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Offline djdrew43  
#1 Posted : 31 October 2014 09:41:05(UTC)
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the chours is in the song

[Verse 1]
oh let's go
This night I shall dream of your sexy black hair and brown-eyes.
Wrapped in echoes of our sweet-music,
I long to kiss from your sexy lips.
In my dreams, we fly in the sky skimming past vast continents and everybody asking why
The depths of all the oceans of the universe shall never separate our love.
Brilliant as angels floating above,the seas greet us from afar.
In the twilight our tender hearts meets
Adorned in white silk,are love chimes all the time .
I press your heart against mines so that our body melts into one.
You will always be my little rebel one.
the stars can fall down but I know why
girl I will see you in my eye.



[Verse 2]
Beauty appears to sing a love song in the morning
Never was my addiction given back to the shore
In despair I sat and stared at my mirror for hours
Now I wipe the fog off thinking I can see her clearer
Even though the moment's gone
I still couldn't help but notice
There's no more second guessing just trust
My dear to grasp to calm my fears
Only wish you could of saw its shadow
I want this one to catch your insecurities
One summer night we'll break through
And your silhouette will stay whenever I kiss you
You're the only truth I ever knew
Like tattoos we're twinned together

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freestylechamp on 31/10/2014(UTC), erich hess on 01/11/2014(UTC)
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#2 Posted : 31 October 2014 10:16:51(UTC)
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Tell me what you think
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#3 Posted : 31 October 2014 12:13:00(UTC)
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it was a song I wasn't expecting. The only thing I would say is to give us more of a backdrop to the song to sort of set us up for it. A song description, what was going though his mind when he went to make it. Otherwise it was good.

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#4 Posted : 01 November 2014 04:57:37(UTC)
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Thx I knew that I should had did that
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