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I just recently took creative writing and was inspired by asdf to try my own. Rate it however you feel. http://www.scribd.com/doc/21383855/The-ChildI didn't remember to proofread it so there's gonna be some grammatical errors. Edited by user 21 October 2009 21:33:06(UTC)
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Yeah, not too bad...grammatical errors aside..over use of commas, sentence structures and what not. |
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So, Kid goes to stay at an Inn, scares the Innkeeper, the end? |
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Inspired by me? Cool... ;)
Anyway, it is good and definitely interesting but I have to ask; "Will there be more?" cause it kind of ended abruptly. |
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sharinganerror wrote:I just recently took creative writing and was inspired by asdf to try my own. Rate it however you feel. http://www.scribd.com/doc/21383855/The-ChildI didn't remember to proofread it so there's gonna be some grammatical errors. you could get it published at lulu.com |
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