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Offline djdrew43  
#1 Posted : 14 November 2014 11:46:57(UTC)
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Well when I made this when I was looking at how many downloads one of my song and saw it only had some were around 133,000 download and either two things happen the song was not so hot or they just ain't counting the illegal downloads.We did have a rumor about the song being leaked.But who knows? Now on to the second reason.I was talking to a rapper that was going to be "Mister Hot stuff" in rap and he was telling me "Watch out and stay close to your money cuz that's how they got me" And at first I was like Uhhhhhhhhhh.....Ok dude but then I really thought about what he said and thought to myself Wow what he said was right so I thought to go on and show everybody the fake stuff that everybody is rapping about.


Verse 1:
See, I ain't the type to chase the paper, fiend for pussy, or rap all about gold chains
The plethora of abysmal rhymes of this era will decimate the cells of your brain
Getting recognized in this game will be a major strain
'Cause the mainstream is just one big feign
Quality control don't exist anymore
The lyrics nowadays deem it okay to behave like the most notorious whore
No self respect
But then they wanna complain about mistreatment
What the fuck did they expect?
Of course there will be some form of judgement
Sometimes I wonder, why would I infiltrate this game
When I know my tracks won't get no fuckin' radio plays?
These listeners are severely lacking in taste
That's the reason most good emcees is in the underground, and can't financially maintain
Then they stuck on the streets dealin' cess
All cause "fans" would rather settle for less
But be that as it may
I might consider rapping anyways
As long as it gets these fuckin' rats and roaches off of my plate
I told you the struggle is real
Especially since there are people workin' 9-5's and can't a afford a kid's meal
But they still dream about the nice paint job, spinning rims, and big wheels
All this, while the 2% are sippin' champagne; buying thousand dollar louis high heels
But none of that is my business though
I'll just sit here, with my tea, exposing the game to avid listeners on the low

Hook:
Life's a bitch, and the game ain't fair to no one
That's why we always stuck countin' the same five crisp ones
They say that everything happens for a reason
So if I blame God for a shitty day, would it be treason? (x2)
So I Grind for a new day for a new,new,new day a new day A new,new,new day(x2 but don't say so or I)

Verse 2:
I'm back here again, but you should've gotten the point by now
You claim my songs is wack, yet think anaconda's great? How?
Why do fans even bother with this?
It's like all they want are a corny dance, and good beat, and a quick fix
With no regard to lyrics
Why is it that low quality music can make an "artist" go platinum?
Has hip hop really devolved into something this dumb?
Well, the dumb are mostly intrigued by the drum, after all
Green colored bill are the things which corrupt all
And yet money is supposed to be an incentive to try harder
Not a reason to dumb-down your content, and stop going farther
But these half-assed rappers never listen
They just put out anything, as long as it keeps sellin'
And then there are the ones who exhibit actual lyricism
The same ones stuck in the underground, and not taken over by materialism
The radio stations are known to facilitate the spread of ignorant shit
Because as long as them pockets fat, there ain't no problem with it
At least to them
But in reality, they the ones playin' music, that's the artistic equivalent of my phlegm
There ain't nothin' wrong with likin' party music though
But there's too much of it nowadays, so it's gon' need to go

Hook:
Life's a bitch, and the game ain't fair to no one
That's why we always stuck countin' the same five crisp ones
They say that everything happens for a reason
So if I blame God for a shitty day, would it be treason? (x2)
So I Grind for a new day for a new,new,new day a new day A new,new,new day(x2 but don't say so or I)




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#2 Posted : 17 November 2014 03:08:59(UTC)
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OOC: I definitely think you are onto something here! I think the lyrics are pretty cool and you're starting to understand how things are done here. Only advice that I'd give you is to make artwork of the track maybe using any cool graphic programs like PhotoScape, Paint etc to make the single come across more appealing and add a bit more of a description of what the song sounds like. This, of course isn't all required but with time King Taz will be the next big thing :). If you need help with any of the above just PM or check out other people's post and kind use that to help you. Buuuut good job
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