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Hey everyone, I just wanted to share a little bit of my own personal music I've written. This is a song that I wrote about a year or two ago. I have lyrics for it but I'm not really good at singing so please, feedback, is welcomed. I'll post the lyrics as well just don't go stealing them!
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the snow covered ground beckons beckons for blood to spill, now is the time to kill we will paint it red, oh yes we will so grab your brush and lets strike canvas lets make this masterpiece, lets make this masterpiece
we paint with guns and swords the blood we use is yours streaking across the page its dripping slowly away smearing everything our masterpiece is almost done we watch the blood we spill run
the ground shakes from below the armies cross the freezing snow hands black with frostbite blood runs down their knives screams fill the air they kill without care run blades through your chest until theirs no breath left
we paint with guns and swords the blood we use is yours streaking across the page its dripping slowly away smearing everything our masterpiece is almost done we watch the blood we spill run
cries of pain ring through ground covered a crimson hue bodies strewn across the field giving wolves a meal
we paint with guns and swords the blood we use is yours streaking across the page its dripping slowly away smearing everything our masterpiece
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Good job with the guitar. It was very smooth. I'd like to hear what it would sound like with vocals. Everyone thinks they cant sing. Every once in awhile one of those people can or just needs to get better. |
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thanks guys glad you like it. as for the vocals I dont have a great way of recording them right now so when i do attempt to record them it makes my already not so good voice worse. but I just ordered a drum/synth pad so i will now be able to put together a full instrumental version. |
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So just wanted to throw this out there but I'm working on my own hardcore version of E.T. by Katy Perry and Call Me Maybe by Carly Rae Jepsen. Anyone interested in hearing parts of them? |
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