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User is suspended until 16/05/4760 03:38:29(UTC) stephaniewazhere  
#1 Posted : 16 January 2010 04:42:32(UTC)
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OOC: There are things you should know: The following will take place sometime in March, where the actual wedding will happen. Stephanie and Johnny have legally been married but the ceremony has not yet happened. A fake wedding took place so the papparazzi's can have their fun that way when the real wedding comes, there will be peace. Here is a sneak peak of what I've written and I need to know if its good or not. Remember that this has not taken place yet so do not reply in character.



Stephanie Fierce: Steven I can get you some help, please just put the gun down..
Silver Spoons: You were just like your mother…Sweet, gentle, fierce but weak
Stephanie Fierce: What? *takes a deep breath* You were the one who.. you killed my mom?

*Silver Spoon pulls back the trigger**

The next Seven Seconds:
Stephanie Fierce tries to take in some air she could not receive for some reason, the nerves in her body rush rapidly through her veins, pain then fills her whole body as if someone were drenching the soul out of her. She was unable to keep her balance and falls into a place where only white is seen

Stephanie’s Mom: Hello sweetheart
Stephanie: Mom ?
Mom: I’ve been looking for you!
Stephanie: Mom, is that you!
Mom: Yes sweetheart, it’s me! My gosh you look beautiful!
Stephanie: Mom, *Chills fill her soul*Oh my god Mom, how? How is this happening!
Doctor: Clear!
Johnny: *holding her hand* Babe, please don’t let me go, I love you honey, stay with me, don’t let me go….
Mom: I asked God if I could talk to you before you go back
Stephanie: Go back? Go back where….
Doctor: Clear!
Johnny: No, Come on babe, stay with me.
Doctor: Johnny sir, you’re going to have leave the room
Stephanie: I miss you so much mom
Doctor: Clear!
Nurse: Sorry but No heart beat yet, Doctor.
Johnny: I’m not fucking going nowhere.
Nurses: Sir we understand but you have to leave the room. *forces Jhonny out of the room*
Mom: I just want you to know that I always loved you and I always wanted the best for you
Stephanie: *begins to cry tear of gold* I wish you would of told me that before
*A tear rolls down Stephanie Fierce’s physical body”
Mom: I think you need to go back now sweetheart
Stephanie: No mom, what do you mean? Go back? I want to stay with you!
Mom: Me too sweetheart but its time for you to return, they are getting really worried
Doctor: Ok let’s try one more time.........1!!!
Stephanie: No!
Doctor: 2
Mom: I love you my baby, stay fierce!
Doctor: 3 and……… Clear!
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#2 Posted : 16 January 2010 05:11:18(UTC)
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OOC. Nice writing .... you're not killing orf our Fiercie are ya!? :O
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#3 Posted : 16 January 2010 05:12:26(UTC)
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bikz wrote:
OOC. Nice writing .... you're not killing orf our Fiercie are ya!? :O


OOC: Thanks and you'll have to find out when the full thing is posted ;)
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#4 Posted : 16 January 2010 05:15:29(UTC)
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OOC: That was very entertaining writing! Wow.
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#5 Posted : 17 January 2010 02:13:16(UTC)
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OOC: That was very entertaining writing! Wow.


OOC: Thank you! :]
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#6 Posted : 25 August 2011 06:27:30(UTC)
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OOC: I want to finish this and I will very soon. Even thought this happened a long while ago.

Edited by user 25 August 2011 06:28:54(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified
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#7 Posted : 25 August 2011 06:33:45(UTC)
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OOC: This is really cool and beautiful to read... and Daniel I liked it very much.. BUT if you are gonna Kill her again… do it for once and for all! because I would not support you again if you kill her today and decide to bring her back again tomorrow like a zombie from the dead... like you did before... It will be a little boring, if you do so... if you want to kill her, kill her forever... or if you wanna make her to live... let her live forverer LMAO...
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#8 Posted : 25 August 2011 06:38:58(UTC)
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Originally Posted by: Andre Gandra Go to Quoted Post
OOC: This is really cool and beautiful to read... and Daniel I liked it very much.. BUT if you are gonna Kill her again… do it for once and for all! because I would not support you again if you kill her today and decide to bring her back again tomorrow like a zombie from the dead... like you did before... It will be a little boring, if you do so... if you want to kill her, kill her forever... or if you wanna make her to live... let her live forverer LMAO...



OOC: LOL, not for this RP. This is the wedding RP., which takes place December 2009. I also had another thread, more detailed but it was days before the wedding where both me and asdf rp'd. I couldn't find it, though......


However on the whole death thing. for my upcoming major RP, I'm not sure if killing Stephanie Fierce is the best solution, I'm doing something quite different though.
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