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the strom		#1 Posted : 26 January 2010 14:24:53(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		to get eveyone hyped up for the new single the strom are playing 10 shows in Australia next month. a pub in Melbourne on the 1st fastivel hall in Melbourne on the 2nd a pub in Adelaide on the 3th Bonython Park in Adelaide on the 4th a pub in Perth on the 5th Steel Blue Oval in perth on the 8th Steel Blue Oval in perth on the 9th a pub in Sydney on the 11th Eastern Creek Raceway in sydney on the 12th fastivel hall in Melbourne on the 14th the band rhynos rage is opening for us and we are looking for a band to close for us. Edited by user 14 February 2010 00:46:23(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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the strom		#2 Posted : 01 February 2010 16:09:48(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		the show kicked up with rynos rage playing all the song's from there 1st single then they left the stage and the strom went on the king " how are you all tonite?" all the fan's sceamed the king "that sound's good i guess we know which song we should play 1st" ben then stated playing the intro to sceam and the fan's lost it and they where jumbing the whole time the king "that the stuff right there now what do you want us to play for you stick them up or the lost land?" the fan's yelled out the last land so the strom played the song ben " how do you like that?" crowd "play it agine!!!!" ben "maybe later now we are going to play a cover song here and the song is called just ace and it's a band called grinspoon" the strom then played that song and crowd was danceing around the the song ended the king " how do you like our fill in drumer" crowd "he is mad keep him" the king " we cant because he has a band of his own" crowd " boo" ben then played a random guittar solo the king " what was that i couldnt hear you" when the crowd where about to say boo the band begine to play one more time and the crowd forgot all about the whole thing then the song finshed ben "this is our last song it is a cover of a pop song" crowd "booooooooooooooooo!!" the the strom begine to play the omen and ben sceam out got you didnt i and crowd went crazy head bringing to that song the king "thats all we have time for is anyone seeing us in at fastival hall" crowd " hell yeah" ben " thats good then see you there everone but right now how about we stay here for a bit and talk to all of yeah crowd "hell yeah!!!!!!" Edited by user 01 February 2010 16:11:31(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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bdylan88		#3 Posted : 02 February 2010 05:39:31(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 05/05/2009(UTC) Posts: 1,225 Thanks: 9 times Was thanked: 15 time(s) in 11 post(s)		I liked it. Simple. effective. I personally would add some lyrics and a bit more description of the band and the reaction for the crowd. Keep on jamming! Hopefully we can catch you in concert soon! -The Bards
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the strom		#4 Posted : 02 February 2010 06:26:44(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		"thanks hope to carch you two" ben
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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Synxhard		#5 Posted : 02 February 2010 09:47:22(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 03/04/2009(UTC) Posts: 1,433 Location: Seattle Thanks: 22 times Was thanked: 33 time(s) in 16 post(s)		OOC: Personally, it would help to include a little more detail. Some ideas are what the song sounds like, what the band/audience does, etc. Also, try to mention the name of each song, cause saying 'they played a song gets a little repetitive'. Lastly, there are a lot of typos, might want to work on that just to make it easier to understand. Not trying to be critical, you sound promising.


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the strom		#6 Posted : 02 February 2010 15:33:15(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		ooc: thanks synxhard i will do all them thing's with my next rp
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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the strom		#7 Posted : 11 February 2010 17:39:50(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		Eastern Creek Raceway rynos rage kick of there songs from there die hard single and leave the king:how are you all tonight,now let's stop talking and kick this off with the song sceam the band start playing the song slow then get faster and faster and til the end of the song crowd:hell yeah we want more!! the king:you want more? will here some more this song is called the omen the strom start to play the chiling inrto of the song then they riff come by the time the song was finshed there where 32 riffs played ben:ok then what to do now how about creeping death the strom hit the intro right on time and the play the song way faster then its ment to be the king:now lets play one more song this one is called the lost land the whole room go's deep black and the king starts to sing the sad bit of the song and the guitars kick in so then the bass and drums come in fast and the song just keeps going til the end solo get's played sport on crowd:encore!!!!!!! the king: he was jokeing about that ok now lets play a cover song of a great rock band this song is just ace the strom plays the fast song like it's ment to be...fast,the crowd dance though the hole song the king: now then let's play a song called the strom the lighting sound starts and go's for a minute the the song plays,the singing is heavy as it's ever been and the guitars and more faster the king: that song is going to kill me some day now then let's play a song namedhigh way robber the song is played fast like it's ment to be even the singing is fast ben:time for one more song this one is the most hardest song i have ever witten and it go's out to all the so called cool people this song is called hate!!! the song starts right away with everone playing like mad and it keep's going on like that til the king starts to play the break down which is slow then they end it with a guitar solo the king:thanks for comeing everone see you's soon
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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TheCDs		#8 Posted : 11 February 2010 17:48:18(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 02/05/2009(UTC) Posts: 729 Was thanked: 1 time(s) in 1 post(s)		OOC: Overall I would say it is better than the first one. One more tip is that you don't have to have your band members announce and name every song. A simpler "As they finished the crowd burst into applause while the band immediately ripped into Creeping Death." These kind of touches help the RP flow more like a real concert. After all not many concerts feature breaks between each song so the artist can tell you its name.
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the strom		#9 Posted : 11 February 2010 23:08:10(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		occ:thanks i try that with my next rp
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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genocidal king		#10 Posted : 11 February 2010 23:31:23(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Moderators, Registered Joined: 21/07/2009(UTC) Posts: 54,407 Location: Leeds, England Thanks: 3469 times Was thanked: 11549 time(s) in 5886 post(s)		OOC: also try and include the other members of the band in the RP, as it looks more like a solo act with a backing band if you dont. They dont have to speak, but include descriptions of what they are doing or something. Looks pretty good so far though

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the strom		#11 Posted : 12 February 2010 06:31:34(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		ooc:ill try that next time to
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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the strom		#12 Posted : 14 February 2010 00:44:07(UTC)
Rank: Advanced Member Groups: Registered Joined: 29/12/2009(UTC) Posts: 336		festival hall the crowd where screaming for the strom to come out with some people crowd surfing to get in front of the stage.the king then walked out the king: hey everone we got somebad new's the band rynos rage cant play because the guitast got hit by a car not hard but it still hurt has arm's so he cant play crowd: boo the king: yeah i know i know but now we have to play more song's crowd:yeah!!!!! ben then walked on the stage with has gutar ben: are you's ready to rock? crowd:hell yeah!!!! the rest of the band walked out and isacc got his bass and played a tiny bass solo and the crowd screamed there heads off ben:now i know what song you's want know...SCREAM!!! SCREAM the king: how was that? the crowd just screamed the king:thats good hey psyco show them a solo psyco then played a guitar solo the king now let's hit it!!! the omen crepping death ben:are you's all alive out there crowd:yes!!!! ben: thats good you wont be after this song hate just ace the king: man that song just ace just makes me crazy and i can tell that it makes you's crazy it's a freaking good song now then let's play a song this song is called THE STROM THE STROM ben: now that we are all dead lets see what hell is like the night i died the king:now then lets end this night with a song you's all love...how aboutthe lost land? crowd: fk yeah the lost land ben: ok see you's all later we well come back here soon and everone this was one of the best gig's we have everdone here and for that let's play one more song we have never done this song live yet so here it is we where wrong** crowd:YEAH!!!!!! the king:now only one thing left eveyone get up and the freaking stage and lets smash everthing!!!! the crowd go wild and go on the stage and smash the amps...the psyco lets his guitar on fire and then smash it on the amp ben:now this is rock n roll everone i dont think we will be able to play here for a long time after this. Edited by user 14 February 2010 00:45:08(UTC) \| Reason: Not specified
		HELL YEAH METAL FOR LIFE THE STROM the strom website here the rockstar game music Here bands the strom (thrash metal) breaking up? Band members Ben Ray isacc psyco ryan dlyin Rp bands Mind game (prog metal/alt metal) Ben (guitar) King (vocalist) Jace (drums) Luke (bass)


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