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Offline asdf  
#1 Posted : 24 August 2009 06:18:59(UTC)
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I'm writing a short story and figured I would put it here for those interested.



Prologue through Chapter 5 - http://www.scribd.com/doc/19411982/JB-Chapter-15
Chapter 6 - http://www.scribd.com/doc/19461035/Chapter-Six
Chapter 7 - http://www.scribd.com/doc/20494266/Chapter-Seven

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#2 Posted : 28 August 2009 13:08:25(UTC)
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#3 Posted : 29 August 2009 03:50:57(UTC)
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Dude, you're a fucking writer, no doubt about that, nice job.
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#4 Posted : 29 August 2009 04:24:36(UTC)
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Thank you. I'm working on Chapter 3 but cant quite figure out what exactly I want to happen yet...aka Im having writers block.
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#5 Posted : 29 August 2009 04:27:45(UTC)
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Your story seems very similar to that of Jacob's Ladder, you should try something like that but make it go into a different direction instead of a flashback.
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#6 Posted : 29 August 2009 04:38:18(UTC)
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I have never heard of it...I'll have to see if I can find it...All I know for sure is that by the end I want him to be back to normal, and its getting there that's been hard. Lol.
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#7 Posted : 29 August 2009 04:47:26(UTC)
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I have never heard of it...I'll have to see if I can find it...All I know for sure is that by the end I want him to be back to normal, and its getting there that's been hard. Lol.

Cool, and Jacob's Ladder is a horror movie about a vietnam vet that was made back in the 80's.
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#8 Posted : 29 August 2009 04:50:06(UTC)
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Yea, I looked it up. Reading the plot line, I can see the similarities.
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#9 Posted : 29 August 2009 06:20:40(UTC)
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You should start a new one in November, and join TRSG's NaNoWriMo lot. Which is - Gildy and me, to my knowledge. But still, you should.
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#10 Posted : 29 August 2009 06:55:43(UTC)
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Well, this one will probably still be in progress by then so, will that count? Or should I just get working on this one faster to start a new one? Lol
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#11 Posted : 29 August 2009 06:56:54(UTC)
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asdf wrote:
Well, this one will probably still be in progress by then so, will that count? Or should I just get working on this one faster to start a new one? Lol


I think the terms are it has to be written just in that month (November), so it won't count.
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#12 Posted : 29 August 2009 07:12:40(UTC)
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You should start a new one in November, and join TRSG's NaNoWriMo lot. Which is - Gildy and me, to my knowledge. But still, you should.

Dunno if Paul is actually still planning to do one this year. He spent most of last year bitching about it to be honest!
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#13 Posted : 29 August 2009 07:34:04(UTC)
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Oh well, maybe I will be done and able to do a new one by then. Either way here is Chapter Three!

Chapter Three - http://www.scribd.com/doc/19200798/Chapter-Three
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#14 Posted : 29 August 2009 08:31:17(UTC)
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i don't know... i am planning on trying out with a shrt story this year... missed out last yera because i went to France, Belgium etc etc mid november which scupperd it all up.
I hate it when people see me at the supermarket and they are like:
Hey, what are you doing here?
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Oh you know, hunting elephants
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#15 Posted : 29 August 2009 09:40:44(UTC)
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This one is short but has a fast paced too.

Chapter Four - http://www.scribd.com/doc/19203513/Chapter-Four
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#16 Posted : 29 August 2009 11:03:37(UTC)
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.. needs more nudity.
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#17 Posted : 29 August 2009 11:12:49(UTC)
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My ex wrote a "pornovella". It's a frightfully good read.
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#18 Posted : 29 August 2009 14:12:20(UTC)
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Sorry, but my books have never and will never feature nudity or sex. It degrades the stature of the writing and the book itself.
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#19 Posted : 29 August 2009 18:48:06(UTC)
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asdf wrote:
Sorry, but my books have never and will never feature nudity or sex. It degrades the stature of the writing and the book itself.


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#20 Posted : 29 August 2009 18:51:27(UTC)
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asdf wrote:
Sorry, but my books have never and will never feature nudity or sex. It degrades the stature of the writing and the book itself.


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