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Offline Moquel  
#1 Posted : 31 July 2011 05:12:25(UTC)
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Radio Vine- American's Nightmare


Loud sounds of police cars and screaming of hopeless human begins are heard from a high story apartment. The apartment is trashy with severel written papers all over the floor, a inked pen and a red notepad that has bleed in the middle of it. The apartment is not so home friendly- with a broken telvision, cigerattes laying on a wooden table and enviorments of a human living such as a jungle, wildly things out of place and many things broken. Radio Vine lays in a white sheeted bed with her face buried deeply into the pillow. The sirens of a police cars gets lounder as it approches close to the apartment complex. Radio starts to move a lot, trying to avoid the siren. She turns over with a dry look, no makeup, a cut on her upper arm. " What the fuck is going on?" She gets up with aggestion to walk over to the room window where severel bottles of beer is sitting on a table near the window. She looks outside to be welcomed to a scene where severel bodies are laying in the middle of the street with white sheets over them. Police cars surroad the brutal sight and men with blue suits over take over the scene with cameras, notepads and dry humor from police officers. Radio looks disgusted as a loud knock is heard on the door.

She runs with speed to the door that welcomes to the living room and her outfit of a long white rob, looking as if a hurricane came up and thought it, just destoryed it. With a mic and a computer with severel notebooks on top of the laptop is seen. She opens the door and gives the police office, standing about 6'1, looking more into his early 30's with a navy blue suit on. He speaks very polite Radio, but Radio gives him a dry look while itching her messy hair. " Can I help you..." she asks him. " Yes.. (looks at Radio) mmm... Did you hear anything last night about the murders in this apartment building? We are going around asking people who was all close by the scene." Radio looks at the office with a dry stern look and then rolls her eyes. " First, you guys woke me up from my sleep. (pauses) no sir. I havent heard ANYTHING about a murder.. Anything else?" The police officers looks suprised on the response of Radio's. " Wanted to inform you that your next door neighbor, Bill Josephs was murdered last night and we thought you made of heard something or even saw somthing around the time of (looks down on notepad) eleven last night." Radio stares deeply in the police officer eyes that form water in her eyes, sorrow at that sudden moment.

FLASHBACK- A man, around the early 60's , wearing a gray plaid buttoned up and sporting dark jeans with cowboys boots. He is walking down a long hallway. Radio opens up her apartment door that is the number 68. He looks at her with a myserious stare of help. " If you hear me banging on the walls.. Help me.." He walks in an opened door.

PRESENT- Tears are rolling down Radio's face. " Are you okay..?" She wipes the tears fast and respond's quick. " Yes, I'm fine! JUST FINE!" Police office enlarge his eyes. " Yes. If you find anything, give me a call." He hands her a card. On the card, Officer Micheal Richard. Rado takes the card and closes the door with a force.

She walks slowly, seems she s danging herself to the leather couch that sits againest the wall She drops the card on the floor and sits heavily on the couch. Tears like waterfalls covers her face, misery settles in her soul as she hits herself on her forehead. She lays down slowly on the couch and grabs the some of the rob and puts it near her mouth, she devolopes more tears.


VO (Voice-Over): You know, Bill wasnt a bad man, but I remember people saying around the apartments that he is a old man in a need of help, but if his help is younger stunning looking girls; he will try to take advantage of them on the help he needs. Called him a pervent, an asshole. He often use to take out the trash early in the morning when I will be on my way to the studio. I remember what he will always say, " You just a pretty little gurl! Wanna help with some boxes upstairs, you know with my back, I cant get far with heavy boxes." I will always pass him up, acting as if I never heard him speak or apporch me. He will look at me walking to my car that will be there to pick me up. Looking as the car drove off.

FLASHBACK- Radio is sleeping in her bed, relaxed. She is sleeping near her wall in her room. Big bangs and loud noises are heard near her walls. She knocks on the wall. " Keep it down Mr. Bill, can you, I have sessions tomorrow." She takes the pillow and covers her ears as loud music is heard next with the mixture of the loud banging on the wall. Radio screams in her pillow. " Fucking asshole." She gets up from her bed, hitting the bed from behind her with anger. She walks into the living room, out the door into the hallway with a bright pink rob on with her hair relaxed on her shoulders. Just a few seconds later, she arrives at the door of apartment 67. She knocks hard on the door with the sound of rock and roll music that just tortunes her restless soul. A young woman, around the early 20's that sports a sexy black bra with black panties and high heels on opens the door. She is blonde with red lipstick. " Can you mother- (pause, polite) can you guys keep it down? I'm trying to get some rest." She opens the a little more to see the old man in a bed in the living room, with a sheet over his lower body with no clothes on the upper type. Radio looks at him. " Keep it down Bill.." Bill starts to laugh. " Look at her! Wanna join princess?" The girls looks at Radio and smiles. Radio looks back disguste at Bill. " I mean, you are a pretty.." She runs her hair thought Radio's hair. " (conts) woman, stunning body." She looks down at her stomach. " Lovely voice." She lips her lips. " My kind of girl.." She moves her hand away from her hair. " Dont touch me.. Keep it down bitch!" She walks away fast until her apartment. The girl grind and looks back at Bill. He smiles. " Ready baby girl?" She turns around with a sharp evil glare. She closes the door.


10:35.

Radio is sleeping peacely until a loud scream then a laugh is heard. She turns over. " Nooo" echos thought the walls of her apartment. She puts the pillow over her head. Seconds later, hits and bangs hits on the wall near Radio's bed. A big hit againest the wall and slow music is heard playing. Patterns of knocks is heard on the wall, knocking of depressed, a knock of help. It was stop then start again, scaring and making Radio jump out of her sleep. In Bill apartment, the woman is on top of Bill as a sharp knife rises up and then goes down to the upper chest of Bill's hopeless body. A radio that is near her leg, she turns up the music. " Bill.." with eye linner and wet tears falling from her blue eyes. " This may hurt a little bit." The knife goes down and with nightmare scream is heard. His bloody hands, knocks hard on the wall. The woman grabs his hands and puts it on her breast. " Nooo, why are you doing this." She stabs him again. Radio keep turning over. Moving all over her bed, cold sweats beginning to start.

11:05
The woman walks out of an restroom with a short black dress on and red heels. Bill is covered with blood, tied up with rope againest the bed. She looks at him, smiles and then fixes her nice waxy blonde hair. She takes lipstick out of her purse with a skinny silver top. She puts it on, with a sense of sexy. She puts it back in her purse. A wallet that is on Bill's stomach. She grabs the wallet and puts it in her purse. " God rest his soul.." She continues to walk near the apartment door to exit.

PRESENT- Radio, her eyes red from the harsh crying. Her mouth drops, she walks into her bedroom, looking at the whole in the wall from pushing from the loud music. She looks outside of her bedroom door to the mic and the laptop. She walks to the desk, throws all the notebooks. She sits in the black rolling chair. She writes on a one sheet of paper, " Loud Music (Road to Roll)"



TO BE CONTINUED
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Offline Mckenzie-  
#2 Posted : 31 July 2011 06:55:13(UTC)
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Offline Moquel  
#3 Posted : 31 July 2011 07:02:18(UTC)
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OOC: This is very detailed and well done, i look forward to the next part.


OOC: Thank you so much. It's going to be epic, this story.
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Offline Andre Gandra  
#4 Posted : 31 July 2011 09:38:17(UTC)
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#5 Posted : 31 July 2011 09:39:44(UTC)
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#6 Posted : 31 July 2011 09:41:55(UTC)
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#7 Posted : 31 July 2011 11:07:31(UTC)
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