I wrote something a long time ago about a cop who finds out his friend and boss is behind a murder and must decide what to do and just now decided to try and make a movie out of it. So I put my camera and acting skills together and put a little movie thing together with them. For better or for worse (as always) here is the "trailer".

Edited by user 29 June 2012 18:02:03(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

Umm, I agree...but did I make you angry or something?

P.s. Actually he really fell if thats what your talking about, ended up cutting his leg real bad too.

Edited by user 15 November 2010 12:32:39(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

Perhaps you should save that for people arent your friends?

My cameras not very good so the sound and video arent the best, and we cant act, but so what?

Lol, I guess I just expected a nicer comment from him. Not use to him being honest with me. Haha, that push sucked but yet he really fell, if we had been thinking we would't have been easy. Thanks though, we're trying. Sean (harry) is bad at memorizing his lines which is why hes staring at the ground when hes supposed to be looking at me. His lines were on the floor. Lol, thanks though.

Well with some not so clever ideas I have managed to do one more without him. 3rd episode is coming Friday.

Lol when I saw you commented on here, that was the first thing I thought too. Wonder how we could work it out...you got a video camera?

If we could work something out we could make some serious crap and forget about this show man. Jk, this show is almost done so that I dont "upset" my cousin by forcing him into filming stuff. He agreed to do one final episode and so I have worked it out to fit nicely but when I start something else I could put you in some how.

I never write scripts in a traditional way, just in a way that I can understand when I take to film it, but can you guys give me some idea if this is even worth the time?




A man stands in a cemetery alone. He bends down at a grave stone and lowers his head. Silently, a girl walks up behind him.

"Are you alright?"

The man looks up and jumps up, startled.

"I'm fine..." He brushes of his coat.

"You just looked kind of...well...how did you know her?"

The man shakes his head, confused and looks at the grave.

"Oh...er....I didnt."

"Well then...what's up?"

He walks past her and begins to leave.

"Nothing, I have to go."

CUT

The man stands in a bedroom looming over someone who is sleeping. He stands there as the light through the window lightly illuminates the room.

"Await your judgement...I take you now to the high court...you are relieved of the burder of life." he whispers very quietly as he brushes ther persons shoulder. He then turns and walks out of the room towards the camera and past the camera. Soon, the person begins to cough.

CUT

BLACK SCREEN SAYS: SEVEN DAYS LATER

The man is again seen over a grave stone, kneeling. He hangs his head and stands up as a girl shouts.

"Hey you!" She runs up to him.

"What are you doing here again?"

He frowns.

"Listen...just leave me alone alright? I've got work to do..."

She walks in front of him and he stops abruptly.

"Well...do you know this one then?"

"No, now get out of the way, and be more careful."

He goes to walk by but she grabs his arm and pulls him back, his eyes flicker open.

"I just want to know wha..."

"Shut up! You need to get home as soon as possible...No! Dont drive, dont do anything....do you know what you've done?"

She stops and looks frightened.

"Hey, I dont want any trouble."

"Oh its too late for that...you're...just go...its too late now anyway."

He waves her to leave and she begins to run down the road to a car parked at the bottom. He watches and begins to be amused as she continues running. Finally she gets in the car and drives off.

CUT TO GIRL IN THE CAR

She looks frightened but is looking avidly out the front window until she glances over and she hits the brakes, camera shows the man in the car with her.

"How did you get in here?" she screams.

"We need to talk about something."

She undoes her seat belt and opens her door but he steps out as well.

"Please just listen to me." He speaks calmly.

"No! Get away from me." She says as she shoves him. He stands and puts his hands up in the air.

"I promise...I'm not going to hurt you...Actually...I can't. Look at me...and believe." The camera zooms into his eye and turns to the girl who walks up to him.

"How did you get in my car?" she asked. The camera zooms to her face as it slowly becomes distraught it then turns to show that the man is gone. It then turns to face the girl and the man is standing behind her. He taps her shoulder.

"I simply did something similar to that..." he said with a smile.

She turns her head and passes out.

"Damn."

CUT

Open to the gril sleeping on a blood red couch. Show the man sitting next to her as she slowly sits up.

"Where have you taken me" she slowly says.

"This is...well its someones home. To say its mine would be a lie."

"Why are we here?"

"It's a safe place to talk."

"About?"

"About Death...actually, about life."

"What about it."

"Do you believe in God girl?"

"Maybe....I dont know why?"

"How about the Angel of Death...the Reaper?"

"Whats this all about...who are you?" The man stands up and holds out his hand, within is a envelope.

"This came to me this morning...it is not addressed to me though, it is for you. But first, I shall tell you who I am."

He raises his hands in the form of a cross and closes his eyes.

"I am the Reaper of Souls, Angel of Death, and Vegeance is always mine." he lowers his arms and opens his eyes. "That is what they tell me anyway. My duty is to God and it is a duty like no other...I bring that great gift that nobody wants...and I give it to them unwrapped." She scoots away from him on the couch.

"You...you're Death?"

"In the un-rotting flesh."

"But you're just a young man..."

"No...I was a young man when I was chosen...much like you are now that you have been chosen."

"What do you mean chosen?

"All in good time...I think you should read you're letter now darling."

He hands it to her and she opens it. Slowly her eyes read it and she quotes it.

"Helena aaaaaa you are here-by named Apprentice to Death and are to go with him as he teaches you the craft of... what is this?"

"It means that you are to take my place...for whatever reason you have been chosen as the next Reaper."

"What if I refuse? Why should it be me?"

"You cannot refuse, the change has already begun. Why it should be you is an unanswerable question, this job is not to be taken lightly, and God is never wrong."

"God....so...what now?"

"We wait for the next message...it will bare a list of names. You must follow me as I perform my tasks for the day, what you see will likely tear at your heart...I warn you that it will not be easy...

"Great."

CUT