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#41 Posted : 16 April 2013 08:34:46(UTC)
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Vara: He's an asshole. We all get that. But he is damn good at being an asshole, and he's damn sexy while doing it. So give him a break and listen to his fucking music, because that's all that should matter here.
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#42 Posted : 16 April 2013 08:43:08(UTC)
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Originally Posted by: erich hess Go to Quoted Post
Ooc:very well done.i should hire you to write mine.


Erich: I hate this little fucker.but I'll still listen to his music. Good show ,reckless abandon. Jolly good show.


Noo don't say that I like your roleplays :) thank you though :)

Pilgrim - Ah look who it is...that closet homo again. Nice to see you, Hess. We appreciate you enjoying our music, by the way.
Envy /\/\/\ Stacey Pilgrim



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#43 Posted : 16 April 2013 08:49:11(UTC)
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Erich: oh pilly pil. One day I am going to take you seriously,but not today.
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#44 Posted : 16 April 2013 08:52:03(UTC)
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Scott: How often do we get dicks with bravado coming into music and not being able to back it up? I hate this guy, but as Erich says.....fucking hell he can write a great song and back up his controversy. I'm intrigued.

Ooc: Well done Anna, really enjoying this so far :)


Thank you and thank you for helping me get started :)

Pilgrim - what's that? The world's biggest capitalist doesn't like me? Boo fucking hoo. Fuck off and wank into your cash.
Envy /\/\/\ Stacey Pilgrim



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#45 Posted : 16 April 2013 08:58:30(UTC)
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Originally Posted by: snap_itshannah Go to Quoted Post
Vara: He's an asshole. We all get that. But he is damn good at being an asshole, and he's damn sexy while doing it. So give him a break and listen to his fucking music, because that's all that should matter here.


Pilgrim - hold on....hold on. Someone gets it! King of the assholes here and she understands. Also you're right I am fucking sexy. Give me a call.

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Erich: oh pilly pil. One day I am going to take you seriously,but not
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Pilgrim - You really should take me seriously. Maybe when I run punk you'll realise it.
Envy /\/\/\ Stacey Pilgrim



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#46 Posted : 16 April 2013 09:01:47(UTC)
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Vara: Sure, yeah. Just so you know, I don't cheat, so if I call you, it out of a friendship, got it?
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Pilgrim - Friendship?....allow me to take a rare dip into internet vernacular here.....LOL. That's all.
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#48 Posted : 16 April 2013 09:06:51(UTC)
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Vara: Yep, exactly how I thought that would go. Sorry. Unlike you, I don't cheat.
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#50 Posted : 17 April 2013 06:51:12(UTC)
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ooc - I did this song about anarchy and rioting but it isnt my opinion, it's just for the purposes of telling a story lol. It's all fiction, I don't really think any of this stuff.

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#3/ Choir Boys

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Song - Choir Boys
Album - HATA AKA!
Artist - RECKLESS ABANDON
Genre - Punk rock
Length - 2:59
Written by - P. Pilgrim

Choir Boys is the third song from the debut EP from punk rock band RECKLESS ABANDON. It is a hard hitting and massively political track that talks of the downfall of capitalism in favour of many socialist ideals that have become the political haven of lead singer Pilgrim Pilgrim throughout his life so far. It delivers the notion of violence and a range of other punk related topics with a real violence and punch that lend themselves to the notion of unrest and taking the power away from those who have held it for 'too long'. It is sure to be a controversial topic to cover, and the song certainly does not disappoint when it comes to that side of the release. The title Choir Boys is a reference to how people expect youngsters to be in an idyllic world, standing tall and singing exactly what they are told when told to while dressed in their white uniforms, all innocent and well behaved. It is something of an ironic title given how non-conformist the song itself is and the way in which Pilgrim almost commands the listener to join in with his fight.

Despite its truly controversial themes, this song has all the makings of a band classic for Reckless Abandon. It is passionate, loud, and has a very memorable chorus that will be a massive selling point. The band is sure to find that it will be one that is embraced for years to come, thanks to its downtrodden masses theme and the fact that it just paints a picture of everyone together. It is a song that showcases the talent of Pilgrim as a songwriter and lyricist in general, as well as promoting the sheer skill and talent of Envy Pilgrim throughout the energetic and passionate chorus.

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Pilgrim thinks - 'Ladies and gentlemen, allow me to introduce my greatest work of art to you all! Haha. Nah I do tell a little bit of a lie here. This is not the song that I am most proud of on this EP, but it is the one I expected to be when I first set out to write. This was the track I had envisaged before even touching my guitar for the first time in the process, and this was the song I had always dreamed of writing, ever since I first heard 'Never Mind the Bollocks' when I was like 12. This is where my ideals really really come to the fore for the first time, and I wanted that to be the main focus of the track rather than the music, so that's why the guitars just sound angry and loud throughout this song. I don't think that the fact it sounds so raw is a bad thing though. It's a song that is simple. It's about anarchy and it's about social unrest and taking the power from those with the iron grip on it. It really pushes the ideas that I have, and I thoroughly believe that this is a song that we will be playing in live settings for years to come to a massive ovation. Do I appreciate that? Only if those who choose to cheer have the ideals implanted in them. Only if they appreciate what I'm saying. This is a straight up 'fuck you capitalist pigs' song, and I hope that is the main focus of all the listeners. It's violent, it's crazy, it's obscene, but I love it. I decided to start it with like a questioning of whether what we are doing was going to be the right thing and then explode back in with the whole 'nah, fuck it, riot! It comes across well. Hell, even Envy sounded fucking awesome singing on this. Once more, I am very proud of what we achieved on this track.'


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Envy thinks - (audio recorded before her split from Pilgrim) - 'This song is somewhat bittersweet for me. I've never ever been a fan of violence and all the crap that Pil gets himself caught up in. Never. And yet at the same time when he asked me to sing the chorus on a song I know he feels so strongly about I have never felt so proud. It was like for that little while he accepted me as his wife and as his bandmate enough to let me sing something that meant more than anything to him. At the same time though, I still feel uneasy at singing something that advocates rioting and trying to topple a whole capitalist ideal with nothing more than just a placard and a bandana. I suppose though, it is very punk, and it will give people an idea of what Pilgrim is all about the like of which they have never had before. In short, then, I have very very mixed feelings about this. As a song on its own though, I can't say I hate it. It is what it is, a really exciting and adrenaline fist pumping punk anthem. I feel the fans will love it, even if I don't enjoy the whole notion behind it.'




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The intro - This intro starts in a way that is very different to how the ones that have come before it have sounded. It begins with a massive thump on the drums just as the guitar hits a note and then moves into a slightly technical riff. This plays through a couple of times with just the guitar, and it is immediately evident from this that the pace of the record has really picked up from the two slightly slower tracks that begun the album. From there, the bass comes in along with the other guitar and they play over the same riff a few times before finally the drums come to the party and see the whole band playing the adrenaline pumping and energetic exciting introduction to the song. It is one that has a real punk edge to it but with a little bit of a tone of metal through as well, and it has a chunkiness that allows it to sound like something that can be largely moshed or bounced along in time to. The end of the introduction sees the drums and the bass continue to play the same riff over and over, but eventually the two guitars switch what they are doing to change to a higher pitched chord, which they layer over the top of the other instruments repeatedly until the drum fill signals the introduction coming to an end and the entry of the verse.

The verses - The verses are the most punchy and exciting part of this song. The theme of punk and rioting means that it is important that the songs are led by the lyrics first and foremost and it is here that they come to the forefront more than at any other point throughout the song. The lines of the chorus are far shorter than in any other Reckless Abandon track, with each one hitting the listener in the ear like some sort of anarchy loving word fist. Each one is delivered with venom. They sound almost like some sort of threat against the powers that have allowed the government and other capitalists to exert ultimate control over people. Each of the words comes from Pilgrim with a very raspy punk attitude that the listener can feel he has been fighting to get out for a long time. As he sings of violence and carnage, he sounds very much excited and delighted about the trouble he is helping to cause. In terms of the music in these sections, the drums are loud and simple, the bass follows suit somewhat, and the guitars play high pitched chords in short bursts that allow the vocal to have a real thump behind it. In many ways, this is the simplest song the band has ever done so far. However, it is also one of the most powerful, with its controversial message shining through really prevalently in the verses and the way in which it is delivered ensuring that this has a passion and message that becomes the real focus. At the end of the verses, the final two lines become a little elongated and in the last line, the guitars become faster playing a row of short sharp chords that lead into the next section.

The chorus - This chorus sees the return to action of Envy Pilgrim. Unlike in the first song, where she provided something of a powerful backing to her husband, this is a song where she takes the lead in the chorus. She appears to borrow the required poison and venom for this punk anthem from her husband as she lashes into a chorus that is filled with anger. The guitars are loud and play some heavily distorted chords, the drum kit is battered hard, and part of the chorus is layered with a background noise of group vocals to give off the essence of standing as one and some sort of socialist army that marches towards its perceived goals and glory. Envy allows her own natural charisma to flow here, and she sings with a swagger as she shows off the real talent she has. The song allows her to prove that she has more than just big lungs to hit the large notes as she strips back her own talent to take on a punk rock stylee vocal. It suits the song perfectly. Like the verses, this chorus is far from being subtle or as skilled instrumentally as the songs that came before it on the EP, but it has a thrashy beauty to its passion and its volume, while the lyrical message is far more important than the actual instrumental that comes behind it.

The outro - The outro of this song serves as something of a rounding up of all the ideas that came before it. It takes another method which is reminiscent of punk gone by. The guitars and bass are all silent as Pilgrim's voice is put under a proverbial spotlight. The only accompaniment to the egotistical frontman at this time is the clapping of his own hands in a steady beat and the drums pounding softly along in time. The final verse continues like this as an outro, cutting through the last of the anarchy ideas and tying up the notion. At the very last second of the song, as he reaches the last few words, Pilgrim slides up his guitar and then hits one last big note, his voice echoing out in the silence for a few seconds as the song comes to an end, symbolic of how his ideas will resonate through all time (in his own opinion).

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Throw down your placards
Let your banners fall to the floor
Extinguish all your torches
We lost the will to fight anymore
Is this all over
Won't we bring our battles to the front line
I'll be a martyr
A prophet with a bandana, not turning water into wine


Smash smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall
Marching on your corporate towers plans to kill 'em all
Bang bang I'm gonna take great pleasure in your last word
Let's watch the silent masses rise to have their voices heard
Smash bang smash, let's take control of their markets intercepted,
Profit for pleasure's sake will never never be accepted
Smash Smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall,
Marching on the Senate, the Reichstag and then Whitehall!


Don't take another breath until you breach the surface,
Take up those agendas,
Break through and fill your lungs with air
We're gonna scream, shout,
Let's fill the air with anarchy
Light a bottle, let's burn them out
From bankers to the monarchy


Smash smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall
Marching on your corporate towers plans to kill 'em all
Bang bang I'm gonna take great pleasure in your last word
Let's watch the silent masses rise to have their voices heard
Smash bang smash, let's take control of their markets intercepted,
Profit for pleasure's sake will never never be accepted
Smash Smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall,
Marching on the Senate, the Reichstag and then Whitehall!


It's our time to come out,
to stand up tall but refuse to be counted
A willful neglect that must be outed
This is when we wave our flags of blood
See how our red blows bravely in the wind
Moneymakers to their masts have sheets of white now pinned


Smash smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall
Marching on your corporate towers plans to kill 'em all
Bang bang I'm gonna take great pleasure in your last word
Let's watch the silent masses rise to have their voices heard
Smash bang smash, let's take control of their markets intercepted,
Profit for pleasure's sake will never never be accepted
Smash Smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall,
Marching on the Senate, the Reichstag and then Whitehall!


Gimme the new breed over the new revolution
While we continue to seek the ultimate resolution
If there's a fight remaining in our heart
Our ascent to the top will be a work of art
The consumer needs what you tell them they need
But one day we'll halt you, we'll see them freed
Yeah the consumer needs what the consumer needs
Listen to me chant as I sew my seeds

Did you know that I was going to watch you fall
All that time ago when we stood one and all
And we dropped our placards,
Extinguished our torches' flame,
Did you think you were removed of all blame
Now we're on our way so never get too brash
The economy's drop will be nothing like your crash
The recessionary fall will be preferable
Over the way you will smash.


Smash smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall
Marching on your corporate towers plans to kill 'em all
Bang bang I'm gonna take great pleasure in your last word
Let's watch the silent masses rise to have their voices heard
Smash bang smash, let's take control of their markets intercepted,
Profit for pleasure's sake will never never be accepted
Smash Smash as I hear the glass break, I watch your empire fall,
Marching on the Senate, the Reichstag and then Whitehall!


In the cold light of day we will never show regret
Flames may be extinguished, your city cold and wet,
But we will stand united in the light of morning after
And as we watch you fall to your knees,
Celebrate our rapid rise to the rafters
Pump your fists, never give up, never lay down
Let them see you growl, never grimmace only frown!
Socialist agenda come to pass
Socialist agenda come to pass!


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Envy /\/\/\ Stacey Pilgrim



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Erica: this makes me want to drive my car through a Starbucks....but then I think the message will be diluted by the fact I'm driving a Mercedes.
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Pilgrim - Who would have thought you would have a Merc? The self styled non conforming punk icon is no more than a big wig....wow. You disappoint me sir. Even more so than usual. Unless its vintage. Then I'll choose to look the other way.
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Erica: um,I am a GIRL. Don't call me "sir",sir! I drive a 72 Mercedes 250.mustard yellow.
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Ooc: You always have such amazing role-plays that I can't believe that you are new sometimes lol. Anyways keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more of your creativity blossom through your role-plays. :)
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Erica: um,I am a GIRL. Don't call me "sir",sir! I drive a 72 Mercedes 250.mustard yellow.


Pilgrim - Hmmmmm.....I guess I will offer up a slight apology then. I read your name wrong and assumed you were your tool of an ex husband. Still, a mustard yellow car means you deserve a kick really hard in the shin regardless of gender.
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Ooc: You always have such amazing role-plays that I can't believe that you are new sometimes lol. Anyways keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more of your creativity blossom through your role-plays. :)


Thank you :) I'm trying to make them all a little bit unique which is hard lol. I'm glad you liked them though :) thank you again that's really kind :)
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#4/ Songs for Peace and War

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Song - Songs for Peace and War
Album - HATA AKA!
Artist - RECKLESS ABANDON
Genre - Punk rock
Length - 5:34
Written by - P. Pilgrim

Songs for Peace and War is the penultimate song on the EP HATA AKA from punk rock six-piece RECKLESS ABANDON. The track is their most reflective and soft on the EP, and in spite of it being heavily influenced by music with less of an aggressive tone, it still manages to obtain and contain the essence that has been firmly in evidence so far throughout the album. Despite its more laid back tones and sensitive sound, the track is still very heavily political, perhaps more than any other that the band have released so far, as lyricist Pilgrim Pilgrim contemplates the parallels of war and peace and how they are constantly running side by side in a volatile union that has the possibility to break at any time. He breaks the proverbial fourth wall with great effect, discussing the use of music as a weapon for both war and peace and how songs can have the power to make a difference when it comes to the people against the higher powers and the ways in which they deal with each other. This song represents something of a coming of age for Pilgrim, with a real maturity to his politics and references, and is perhaps the most contemplative the volatile singer has been to date in his writing. It proves that this is a band with the potential to prove themselves true players in the world of punk and alternative music with the ability to hang around for years to come.

The song questions the link between what governments and other powers say in terms of what they want and what they really want. It asks whether social unrest is a good thing in trying to put across a point, or whether those in positions of power, either from a governmental or socialist perspective, should be sitting down and discussing such issues as how to push forward and make changes that would benefit everyone. It suggests as well that people who are often being painted in the mainstream as being troublemakers or the instigators of some of the problems that come to the fore are actually open to talks about making things better and would more often than not rather see peace than violence. However, it also shows that rioters and other people who get involved in demonstrations and other political movements are still prepared to turn to these as and when they need to. It is a very deep song thematically, and some may be surprised to hear Pilgrim lending his lyricism to something that is so thoughtful and takes into account more than a single perspective. It also brilliantly brings a close the more political elements of the EP, with the themes being covered including discovery and causes behind the anarchy in young people, how socialism and politics can build up in someone over time, the violent nasty side of the punk movement, and then finally the rationale and rather deep, thoughtful and clever side of it.

In terms of style, this is the slowest of all of the songs on the debut EP. It is one that sees Envy return to vocals, delivering a brilliantly harmonised chorus alongside her estranged husband that is as powerful as it is emotional. This suggests passion and desire through what is the main hook of the track. It has a sort of tragic element to it, although the music is not all that dark, and the tone of the guitars and the vocals throughout the track suggest that sort of tragedy in the gap that exists between perceived powers and the people who feel disassociated and unhappy with goings on. Despite it being once again heavily political, this song is easily the most radio-friendly of the band's five debut tracks. It is one that will break boundaries, being very accessible to both alternative music lovers and the mainstream all at once. It has an element of a festival anthem to it, and will be one that is sung for years into the future.

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Pilgrim thinks - 'So this is my soppy moment (nods). This is the chilled out side of me that occasionally shines through, I suppose when I've been on too many spliffs or whatever. This track was one I brought Jake Gomez in on after he suggested looking at the contrasts between rioting and peace. The chorus just really fell into place once we discussed the whole comparison that goes on. It sounds like a great piece of rock music in the chorus, which is gonna be a big thing for a band that largely lives in the alternative sector of the industry. On the other hand, I like that in the verses I get to throw out more of my own political agenda. I like the way it comes across in this though. Some things I sing, although always true and from the most honest place I can muster, might sound a little preachy and one-sided for some people. I'm not too much of a douche to see that. But I think this is the sort of account that can show off both sides of an argument well and fairly. I still think my ideals shine through far stronger though. Is this our selling out moment? Haha, I certainly hope there's no accusation of us having sold out this early in our career. I mean I know we are punk rock, but at the same time, I like to think we are quite accessible. Will I admit it? Sure, ok then - I'm not one of these punk rock scholars of old who is 100% about the message. The medium is the message, yeah? Nothing I say in my music can ever be bigger than the music itself. That was quite profound, huh? At the end of the day though, this is us. This is what I want us to be producing time after time, and I really did enjoy the first time I heard this track.'


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Jake (drummer) thinks - 'Although I was actually involved with the writing process for every song on account of being the drummer, this was the first time that I was able to come on board with the lyrics as well, which was cool. Pilgrim is very precious about his own lyrics and wanting to make all of his tracks sound like...well like him. Which is cool, I guess, but I think it was nice to get a different perspective in there and allow someone else to have their say. That's why this has more of an element of peace in it. I'm like the polar opposite of Pilgrim in terms of substance abuse and like my opinions with regards to violence. But he told me he respects my dedication to music and the band, so it was really awesome to get the chance to input my ideas. That's where the notion of reaching out, extending the olive branch came from. We actually had our frankest discussion ever over a coffee while we were writing this, and I think it was the first time I got the chance to see the passion Pilgrim has for this band. It's a whole lot more than he likes to let people think, in my opinion. I'm proud of how this track came out in the end. It sounds like something I wanted to create, and I think I feel awesome about having my stamp on it. It's definitely one of the more mellow tracks on the record, and people will see it as the radio-friendly one with the sing along chorus, but I really like that side of it as well. It makes me happy. I'm genuinely excited to see what people make of it.'




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The intro - Being the slowest and most mellow track on the entirety of the EP, this is the one that comes with the slowest and shortest introduction. After a brief buzz of silence that follows the prior song, there is a drum beat that comes in, mid paced, steady and solid just tapping out a few beats on the tom drum over and over. Within a few seconds, it is joined by the lead guitar, which enters with a pleasant yet quite different opening riff. This is picked rather than strummed as a chord and comes over a slight buzz that provides a kind of distant feeling to the song itself. These are the only two instruments that play at all on the intro part of the track, and this alone gives it a sort of stripped back and simplistic feel that may not have been present in the songs that came before it. It is also the shortest of all the intros played by Reckless Abandon so far, and it comes to an end with a seamless switch into the first verse.

The verses - The start of the verses of the song are arguably even more simplistic than the introduction even was. It begins with a quick switch to gentle chords on the guitar, while the drum continues to play its same simple beat. This means that the guitar is quiet and no longer the commanding force it was in the intro. It gives way to vocal, and the two playing this accompaniment makes the perfect frame for the emotional plea and political words that Pilgrim sends out to his followers with this ideal-led track. Each of the first two lines (in groups of four) are sung with a calm voice and in a sort of manner that, by Pilgrim's standards, is gentle and almost kind. This is replaced by the first pace change in the track though for the second half of each of the verses. At this point (the end of the second line), the drums get slightly louder and the bass and second guitar come in just in time to meet a slightly faster and more distorted part of the song, in which Pilgrim's voice becomes louder, more desperate and a little more angry than it was in the section that stood immediately before it. This part lasts for another two lines before it goes back to the opening riff and cycles through this again. At the end of the second cycle (end of the fourth line), there is a moment where both guitars go silent and the drum taps out its single repeated beat for just a few seconds amid the silence. This quiet is then smashed by a slide on a guitar string which brings in the start of each of the chorus.

The chorus - The choruses are very jumpy and energetic when compared to the verses, but they still somehow manage to keep a sort of element of mellow and peace behind them. The drums continue with the same simple single beat pounding over and over almost in a marching style that personifies the notion of two opposing forces marching on each other in some form of cold war square off. The guitars kick back in at this point, playing some happy sounding chords as the drums continue to bang out the constant beat that gives this song its warm simplicity and lends itself to the sense of familiarity that makes it an instant favourite and a memorable track. Throughout the upbeat chorus section of the track, Pilgrim's voice is given a tine that is strong and commanding, his lyrics booming strongly over the music. He makes strong use of his harmony at the end of the fifth and tenth lines of the chorus as well as he holds the notes and allows his own layered vocal to make it sound a little echoing and very "large" in stature. The end of this part is the only one in the song where the drums change from their standard style, playing two quick little fills as Pilgrim slows his singing and holds each of the last two words to give more dramatic effect.

The outro - This is the shortest and perhaps the most violent part of the song. It exists as a way of bringing the story of a desire to work together to a close and bringing everything to some form of a conclusion. This part is more angry in tone, even though it has only one guitar and the drums. While the relentless drum piece is still the same, it plays much louder, alongside the stamping of a foot. The guitar is distorted and buzzing as OPilgrim almost shouts every line of the final outro. It is evident that this is a subject close to his heart as he describes how the desire for change and compromise is ignored by those who hold positions of power because they simply want to retain their status and power at the very top of the tree. The last two lines of this ending are sung without the guitars, allowing the venom in his voice to really spill through and showcase his anger.

Lyrics

If you wanted to dance, we can dance all night with you,
If you wanna speak quite frankly, we'll tell it like it is,
Every word we'll say is true
But we'll fact check when you say the sky is blue
But if you wanna spark our wick and cause ignition
Take the chance to tempt our true volition
We'll never hold our hands up in surrender
From boss to boss and bank to lender


We write songs for war and songs for peace
I pen words to make their actions weak
We sing it clear, we shout out loud,
Another bold lyric to make us proud
Songs for peace and songs for war,
To try to stop their march to control
We'll battle hard or we'll take a stand
Violent mass or quiet command
We write songs for war and songs for peace
What will be will always transpire
But we try to stop another gunfire


Do you remember, the problems caused when we last spoke
The cause of all the issues that we still bear scars from
Maybe we should just fight fire with yet more flame
Because we're only gonna get burned anyway and take the blame
You know it's never your fault, we shoulder the responsibility
But too much weight can break the back and hamper our ability
To keep the peace, to control the context in the media
To rewrite history, so stop the clock and throw out the encyclopedia


We write songs for war and songs for peace
I pen words to make their actions weak
We sing it clear, we shout out loud,
Another bold lyric to make us proud
Songs for peace and songs for war,
To try to stop their march to control
We'll battle hard or we'll take a stand
Violent mass or quiet command
We write songs for war and songs for peace
What will be will always transpire
But we try to stop another gunfire


Trouble is, there's lies laced through every word you speak,
You're outed with hacks and exposed in leak after leak,
Constant denial won't make a difference to our unabating motion
Just help us make a change worth more than a single drop in the ocean
I've stood tall I've crumbled low and never felt more inclined
To drop my sword and shake hands with the man I vowed to find
We're open to opinion, we're not the savages you portrayed
I think you'd happily forget that to have us beaten, whipped and flayed


We write songs for war and songs for peace
I pen words to make their actions weak
We sing it clear, we shout out loud,
Another bold lyric to make us proud
Songs for peace and songs for war,
To try to stop their march to control
We'll battle hard or we'll take a stand
Violent mass or quiet command
We write songs for war and songs for peace
What will be will always transpire
But we try to stop another gunfire


Maybe we should just fight fire with yet more flame
Because we're only gonna get burned anyway and take the blame
You know it's never your fault, we shoulder the responsibility
But too much weight can break the back and hamper our ability
To keep the peace, to control the context in the media
To rewrite history, so stop the clock and throw out the encyclopedia
Historic landmarks make for something in which you build foundations
Every creed and color wants for change for every single nation


We write songs for war and songs for peace
I pen words to make their actions weak
We sing it clear, we shout out loud,
Another bold lyric to make us proud
Songs for peace and songs for war,
To try to stop their march to control
We'll battle hard or we'll take a stand
Violent mass or quiet command
We write songs for war and songs for peace
What will be will always transpire
But we try to stop another gunfire


Born without a chance to build their own alliance
The silver spoon thrust in their mouth the proof of their reliance
Looking down on those rising up
We all should drink from an equal cup
Instead they make one rash decision
Their pledge to keep the same division
They'll live and die by this decision
Their pledge to retain the same division


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Edited by user 18 April 2013 02:00:03(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

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Juia: You guys are probably the most true punk-rock band I haven't seen since Reported Failure started out. There's a feeling of riot in all of these songs and even in the most subtle songs of this EP, you guys don't fail to send a riot message to the masses. That's an incredible piece of art!

OOC: This is really good, I mean you've done an awesome work with the discription and the lyrics, and I deeply loved 'Songs for peace and war', seriously I'm jealous, but in a good way ;)
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