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#1 Posted : 08 October 2010 10:31:23(UTC)
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Well, I may not be able to hold a note, and I cant really write for crap but here is my first attempt at singing a song I wrote that I have mustered the courage to post online. If it sucks let me know, but tell me why and how. If its good, you can tell me that too but I wont be expecting it. ;) I cant figure out a way to play guitar too it so its just my awesome vocals at the moment. lol


P.S. Ended up really quiet for some reason...

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#2 Posted : 08 October 2010 13:23:58(UTC)
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Nice lyrics


Critic:
Are you comfortable with your voice? You sound a bit shaky, like you're holding back from something.


Other than that, good job.
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#3 Posted : 08 October 2010 18:07:32(UTC)
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stephaniewazhere wrote:
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Nice lyrics


Critic:
Are you comfortable with your voice? You sound a bit shaky, like you're holding back from something.


Other than that, good job.






I am shaky, but if there is one thing I am not comfortable doing is singing in front of people so I tend to record myself at night and then I have to sing quiet to not wake anyone up. Lol, so yea your exactly right on that one.
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#4 Posted : 08 October 2010 23:12:42(UTC)
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I am shaky, but if there is one thing I am not comfortable doing is singing in front of people so I tend to record myself at night and then I have to sing quiet to not wake anyone up. Lol, so yea your exactly right on that one.


Oh I see lol You got to break the ice, because once you sing in front of someone. You would not care anymore. Most people i know who hated singing in front of people, all they had to do was break the ice. After wards, they did not care, even if a random stranger stood in front of them while they sang. Baby steps of course.


BTW I see the Johnny Cash influences ;)
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#5 Posted : 09 October 2010 03:18:52(UTC)
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I am shaky, but if there is one thing I am not comfortable doing is singing in front of people so I tend to record myself at night and then I have to sing quiet to not wake anyone up. Lol, so yea your exactly right on that one.



BTW I see the Johnny Cash influences ;)


...did you expect anything less from me?
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#6 Posted : 09 October 2010 03:22:58(UTC)
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too much echo
I hate it when people see me at the supermarket and they are like:
Hey, what are you doing here?
and im just like:
Oh you know, hunting elephants
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#7 Posted : 09 October 2010 03:28:18(UTC)
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Rincewind wrote:
too much echo


Probably so, but I sounded even worse without it.
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#8 Posted : 10 October 2010 19:39:07(UTC)
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Just a guitar song this time.
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#9 Posted : 28 October 2010 10:47:48(UTC)
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Well here is round two, hopefully a bit less shaky and lets see if I can play guitar along with my magical vocals. Problem is, the lyrics aren't as good as last time but oh well.
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#10 Posted : 29 October 2010 13:26:04(UTC)
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#11 Posted : 31 October 2010 21:19:05(UTC)
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#12 Posted : 31 October 2010 22:09:15(UTC)
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Echo is bare annoying like rince said, but apart from that your voice is pretty good you silly din so take it off it. :)
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#13 Posted : 02 November 2010 08:28:39(UTC)
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Echo is bare annoying like rince said, but apart from that your voice is pretty good you silly din so take it off it. :)


Haha, I am using it less and less and am working my way to just finding how to use all the gadgets together to make something that sounds good and isnt annoying, but thanks.
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#14 Posted : 03 November 2010 20:03:09(UTC)
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This song I am actually proud of. Let me know what ya thing, good and especially bad so I can "improve".
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#15 Posted : 04 November 2010 11:58:58(UTC)
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I listened to the last one you've posted, i really enjoyed it :) keep doing it, great stuff :D
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#16 Posted : 04 November 2010 15:17:59(UTC)
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I listened to the last one you've posted, i really enjoyed it :) keep doing it, great stuff :D


Thanks a ton man, here's another...
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#17 Posted : 09 November 2010 04:39:12(UTC)
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To download in mp3 format - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5NJIQ5YS

The more I do it, and listen to it, the more I like myself. Dancing
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#18 Posted : 07 December 2010 05:30:42(UTC)
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#19 Posted : 10 December 2010 09:17:01(UTC)
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#20 Posted : 11 December 2010 00:50:21(UTC)
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