Troy felt sweat dripping from his face, he suddenly lost the confidence he once had, he never thought the club would be full of so many people. He really felt he was going to faint or just give up. The club was full of people he didn't know and he was afraid they didn't like their music and might get beaten up by some drunk TVIV fanguys outside of the venue. Kieran Marks of The Verdict Is Vengeance gave him some advice that really inspired him,"Its your music and you should never be ashamed of it, dont mind the crowd just mind the way you play your song and you would do great".He took one last sip of beer and ran into the stage with his confidence back and he was ready to rock. Tristan gave the cue for their first song Negative and Carl began his guitar arpeggios and JPC began the smooth bassline of the song. Troy began singing the song in his gentle voice which would slowly lead to a more brutal chorus with JC playing his guitar on heavy distortion. The people were kind enough to clap for the band after the song. The set went on with the energetic, riff oriented, Bring Me Down;the simple melody of Oxygen; the eerie feel of Comatose;the punkish Sick and Tired;and other songs the band had been writing for the past months.Slowly the band gained respect from the audience as they began to cheer for the band, and this filled the band with energy they never had before. They wanted to go longer with the show but they only had one song left so they put all of their energy, anger, and power into their last song Strike. The song begins with a slow blues-style riff from Carl and a simple bassline from JPC followed by some cymbal action from Tristan and creepy synthesizer sounds from JC. Troy begins to sing in a soft voice gradually building up to a beautiful chorus. Unexpectedly, Carl and JC begin to go aggresive on their guitars, with JPC looking angry but keeping a calm atmosphere, Tristan begins smashing on the cymbals, and Troy screams into the mic leading to the heavy side of the song. Carl does the riff on Drop D with JC playing his guitar like an animal on heavy distortion, JPC keeps his cool while Tristan just keeps smashing on the drums maintaining perfect beat. Troy begins to sing aggressively and sees the crowd jumping to the song, he felt real good. At the middle part where the solo would begin, Troy suddenly jumped on to the audience with the audience catching him and bringing him to all sides of the room. They continue the song with Troy being squeezed in the crowd and fought his way through the crowd to get back on stage just about time the song ended. This was a good way to finish their gig and a good way for TVIV to begin theirs, Kieran tapped Troy's back and congratulated him for a great job with Troy nodding back, he was so tired and felt that he wanted to sleep. JPC noticed his face was a bit pale when he suddenly fell to the ground. The band rushed him to the hospital in their tour van...

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

OOC: feedback would be highly appreciated, and if you got any tips for me, just write it below..

Edited by user 28 December 2009 21:50:14(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

Thanks, it all just came out of my head while i was writing it.. I didnt even expect the hospital part, it all just happened..
But thank you very much, glad you liked it..

ooc: Kewl roleplay mate :) I didn't expect such a noob to be so good. Jokes ;) Naa but really good roleplay, like Bikz said though split it into paragraphs, maybe through some super-cool-font-editing-things-like-this-and-this and you'll be well on your way to being as fucking awesome as me. Jk :P