lewis and Bikz to make it look like there good, when actually it was mine. But shh. ;) |
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stephaniewazhere wrote:WOW THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an Epic piece of ART how long did it took you to write that?
It's a mixture of words from some songs I've written - "Black Lotus" (first one) and "Lewis & Rosie" (last one) are from the Christmas #1 race on the old TBSG. "Cate" and "Failures Rule, Winners Lose" (two middle ones) were two of Rayne Berry's songs from the old TRSG. So, over many months. But thanks a lot all the same! (: |
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Wow Lewis that good too, you guys make me look bad!! I feel like a kindergardener compared to that! Ta Steph :) And you shouldn't do! Art's different from person to person, and gotta remember, you could probably own us lyrically in your own language as our first is English :D And one day you might even own us at that, hahah! And honestly AJ :P |
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bikz wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:WOW THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an Epic piece of ART how long did it took you to write that?
It's a mixture of words from some songs I've written - "Black Lotus" (first one) and "Lewis & Rosie" (last one) are from the Christmas #1 race on the old TBSG. "Cate" and "Failures Rule, Winners Lose" (two middle ones) were two of Rayne Berry's songs from the old TRSG. So, over many months. But thanks a lot all the same! (: I really like it, It would take me years to write something like that.
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xNightsidex wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Wow Lewis that good too, you guys make me look bad!! I feel like a kindergardener compared to that! Ta Steph :) And you shouldn't do! Art's different from person to person, and gotta remember, you could probably own us lyrically in your own language as our first is English :D And one day you might even own us at that, hahah! And honestly AJ :P In Spanish maybe ;) But in English I don't have a chance, lol.
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GirlSpice wrote:Oh well.. she sits outside then. LOL! |
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Trust me a lot of rappers would have died for that verse lol |
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A lot of rappers would have died hearing that verse, TP. (Oh, and if the crap you've written makes good posts, then "TP is an abbreviation for tampon" also does.) I tried writing a Spanish song when I was learning Spanish, it was called "Hechizado". Seriously bad, really messy. Won't try again. (: Edited by user 01 August 2009 07:04:20(UTC)
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bikz wrote:A lot of rappers would have died hearing that verse, TP. (Oh, and if the crap you've written makes good posts, then "TP is an abbreviation for tampon" also does.)
I tried writing a Spanish song when I was learning Spanish, it was called "Hechizado". Seriously bad, really messy. Won't try again. (: I tried writing in French after being inspired by Placebo's earlier song Protege Moi, but yeah, ditto, I fell flat on my face :P |
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bikz wrote:A lot of rappers would have died hearing that verse, TP. (Oh, and if the crap you've written makes good posts, then "TP is an abbreviation for tampon" also does.)
I tried writing a Spanish song when I was learning Spanish, it was called "Hechizado". Seriously bad, really messy. Won't try again. (: Lol I would like to see your lyrics, You do like bewitched stuff.
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Code:"Ishtar" by Paul Ferguson
Drum Tab
140bpm
I: play once
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4 ||H---|H---|OH--|H---||H---|OH--|H---|H---||OH--|H---|H---|OH--||H---|H---|OH--|H---||H---|OH--|H---|H---||
4 ||-S--|---S|--S-|--S-||----|-S--|--S-|-S--||--S-|----|-S--|--S-||-S--|--S-|----|-S--||--S-|-S--|--S-|----||
||B---|B---|-B--|-B--||B---|-B--|--B-|--B-||--B-|-B--|B---|B---||-B--|-B--|B---|-B--||--B-|---B|--B-|-B--||
II: repeat twice
4 ||O---|H---|H---|O---||H---|H---|O---|H---||H---|O---|H---|H---||
4 ||B---|--B-|-B--|B---||-B--|--B-|B---|--B-||-B--|B---|-B--|--B-||
||-s-|--s|-s-|-s-||-s-|-s-|-s-|--s||-s- |-s- |-s- |-s-|| **these are triplet snares to be superimposed on the above
III: play once
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5 ||t---|T---|----|t--T|----||t---|T---|----|t--T|----||----|----|----|-t-t|----||----|----|----|----|----||
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||B---|B--B|----|B--B|-B--||B---|B--B|----|B--B|-B--||B---|B---|B---|-B-B|-B--||B---|B---|B---|----|----||
END
KEY
X=crash *=splash R=ride
T=hi tom t= mid tom
H=closed hi-hat O=open hi-hat
S=snare
B=kick |
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Here's A Sneak Peak
A Hungry Tigress
I'm a Tigress on the loose
and I'm really hungry
Lots of hunger fills inside
Lots of hunger fills inside
I'm a tigress in disguise
On The Loose
On The Loose
On The Loose
Running across the grass
Staring right at your tool
Doing it from far
So I wont start to drool
There's expectation
Sexual craving
I'm impatient
So no procrastination
Chorus
I'm a really hungry tigress
I need something good to eat
Can You?
Please the one tha's really hungry
Heard you have the best of meat
(and the lyrics just get better)
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Based on "she-wolf" yeh? All these songs about clinical therianthropy .... :P |
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bikz wrote:Based on "she-wolf" yeh? All these songs about clinical therianthropy .... :P Yes inspired by it. It has the same paste.
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