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#1 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:00:08(UTC)
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HUNGER
OPPORTUNITY
DRIVE
STARFACTORY!





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After the banner pops up, and while Oasis's "It's Getting Better Man" is playing, you are brought to a huge arena with many fans all sitting in the audience, cheering for the night as the camera flickers around at the different areas of the arena, each section with screaming fans. The music continues to play and this time a screen rises from the ceiling that show 'Live Show #2' Damion Holmes then appears at the top of the stage positioned on the stage, he waves and begins walks down the steps and to center stage his tuxedo on. A smile on his face. When he finds his way to center stage he brings the mic to his mouth


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Welcome to STARFACTORY LIVE SHOW #2!!!!!!!


After the crowd pops in cheer, he runs his hands through his hands

"Live SHHOOOOOOOOOW #2, last week we had a SHOCKING elimination, what will happen this week?"


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"BUT, this won't be able to happen without the amazing judges/mentor, each special in their own way"


Automatically, a spot in the audience, above the fans are, a spotlight is shown with seats all placed next to each other, unable to see who is behind them.



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"The first mentor, is known for his slick attitude, and the musical talent he holds, seemingly shooting to the top of the musical charts at such a young age, and having the creativity of someone in the business that's twice his age, everyone, HAYDEN MERJOS!


Hayden's seat turns around and the crowd starts cheering


"The next mentor, she has become one of the most creative and recognized female's in recent history, with many calling her a hero of music. Her last album 'Waking Up' became one of the best selling of 2011, and if it's not her beautiful voice that shows us she's a wonderful artist, then maybe you should hear her play the piano....everyone, ALICIA LENA!


Alicia's seat then turns around, the crowd also cheers


"The next mentor, has become one of the most successful young stars of our time. Her album The Voice Of Me has broken records, and her sophomore album "Exiled" showed us that debut's don't always write out a stars career as the album has become one of the most respected albums in years, with platinum plaques under her name that stars twice her age don't get and a voice to die for, give it up for MICHELLE GREEN!"


Michelle's seat, also turns around, cheering continues



"Our next mentor, has become one of the most recognized and successful females of our time. After her sophomore effort, 'Halfway There' made her one of the most notable singers in recent history, with the album becoming the longest running album of 2010 and pushing out 3 #1's, its not all about the sales however when it comes to this artist, she also possesses creative excellence in her music and with millions of records sold in her twenties, this female looks to only be going stronger, EVERYONE, BRITTANY KNOX!"



Brittany's seat turns around, and the crowd cheers


"And last but not least, this man knows what success is. Being the powerhouse behind legendary label, Chaos Records, or being the leading mean of Blood of Wecz, this man knows what success, money, and monopoly is. With respect in the industry and money at his fingers...everyone, SCOTT R.H!!!!"


Scott chair then turns around, after, a spotlight goes on Damion Holmes





"This week the contestants were given the challenge to find and perform TWO BALLADS. One chosen by the contestant themselves, and the other chosen by the mentor. The test was to bring out the true vocal ability in these artists, and this week would show who was truly a vocalist and whether or not their mentors have the musical ear to be able to choose the correct ballad for their contestant. This was not an easy week, but without further or do! WE'RE GETTING READY FOR OUR FIRST PERFORMANCE OF THE NIGHT, EVERYONE GIVE IT UP FOR..... ASHLEEEEEEY GRIMMMMMIIIIIIE!!!!"



1:00 - Damion Holmes Opening
1:10 - ASHLEY GRIMMIE Performance
1:15 - 1:25 JUDGES
1:30 - EDWARD BARÁT Performance
1:35 - 1:45 JUDGES
1:50 - KELI O'DAY Performance
1:55 - 2:05 JUDGES
2:10 - TEH DEVIL YOU KNOW Performance
2:15 - 2:25 JUDGES
2:30 - CASEY JOHNSON Performance
2:35 - 2:45 JUDGES
2:50 - MIDNIGHT COFFEE RUNPerformance
2:55 - 3:05 JUDGES
3:10 - AUBREY MIKKEL Performance
3:15 - 3:25 JUDGES
3:30 - LASHES PERFORMANCE
3:35- 3:45 JUDGES

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#2 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:01:55(UTC)
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Brittany Knox is seen waving to the crowd with a smile on her face
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#3 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:10:21(UTC)
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ASHLEY GRIMMIE – LIVE PERFORMANCE

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Ashley walks on the stage wearing a long black dress her hair is down the way it usually looks she smiles and looks out at the crowd a few of the people start cheering she then raises two thumbs up to them and they start getting louder she laughs a little then looks at the judges table and goes over to the piano in the center of the stage there are a few lit candles around the piano and on top of it she sits down and moves close to the mic So tonight I'll be singing my version of Wherever You Will Go by The Calling and Right Here Waiting by Richard Marx hope you guys enjoy it she smiles before the lights dim down and the candles light up the stage as she starts playing a slower version of Where Ever You Will Go on the piano her smile then fades away and she moves closer to the mic again closes her eyes and sings the first verse of the song

So lately, I've been wonderin
Who will be there to take my place
When I'm gone, you'll need love
To light the shadows on your face
If a great wave should fall
It would fall upon us all
And between the sand and stone
Could you make it on your own


she opens her eyes and begins to play just a little faster and sing a little louder still in a sort of light voice though as she reaches the chorus she looks around at the crowd most of the people in the crowd are clearly enjoying her performance some of them are holding up phones and others are holding up lighters she looks a little surprised as she sees this cause this is the first time she seen this usually she is in the crowd holding her phone up it's never happened at any of her other live performance's she shows a little smile at the audeince before she looks down at the piano

If I could, then I would
I'll go wherever you will go
Way up high or down low
I'll go wherever you will go


she gets to the second verse of the song and plays slower again and starts singing in a lighter voice she moves a bit of the hair from her face as she looks back up to see the people still holding up the phones and lighters seeing this beautiful sight she smiles again at them then looks at the judges table still smiling

And maybe, I'll find out
The way to make it back someday
To watch you, to guide you
Through the darkest of your days
If a great wave should fall
It would fall upon us all
Well I hope there's someone out there
Who can bring me back to you


as she gets to the chorus again she starts singing in a higher voice again and playing a bit faster she then looks back down at the piano moves closer to the mic and starts to sing

If I could, then I would
I'll go wherever you will go
Way up high or down low
I'll go wherever you will go

Runaway with my heart
Runaway with my hope
Runaway with my love


she looks up and closes her eyes and starts playing really slow and singing in a very light voice

I know now, just quite how
My life and love might still go on
In your heart and your mind
I'll stay with you for all of time


The song ends and Ashley smiles at the audience, “thank you for listening.. this is called Right Here Waiting” she looks down at the piano and starts to play the intro and sings the first lyrics

Oceans apart day after day
And I slowly go insane
I hear your voice on the line
But it doesn't stop the pain

If I see you next to never
How can we say forever


the audience cheer as she continues to play the piano and sing the lyrics to the song, they cheer even more when she sings the chorus in her quiet and emotional voice her eyes keep looking up from the piano keys at the audience and judges as she sings and she smiles a little

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you

I took for granted, all the times
That I though would last somehow
I hear the laughter, I taste the tears
But I can't get near you now

Oh, can't you see it baby
You've got me goin' Crazy

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you


The song comes toward the end and Ashley keeps playing the piano while singing along, her voice becomes a little louder when she sings the last part of the song’s lyrics and she smiles even more as she can hear the audience singing along with her

I wonder how we can survive
This romance
But in the end if I'm with you
I'll take the chance

Oh, can't you see it baby
You've got me goin' crazy

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you
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#4 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:15:34(UTC)
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LETS GIVE IT UP FOR ASHLEEEEEEY GRIMMIEEEE!!!!!! JUDGES?
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#5 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:19:11(UTC)
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Michelle: Again another great performance! I know that you are very shy and a little nervous sometimes but to come out here first and give an amazing performance like that is just fantastic. I'm sure that you'll continue to grow and explore more with your music in the coming weeks. The song choices where great, the first one was a tricky song but you nailed it. I prefered it to your second song as you didn't seem at your best but don't get me wrong, you still sounded amazing.
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WEEKEND: BILLY • DUSTYN • OSCAR • RILEY • SCOTT
PUBLIC WARNING: BEAU • CARTER LEE • JAKE • MYLES • ZANDER
THE STAT NERDS: BRIAN • CHRISTOPHER
THE ZONE: BLAKE • CHRIS • JASON • LIAM

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#6 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:19:29(UTC)
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Scott RH: Aren't you a funny little talented thing? Interesting song choices here from you Ashley. Especially The Calling song. I think it's one of those that everyone knows, but I think works better with a male voice sadly. I mean, don't get me wrong, you are hugely talented, and I think that you cam out here and played the piano, which is outstanding and brave, to bare yourself to the audience like that. I would just liked to have seen you sing something with a female vocal part to it. Good performance though, really good, and I'm sure we'll be seeing a hell of a lot more of you as this competition goes on. Well done.
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#7 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:19:45(UTC)
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Hayden: Ashley, Ashely, Ashley. What can I say? You've been giving consistently great performances and you look like a pro up there. Nothing was off performance wise, great tone, beautiful voice, great songs, you look beautiful too. I just wanna say that I know you play piano, you're probably gonna be the next Alicia Keys, but I want you to keep in mind that you should sometimes take a break from the piano and maybe try performing without it. I'm interested to see if you can still deliver without it but overall another fantastic job and I hope you're not nervous anymore because you have a lot of talent and potential.
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#8 Posted : 07 May 2012 03:20:01(UTC)
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Brittany: I really enjoy your voice and I loved the second song you sang, and I see that your growing little by little each week. And that's the problem. We have other acts here that are way above there game and I'm afraid that if you don't find a better way to stand out, you might get left behind...I'm not saying you don't have enough time because your very talented and special, but I just think people may start to not pay you attention. I might be wrong, and this was a great performance and your here next week, its your job to prove me wrong. However, you still did a good job Ashley. *claps*
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THANK YOU JUDGES AND ONCE AGAIN GIVE IT UP FOR ASHLEY GRIMMIE!! THE NEXT PERFORMER, HIS NAME IS...EDWARRRRRRDDD BAAAARÁT!
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EDWARD BARÁT – STARFACTORY PERFORMANCE
6 May, 2012

PRE-SHOW


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“I felt that last week’s performance went pretty well, the challenge was obviously a difficult challenge for each of us but I think that I took it on pretty well and I was happy with the comments that I received from the judges because I took a chance to change the song a little and put my own spin on things and I think that it paid off really well, it’s a song that I related to a lot and I feel as though I did justice to it. I think that the competition is really tight and so each and every week we all have to come out and deliver something unique and something that can set us apart from the rest of the acts.

Working so closely with Brittany throughout the week has been a great experience for me, I feel like we’ve instantly connected and she knows what I’m about and that’s something that I appreciate, she understands me and what I want to achieve not just as a contestant but as an artist. Her song choice for me this week is the Goo Goo Dolls track ‘Iris’, I’ve known the song for a long time now and I’ve listened to the song a lot more during the week, I think rehearsals went pretty well once I felt completely comfortable with the lyrics and so I’m hoping that I can do the song justice.

My second song choice is a slightly more obvious choice with Aerosmith’s ‘I Don’t Want To Miss A Thing’ as it’s probably one of the most recognizable ballads ever, it’s grandiose and it’s over the top with lyrics and vocals that just can’t help but draw you in but I think that it’s different enough from my first choice, in fact the songs that I’ve taken on during this competition so far have been kinda different, so it’s quite a nice change to do a song like this one, I think that the lyrics of the song speak to pretty much everybody and the original vocals of the song is what I always admired and I think that the song fits my abilities quite well, it’s also a risk to take on this song, it’s been covered by many people over the years but I think that I can do a good job with the song and give it a fresh feeling and hopefully I’ll do enough to continue on in the competition, fingers crossed.”




LIVE PERFORMANCE – SONG #1
Goo Goo Dolls - Iris


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As the pre-show video message from Edward Barát finishes and the stage lighting turns to a darkened red color, the audience begin to cheer as three weeks into the competition the majority of the acts are already starting to gain a reputation and are all starting to form their own fanbase as the audiences are now in a position to decide the fate of the contestants. Moments after the stage turns to the darkened red color the volume of the audience reaction starts to fade in anticipation of Edward’s arrival onstage, another brief moment passes by before he walks out onto the centre of the stage to the adulation of the studio audience, his now trademark appearance make the performer an instantly recognizable figure. His dark black hair framing his face with a quintessential Rockstar image, black guy-liner gives his eyes extra definition in his rock image and both of his lips are pressed together creating an arrogant looking pout, A slightly faded leather jacket is zipped open showing his chest draped with jewellery around his neck and black leather pants and black platform boots complete his look for this evenings performance, The room goes silent as the band play into his opening song choice and Edward grasps the microphone with his left hand as the opening guitar riff begins his pushes the microphone from his left hand and catches it with his right hand all the while with a fixating stare out at the audience, the drum beat begins and he screams into the microphone, “Are you guys ready!!” he smirks confidently once more before he starts singing the opening introduction to the song with a soft vocal.

“And I’d give up forever to touch you
Because I know that you feel me somehow
You’re the closest to heaven that I’ll ever be
And I don’t want to go home right now

And all I can taste is this moment
And all I can breathe is your life
Because sooner or later it’s over
I just don’t want to miss you tonight

And I don’t want the world to see me
Because I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am”


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The music continues throughout and Edward sings with a anger and passion in his voice as he takes on the feelings and frustrations of the song’s lyrics, he holds the microphone tightly in his right hand and delivers powerful vocals, his eyes always remain fixed on the audience in front of him and he struts around the stage from left to right midway through the song carrying the microphone stand with him while he continues to sing, the song continues to progress and as it reaches the latter stages he shows a much softer side to his vocals which draws the audience in, his eyes fixed on the audience now create a more vulnerable intensity to the song as he continues to sing the lyrics;

“And you can’t fight the tears that ain’t coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything feels like the movies
And you bleed just to know you’re alive

And I don’t want the world to see me
Because I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don’t want the world to see me
Because I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don’t want the world to see me
Because I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am”




LIVE PERFORMANCE – SONG #2
Aerosmith – I Don’t Want To Miss A Thing


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After the end of the previous song the stage turns completely black for a moment before a tender and instantly recognizable piano introduction can be heard from the stage as the backing band begin the introduction to Edward’s second song of the evening, having chosen Aerosmith’s ‘I Don’t Want To Miss A Thing’ as his second ballad the lone sound of the piano keys that introduce the song already has the audience in an energetic mood which is enhanced further as the stage finally lights up with the darkened red color once more as it shows Edward again stood centre stage as the introduction continues to play, he looks out at the audience that surrounds the stage as well as the five judges, he nods his head a little and smiles confidently, he begins to sing the famous opening lines to emotional power ballad and the crowd erupts into cheers;

“I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
Watch your smile while you’re sleeping
While your far away and dreaming
I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
I could stay lost in this moment forever
Cause every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure

Don’t wanna close my eyes
I don’t wanna fall asleep
Cause I’d miss you babe
And I don’t want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I’d still miss you babe
And I don’t wanna miss a thing

Lying close to you, feeling your heart beating
And I’m wondering what your dreaming
Wondering if it’s me your seeing
Then I kiss your eyes
And thank god we’re together
I just want to stay with you in this moment forever
Forever and ever”


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The quintessential power ballad has the audience swaying their arms from side to side as he sings the lyrics to the love song with a strong vocal that although sung in a key slightly higher to the original version seems to work in the favour of Edward, as he sings the familiar lyrics he stretches out his left arm to the front row of the audience as they try to reach him and he continually stares at the attractive young women in the front row making it seem almost like he’s singing the song to them. As the guitar riff comes into the song during the latter stages, he uses this as an opportunity to move even closer to the crowd in the front row and continues to stare emotionally in their direction, as the song comes closer to its climactic finish he uses this as the opportunity to show of the power of his voice to its fullest, in particular the final lines of pre-chorus and the whole of the final chorus as he screams, “I just wanna hold you close/Feel your heart so close to mine/And just stay here in this moment/For the rest of time, yeah, yeah, yeaaaaah!!” the fans in the audience appeared to be getting ready for that screech and just waiting on the moment for him to repeat the words, “yeah, yeah, yeaaaaah!!” and with the final note of the pre-chorus it was clear by the audience reaction that he nailed the note just as perfectly as it was originally intended but it was the tenderness of the final chorus that became the crowning moment of his rendition of the song, he stands centre stage, microphone held closely to him and eyes fixed on the front row of the audience he just stood still and tenderly repeated the words, “I don’t wanna close my eyes/I don’t wanna fall asleep/Cause I’d miss you babe/And I don’t want to miss a thing/Even when I dream of you/the sweetest dream would never do/I’d still miss you/I just don’t wanna miss a thing.”

“Don’t wanna close my eyes
I don’t wanna fall asleep
Cause I’d miss you babe
And I don’t want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I’d still miss you babe
And I don’t wanna miss a thing

I don’t wanna miss one smile
I don’t wanna miss one kiss
I just wanna be with you
Right here with you, just like this
I just wanna hold you close
Feel your heart so close to mine
And just stay here in this moment
For the rest of time, yeah, yeah, yeaaaaah!!

Don’t wanna close my eyes
I don’t wanna fall asleep
Cause I’d miss you babe
And I don’t want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I’d still miss you
I just don’t wanna miss a thing”
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Scott RH: (stands up and applauds). Killer! I fucking love your attitude and style. Seriously, I see shades of a young Scott in how you carry yourself on the stage. You got charisma, you got style, and you got grace and you just ooze cool. The public will love you! Iris, I absolutely loved. You totally nailed it, and I was on my feet halfway through. It truly was that good. You pulled out a song I didn't expect I'd hear here tonight on Star Factory as well, which is pretty impressive. I think though that song choice is something I might end up talking about a lot tonight, and I was a bit sad to hear the Aerosmith one being pulled out. I mean, I don't doubt that the ladies will love it, and you sung it tremendously well, but all I can think of when I hear that song is Liv Tyler crying at Bruce Willis....and I hate Bruce Willis. Awesome performance though! I am sure you'll be here next week!
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Brittany stands up and claps

Brittany: EDWARD, EDWARD, EDWARD! This was excellent! You came out here like a true rocker and put on a show of a true rocker, and I'm not just saying this cause I'm your mentor *laughs*. Seriously though, once again you blew me away by the effort and vocal ability you have and you sang both songs wonderfully. I put you up for a challenge when I chose Iris for you since it's not an easy song to sing since John Rzeznik has such a distinguishable voice and you did a splendid job of making it your own. Many singers can't pull off these songs, and you did a great job Edward, I'm very proud.

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Michelle: I think....you have a very powerful voice and you're very confident but I don't know, something just doesn't seem right. It was sort of like you were just told to sing the songs, I didn't feel like you were connecting with them. It was only this week though, your past performances were great and you know that I always praise you. Maybe next time just try and give it a little more 'oomph'. You have great potential Edward.
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Brittany looks at Michelle

Brittany: What do you mean by ...oomph?
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Hayden: I agree with Scott, scary I know. (Smiles) You killed that performance and just did what people love to see which is entertainment. You've managed to take 2 classic songs and really turn them into your own song, which I'm a huge fan of. Not to mention you're probably one of the most if not most unique contestant here. You walk your own path, you're not just up there singing lyrics, you're performing them with a style and I applaud you for that, great job once again.
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Michelle: And some more flare and energy into it, for me I thought like it was a very.....vanilla performance. I know he was energetic but it seemed more scripted rather than believable
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Brittany smiles sarcastically in a non negative way

Brittany: Then I think we're looking at two different performances...

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THANK YOU JUDGES AND GIVE IT UP FOR .....EDWARRRRRRDDD BAAAARÁT! THE NEXT PERFORMER HAS ALOT TO PROVE THIS WEEK, HER NAME IS.....KELIIIIIIIII O'DAYYYYY!!!!!
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KELI O'DAY PERFORMANCE: WHO YOU ARE/STAND BY ME


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I really enjoyed last week, I was really confident unlike during the first live show. Me and Hayden worked together non stop to try to get the performance spot on. I think he is a terrific mentor and really knows what's best for me. I'm glad that I survived another week albeit nearly being elimated again, I really want to show everyone that I can be a good performer just like the others, people just need to give me the chance. The elimination of ELMNT was a real shock to me and just made me think that if an act that good can go so early in the competition then all bets are off. I'm going to up my game this week. The first song I will be singing is 'Who You Are' by Jessie J, it's a very modern ballad but I think it is so beautiful and inspiring. The second one is 'Stand By Me' by Ben E. King, which was chosen by Hayden. I think it is a great song and I've now fallen in love with it. I can't wait to get out there and sing my heart out!


Keli walks out to the cheering crowd, waving and smiling. She notices her friends and family in the crowd, holding posters and wearing t-shirts which say 'Keli's Our Winner'. She smiles and nods at them before looking at the five judges, with all of them looking relaxed and fresh faced it puts Keli at ease even more. Taking hold of the microphone, she bows her head down as the lights change to a lonely icy blue. Before the music starts, Keli ad-libs; Yeeeahhhhh, just be true to who you.......are in a very powerful voice, holding the 'are' for a long time. As soon as she finishes, the guitar starts to play.

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I stare at my reflection in the mirror:
"Why am I doing this to myself?"
Losing my mind on a tiny error,
I nearly left the real me on the shelf.
No, no, no, no, no...

Don't lose who you are in the blur of the stars!
Seeing is deceiving, dreaming is believing,
It's okay not to be okay.
Sometimes it's hard to follow your heart.
Tears don't mean you're losing, everybody's bruising,
Just be true to who you are!


Backing vocals repeat the line 'Who You Are' softly and angelic like whilst Keli ad-libs. She closes her eyes and smiles. She starts to move her head slightly to the slow beat whilst the back up vocalists do there thing. Someone from the crowd shouts; 'We Love You Keli!'. Her smile widens and she holds back a chuckle as she sings the next lines.

Brushing my hair, do I look perfect?
I forgot what to do to fit the mold, yeah!
The more I try the less it's working, yeah
'Cause everything inside me screams
No, no, no, no, no...

Don't lose who you are in the blur of the stars!
Seeing is deceiving, dreaming is believing,
It's okay not to be okay.
Sometimes it's hard to follow your heart.
But tears don't mean you're losing, everybody's bruising,
There's nothing wrong with who you are!


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Her usual sweet voice suddenly becomes more aggressive during the bridge. The crowd start to cheer as she makes use of the big stage and walks around, getting closer to different parts of the crowd. She then returns to centre stage and closes her eyes and tilts her head up as she belts out the word; 'home', holding the note for a long time yet seeming so effortless without any strain on her voice. Then when she sings; 'that's my home', her voice returns to the usual sweet angelic voice we all know.

Yes, no's, egos, fake shows, like WHOA!
Just go, and leave me alone!
Real talk, real life, good love, goodnight,
With a smile, that's my home!
That's my home, no...


No, no, no, no, no...
Don't lose who you are in the blur of the stars!
Seeing is deceiving, dreaming is believing,
It's okay not to be okay...
Sometimes it's hard to follow your heart.
Tears don't mean you're losing, everybody's bruising,
Just be true to who you are!
Yeah yeah yeah


As the song ends, the intro to her next song plays straight away, blending in with the end of 'Who You Are'. The lights slowly fade from blue to a beautiful dark purple. She smiles as she sings the opening line to her new favourite song. The crowd cheer as she does

When the night has come
And the land is dark
And the moon is the only light we'll see
No I won't be afraid, no I won't be afraid
Just as long as you stand, stand by me

And darlin', darlin', stand by me, oh now now stand by me
Stand by me, stand by me


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She starts to slowly sway her hips side to side during the second verse, the audience cheer and scream. Keli gives a cheeky wink and continues to sing. Her voice very similar to a motown star, she really gets into the song.

If the sky that we look upon
Should tumble and fall
And the mountains should crumble to the sea
I won't cry, I won't cry, no I won't shed a tear
Just as long as you stand, stand by me


And darlin', darlin', stand by me, oh stand by me
Stand by me, stand by me, stand by me, yeah

Whenever you're in trouble won't you stand by me, oh now now stand by me
Oh stand by me, stand by me, stand by me

Darlin', darlin', stand by me, stand by me
Oh stand by me, stand by me, stand by me


She sings the last two lines slowly and in a deeper tone than her usual. She places the mic back in its stand and grins at the audience as the song ends. 'Thank you!'. They cheer, woop and applaud Keli who has given her strongest performance yet. Keli nods at the judges and looks to Hayden for a sign that she nailed it


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