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#1 Posted : 18 September 2013 12:35:44(UTC)
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Radio Vine
Us
Echos of Silence
2013 Studio 60 Records
Radio Vine/ El Durio/ Vine Creations


After the countdown stops, the screen in millions of homes fade to black to the start of the premiere of Radio Vine ‘Us’ music video.

It begins with Radio Vine sitting in a dark chair behind a black background. The camera begins to zoom slowly towards her. She is naked, a black sheet covers her lower body. She covers her breast with arms as her hair is covering her face. The camera zooms a little more to then a scene that showcases Radio and El Durio, an white man with red hair, an strong jaw line, very good looking with an tattoo of a red rose on her left arm and music notes on his right. They are laying in a middle of a beautiful green garden where white smoke centers both of them, red roses grow around them. Radio rests her head on her muscular chest. She looks up to the sky and smiles to the clouds moving smoothly across the blue sky. El looks at Radio and then grins. “ I love you Radio…” She gets up and begins to look at him, she smiles but then frowns. “ Love me how…?” she askes him. She looks down at his arm with the music notes tattoo. “ More than music.. I’ll never hurt you… abuse you… make you feel unwanted.” he said. Radio smiles. El gets up on his feet and then reaches her hands out to Radio for her to grab it. She gets up along with him as she picks her up and begins to swing her in a circle as she laughs playfully. Her yellow dress spins in circles as she hair goes along with the smooth wind. She smiles and El then kisses her on the cheek. He stops to her rests her head on his shoulder. She looks up to a man in all black walking slowly though the green garden. His face is covered (Shawn Stevens) He walks towards Radio as Radio begins to looks fearful. Her eyes begin to be fulled with water, she holds on to El’s back tightly as she puts her down. He looks at her. “ What’s wrong?” Radio begins to cry as a loud scream yelling “ Michelle!” is heard. She puts her head down to her looking back up to only dust being in front of her face. It clears up to the man in all black staring her right in her face. She covers her mouth to keep from screaming.

It returns to Radio sitting behind the black background with her head down. It zooms in a little closer, focusing on Radio’s head. Its get to make a close up to Radio looking up to the camera, her eyes look weak and she winks to many flashbacks beginning to happen…

It cuts to Radio walking down an long hallway with an bright white light shining though her dark black dress, her hair looks wet. She walks down the long hallway, dragging her nails and hands along the peark white walls leaving red blood on the walls as it drops slowly to the brown wooden floor. She walks towards the man in all black, his face is dark and it has a dark jacket on. She bites her jaw, you can see the angry in her eyes. She focuses on the main as the beautiful orchestra arrangement in the beginning of ‘Us’ begins to play with dramatic violins and piano arrangement. She drags her red hand along the walls as the man in all black smiles slightly towards Radio.

Its cuts to Radio screaming on the top of her lungs, screaming and yelling, “ Please don’t!!!” She is gettinf dragged, in a all white night grown. She digs her nails deeply into the wooden floor, her nails begin to blend back. An deep and fearless voice speaks out, “ Come on bitch” she yells. Radio screams, looking into a empty room as her tears drop on the red blood that is in the lines her nails created on the floor. She is flipped over to the man in all black looking at Radio. She looks at him, she looks restless. He gets closer as she grabs her chest, and looks painful in her face. It shows the a scene where El and Radio stand on the peak of a white mountain, Radio rests her head on his shoulder. The sky is dark. “ I will never hurt you…” he whispers in her ears.

It cuts back to Radio walking down the long hallway. The camera shows a long butcher knife in her hands. The voilens and drums all rise up to a higher pitch in a deep and dramatic climax. The man in black then smiles while looking at Radio. She closes her eyes as a voice over comes on. ‘ I’ll never hurt you.” in a deep voice. She opens her eyes and then stops.

It cuts to the man in black carrying Radio over his shoulders as he screams, beating on her back, kicking and screaming as he has a gun in his back pocket. He stops on top of a marble stair and staircase. He throws Radio head first on the marble stairs as in slow motion shows Radio falling down the stairs. He quickly grabs the staircase, trying to hold on. He stands on top of the stairs, looking at her struggle to hold on. She looks down the stairs to see a big pool of black water. She begins to slip as she screams. “ Steven!!!” He doesn’t respond. She slips again as the water begins to move. It shows Radio holding her chest on the floor again as she screams. Thunder is heard spiking against the screen. It cuts back to Radio stopping in the middle of the hallway as the blood on the pearl white walls drops faster as the ocheshta gets louder as Radio takes a deep breath. She relaxes her shoulder. The man in black steps one closer. The orchestra gets louder and louder as Radio begins to suddenly run in full speed screaming as tears drop from her eyes, she screams, running towards the man. She smiles and then laughs. He begins to run full speed at her as in slow motion shows Radio running as her black dress seems it leaving behind. She begin to rise up the knife, she gets louder with her screaming. It shows her holding her chest laying on the floor in pain, she screams, shaking her head quickly. It cuts back to Radio in slow motion jumping in the air, with the butcher knife, aiming for the man’s head. When the angle of the camera shows the knife aiming towards the top of his head, the thunder spikes. In seconds, Radio is seen in slow motion jumping to the floor lifeless as she hits her head on the floor and the knife then releases from the plum of her blood filled hands.

The camera returns to the scene where Radio is sitting in the chair, now she stands up, looking sad, with her head down as the original arrangement begins.


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Us like fire, everything that comes our way, we will burn.
No one is between us, us is space we are above,
everything that comes your way, we will destory.



Us is like war, Us is like the bees on the walls

A scene shows Radio and El at the top of the white mountain again as Radio lays on her head slowly on his chest, suddenly pouring rain comes down the dark sky. They are both wet as Radio closes her eyes. She runs to the edge of the mountain as she spreads out her arms and looks up to the sky as the rain touches her angelic voice. El runs behind her and hugs her from behind as Radio moves her head against his cheeks. He turns her around as she pushes her wet hair back as he kisses her slowly.

Us like the broken glass,
Us is like the violence in Iraq.
Shooting down any happiness that comes your way


The higher pitch of the instrumental is heard as Radio lays in a white bathtub, looking up to the camera singing the chorus. Her makeup is watered down as she looks up to the camera with white candles burning around her.



You are like us, we will never go as far
we're the ones who love so wrong. Who love so wrong, we will never go as far.
Too far down that road, it's too late to turn around. We're the ones who love so wrong,
we will never go as far...


She sings the last word with a long note as the man in black walks into the bathtub. The door swings opens. She looks with fear. He walks towards her with a Radio in his head. He walks slowly towards her as the music stops. You can hear a heart beat as Radio looks afraid as he approaches the bath with the Radio in his heads. He puts the Radio on the edge of the tub. “ If you live by music, you shall die by music…” Radio begins to gets up higher on the tub back. He lets go off the Radio as it begins to drop in slow motion, suddenly it shows the scene where Radio is slipping down the marble stairs. She holds on. He begins to walks slowly down the stairs, it then shows the Radio falling into the bathtub and Radio floating in the middle of a huge ocean in a red ballroom dress as it floats. She looks up playing with the dress as it shows the scene it begins to slip more quickly. The man approaches her, kicking her fingers with boots off the staircase. She screams and screams, in horror, her thrilling screams echos the house. He kicks one more time to her falling down the staircase in slow motion. Her face looks like she knew she was going to hit death.

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Us is like beautiful nightmares, kisses that slowly go away.
Us is like music, it can end anyway.
Us are romantic films, tears are the reason we fade away

It cuts to the scene of Radio floating in the middle of the ocean as the red ballroom dress floats heavily on her body. She looks over to her left to El Durio floating up in all red suit on as he gets to the top of the water and notices Radio. He smiles. It then quickly cuts to the Radio falling in the tub as Radio quickly jumps out, landing on the floor. He jumps on her back and grabs her hair. She screams. It then shows her falling down the stairs, reaching her hands to the man as she realizes what she did. He runs down the stairs quickly, trying to save Radio. She is near the pool of black water, she falls into it, grabbing the man along with her. An big splash of water comes up to now El and Radio in red in the middle of the ocean beginning to drown.

Another scene comes up with Radio in a boarded room with black crows flying and she is wearing a black short dress with red heels on as she sings passionly for the chorus.

You are like us, we will never go as far
we're the ones who love so wrong. Who love so wrong, we will never go as far.
Too far down that road, it's too late to turn around. We're the ones who love so wrong,
we will never go as far...

The chorus begin to be arranged more slowly with only pianos in the background for the structure of the storyline. The camera is up in the sky, showing Radio and El drowing as the ocean water slowly turns red. You can see Radio’s dress beginning to sink. El Durio bowtie begins to float they all go under together as a dead red rose rises up from the bottom. Then shows the green garden with the red roses and flashes back to the black pool of water down at the staircase all decreasing the amount of water in the pool.


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We are in too deep, us are like a bottom of a deep pit.
We are so damn lucky, us are like hell in several heavens.
We dont even collide together, us are accidents waiting to happen.
Us is sin in this world, everyone's against us.

It shows quick flashback of El and Radio laying in a bed, smiling and laughing as he kisses on the cheek. Then shows Radio and Steven, his face shown, an very strong looking man, around his early 30’s, slow dancing with Radio in a middle of a room with severel mirrors. It then shows Radio eyes closed smiling to Steven opening to a wedding ring in it. She opens her eyes and looks to the right to El looking though a window, looking in. He turns away walking slowly to a black truck. The camera shows a farmhouse, brown as the chorus is now being heard as Radio holds falsetto adlibs and riffs. It shows Radio and El tossing with a glass of wine in their hands. The camera shows the black truck with ‘Newly Weds’ painted on the back of the truck. Steven is looking into the window as he becomes very angry. He gets in a dark blue truck.


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we will never make it as far.
Too far down that road, it's too late
to turn around.
We dont even collide together, us are accidents waiting to happen.


An blue trucks pulls it slowly near several white mountains. White smoke surrounds the car slowly as the man, around the age of 40 with red hair and a very manly jawline looks outside of the window as the wind blows heavily upon his strong face hitting the fogy window. He gets out of the car and looks up as Radio is on top of one of the white mountain, walking slowly with a long white wedding dress on, red water drops from her eyes. A shotgun is in her right hand as she looks to the edge with fear, but she approaches the edge so easily as she stops. She looks down at the man as he focuses on Radio. The camera shows the dark blue ocean water hitting the rocks on the shore.

Like the previous picture, she sings the chorus. The camera shows a full length shot of Radio in a glitter black dress, looks stunning as she stands their belting out the chorus. It then cuts too Radio covering her body with her legs and arm, naked to El Durio walking out of the darkness naked, he gets behind Radio’s back, putting her head down.


Radio lifts up the shotgun slowly as she begins to cry dramatically. The man starts to walk to the side, fearful as he focuses on the emotional Radio. Radio lifts up the shotgun. The camera shows her eyes clearing up. Her hands are shaking. " I love you..." The man screams " No!!!!!" as Radio begins to fall gracely off the edge as her body slowly begins to approach the ocean water.

The shotgun is resting nicely on her heart. The dress fills the air. She smiles as she drops. In slow motion, the man runs near the ocean, looking as Radio is almost near the water. A risky brown truck pulls up with bright white lights approaches behind the blue truck. The unknown man gets out of the car as the camera shows the big black boot hitting the dust with fire, madness.. guilt. The red head man looks to the truck as a big and horror sound of a water splashing is heard as the shotgun goes off. The man looks at the water as a red circle is in the middle of the ocean. A black and white scene approaches as Radio is shown laying on beautiful green grass, looking up at the sky, smiling as the red head man lays down on Radio's chest. " This is amazing..." The man looks at Radio.. " so are you..."

It switches back to the two naked El and Radio posing for somewhat a portait then suddenly Steven walks into the picture and stands behind them. Radio looks up to the scene cutting too Radio on the floor, holding her chest. She looks more comfortable now.
She grabs both ends of her shirt and rips it. You can see ‘US’ in red in the middle of her chest. She sings in a low register:

We will never go as far, we are too
far down this road. We will never go as far.
I'm sorry baby.

Its cuts back to:

The scene is transformed back to the red circle in the middle of the ocean as the white dress roses out of the red circle. The unknown man isn’t shown, his face is black and he is wearing all black. He looks up at the mountain top Radio jumped from as the red headed man is walking slowly turns the edge, emotionally. He grabs his chest as severel distrubing scenes flashes in front of you. The unknown man is behind him as he touches his back. " Michelle!" a loud scream is heard.

The last scene shows Radio laying on the camera, breathing hard, she smiles with a evil smirk to her. She looks over to El looking lifeless, more like he is died. He slowly looks over. “ Who’s Michelle?” She laughs. “ That’s my real name” His face becomes lifeless. Steven is standing in a doorway. He smiles then claps. “ Applause baby.” In the middle of the ocean is red water. It zooms out to the sky showcasing the white mountains. It fades out.
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Offline erich hess  
#2 Posted : 18 September 2013 12:39:17(UTC)
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erica:soooo good,but disturbing...i am not sure if i would ever watch it again,radio..i guess that is a good it is so powerful.
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#3 Posted : 18 September 2013 12:46:31(UTC)
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erica:soooo good,but disturbing...i am not sure if i would ever watch it again,radio..i guess that is a good it is so powerful.


Radio: GOOD. Hopefully people see the real meaning of the song and the term 'Us..." It's a lot, some of these are based on true events.
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#4 Posted : 19 September 2013 02:40:59(UTC)
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OOC: Brilliant work! Love how I can easily visualize each of the scenes, nice work with this. Definitely worth the long wait. Shame, this should have much more attention.
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#5 Posted : 19 September 2013 02:58:29(UTC)
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OOC: Brilliant work! Love how I can easily visualize each of the scenes, nice work with this. Definitely worth the long wait. Shame, this should have much more attention.


OOC; Thank you so much Jay. It was one of my favorite videos I've written, simply because the scenes are just brilliant. I know, I work my ass off for Radio but hopefully people understand it, but you always support me, so thank you again.
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#6 Posted : 19 September 2013 03:03:11(UTC)
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OOC: Amazingly done! Applause Your best RP to date for sure!
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#7 Posted : 19 September 2013 03:09:19(UTC)
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OOC - I would of commented sooner I have been busy, this is great work hun well done:)
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#8 Posted : 19 September 2013 03:16:47(UTC)
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OOC: Amazingly done! Applause Your best RP to date for sure!


OOC; Thank you Daniel :) <3 I think so too.. my best work.
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#9 Posted : 19 September 2013 03:17:46(UTC)
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OOC - I would of commented sooner I have been busy, this is great work hun well done:)


OOC ; I understand my love, thank you so much.
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#10 Posted : 19 September 2013 07:00:10(UTC)
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Kidd: Radio is a genius. weird, scary, talented genius.

OOC: That was great moquel really one of the best thing I read so far.

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#11 Posted : 19 September 2013 09:58:12(UTC)
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Kidd: Radio is a genius. weird, scary, talented genius.

OOC: That was great moquel really one of the best thing I read so far.


Radio: Thank you doll...

OOC: Thank you for the support
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Serenity Scott: I love it Radio! It's so... ugh, I can't even find the right word. This is just outstanding and different and it's like a movie based on a true story. Great going Radio!

OOC: The effort in this is outstanding! Great job Trey. I really love this! :) First Radio music video in agggess lol.
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#13 Posted : 20 September 2013 04:39:22(UTC)
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Serenity Scott: I love it Radio! It's so... ugh, I can't even find the right word. This is just outstanding and different and it's like a movie based on a true story. Great going Radio!

OOC: The effort in this is outstanding! Great job Trey. I really love this! :) First Radio music video in agggess lol.


Radio: Got you speechless huh bitch? YES, I FUCKING KNOW. :)

OOC: Thank you Tee.
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