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#21 Posted : 19 August 2014 10:30:46(UTC)
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Will is seen clapping along with the audience. When it subsides, he begins to speak:

"I'll be the first to say good luck and its great to have you here on Star factory Chris. I think this was a good performance. I think the lyrics did come across as a little cheesy but it was very romantic and it got the indie feeling across quite well. Over the next few weeks I'd like to see you break out of your shell, I know its hard getting in front of a crowd full of people and especially going up first but this was your chance to set yourself apart from the bunch with your first impression. My first impression is that youve got potential and this was a catchy song here but I want you to really become more confident in what you do because it did seem like you very nervous. Good job nonetheless man and good luck"
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#22 Posted : 19 August 2014 10:36:34(UTC)
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"Alright, Curtis," Zack said as he got back up stage. "Everyone give Curtis some love. We have more people coming to the stage. from someone that struggle with music portion to someone that had no problem with it. Lets take a look at our next Contestant coming to the stage from the Country's Capital Miss Valerie!

PRE-SHOW VALERIE HUE
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There's a quick, raw shot of Valerie from the side as smiling sweetly at the camera crew before it flashes away, cutting to a clearer, much more focused shot of her from the front. There's a small pause before she starts speaking. "Hey, guys. I'm Valerie Hue, I'm nineteen years old, and I'm from the capital of the USA, Washington D.C."

A picture of Valerie Hue with her family appears on the screen. There are three older brothers, an older woman - their mother - and then Valerie in the middle. "My dad left us when I was really young," she speaks while the image remains on the screen. "So it made my older brothers and I really close to my mom." The image changes to another picture of Valerie and her family during Christmas, probably only a couple years ago. Valerie looks roughly the same as she does now. She's opening a gift that's shaped like either a video game or a movie while her brothers do that same. Her mom looks on in joy. "My brothers were basically my best friends. We used to stay up all night playing video games together. That's how we bonded. In fact, my brother gave me my first drink after I had completed Oblivion. (she laughs)"

The camera focuses back on Valerie. "I didn't really have an interest in music until my brothers went away to college. My mom was terrified that I would go into some sort of depression without them around, so she tried to find some to distract me. One day I came home from school, and there was a piano in the middle of the dining room. It used to be my mom's, and she had brought it out of storage for me." There's a couple quick shots of pictures of Valerie and her mother behind the piano in their messy dining room. "She wasn't a very good teacher. I know she won't mind me saying that. I mean, she was teaching me from memory, and she herself hadn't played in years! But when I was behind that piano, it just... you know, clicked. I had so much of my life trying to do everything that my brothers were doing that I never even took the time to figure out what my passion was!"

"The first time I performed for an audience, my family came to see me. The way that they looked at me afterwards... they were amazed, I think. I never thought I could love anything more than staying up late and gaming with my brothers, but... music is my true love. I know it. That's why Starfactory is so important to me. And that's why music is so important to me. It's something I'm good at and it's something I love, and it's something that I can do all on my own. And it's something my family is proud of me for. I want to make my family proud of me, and I want them to see how happy music makes me. I just... I love it."




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"I was so excited to hear that the first week was going to be Evangeline Wolfe week. Evangeline's a huge inspiration of mine, I've loved her since the first time I heard Sadness is Sweet. She's who really got me into the folk and indie genre, which is the style of music I usually write. So to get her the first week and get to show off one of the stronger aspects of my music ability immediately was amazing. The song that I wrote for this week is called Answer Your Calls. One thing that I really love about Evangeline's music is that she always tries to tell a story with her songs, so I wanted to do the same with this. The song tells the story of a man and a woman together, but the man keeps lying and cheating on the woman. The woman, instead of leaving the man, chooses to believe that her man will change and accepts the lies as fact, even though she knows that they're not true. In the end, the man has run off and gotten married to another woman in Vegas, but he still visits his former girlfriend, convincing her that he still loves her. After all the pain and lies that the man has put this woman through, at the end of the song, she tells him that she still loves him, and that she'll still answer his calls - see, that's the name of the song - and that she'll lie to herself and tell herself that he's all her's while he cheats on his new wife with her. Throughout the song, I repeat the phrase "There but for the grace of God, go I," over and over again to show how much she believes that her man will really change eventually, by saying that if she were in the same situation, she probably would have done the same thing if it weren't for God watching over her. It's kind of sad, but you have a hard time feeling bad for the woman in the song, because she's choosing to make her life miserable. That's the kind of feelings that I want the audience to have tonight when they hear my song. Conflicted sympathy."




"Preforming her own song here is miss Hue!"

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Valerie's name is announced as she enters the stage in a blackout. The lights come back up once she's hit her mark in the middle of the stage, microphone in hand. Valerie doesn't wear anything fancy or flashy, because she's not a fancy or flashy sort of girl. Cheers from the audience resonate louder when the lights come up and she's seen. Valerie can't help but grin. There's no nervousness in her appearance, but it is obvious that she's a rather shy girl off the stage.

Valerie knows that she doesn't have a lot of time to compose herself before the music starts, so she takes a couple deep breaths. Off camera, somebody counts her off, and then she begins singing immediately as the music starts. A huge smile grows across her face as she does, seeing the audience's reaction to her voice, which is calming and wispy, almost like the type of singing voice you would imagine a small mythical creature - like a fairy - to have.

The first line of her song seems to capture the audience immediately, causing her to grin even larger as she sings. There's a flow to Valerie's words as she sings them that is absolutely mesmerizing, and clearly displays her talents.

I have been crazy
Do you think I've been crazy?
We're all crazy, I warned you from the start
Promise not to hold it against me
You have to say that you mean it
Well, I was crazy in love long before you came

But we can keep on arguing into the night
And we can keep on getting louder into the light
And I better keep on
There but for the grace of God, go I

It's hard to believe you mean it
When you're asking me to change things
But I apologize, and look the other way
You're not really that pure, sir
When I caught you in Vegas
We were not pretty, but she was

And she will keep on going
And you will keep on telling lies
And I will keep on believing
There but for the grace of God, go I

What're these feelings for?
You're darkening my front door
I won't escape from you, I will not even try
And what's that on your finger?
You say you're not getting married
But being engaged is still just the same

But when you keep on driving your car
While calling me to see if I'm far
Remember your wife's pretty face
There but for the grace of God, go I

But I still love you
And I will answer your calls
And I will say you're mine, mine, mine
There but for the grace of God, go I
There but for the grace of God, go I
There but for the grace of God, go I
There but for the grace of God, go I


Valerie repeats the final line one more time, her voice steady and strong, receiving a huge reaction from the audience. Tonight, Valerie hadn't shown herself as a nineteen year old girl, but as an artist. The cameras show a shot of Valerie's mother and brothers cheering loudly for her, jumping up and down. Valerie smiles brightly at them, and then turns to the judges to hear what they have to say, hoping that her skills and potential shined through today.

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Jenny Lewis - Rise Up with Fists!!



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#23 Posted : 19 August 2014 10:49:08(UTC)
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Evangeline claps for Valerie, standing to her feet. "First off, I just want to say... I love your scarf!" she says excitedly before sitting back down.

Valerie laughs, and takes it off, stretching it out so Evangeline can see all of the scarf. "Thank you, I made it."

"Oh! Artistically talented all the way around!" Evangeline smiles. "For the first week, you did really great, and I can't wait to see what else you bring to the table later. You made indie look completely easy. Great job, hunny!"
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#24 Posted : 19 August 2014 10:51:49(UTC)
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Will claps for her when shes finished

"Isn't your name just familiar! Very well performance all around and I think you will be a force to be reckon with in this competition because of your experience. I really want to see what you have in store. Very good job!"
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Valerie smiles and giggles a little bit when Will says that her name is familiar, nodding. "Thank you so much!"
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Zack comes on stage again clapping his hands " This challenge was made for someone like you, huh miss Valerie. Stick around because after the back two more performance, including A rapper trying his hand at Indie and and Another Country boy take his turn up to bat."


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Joshua walks into the stage of Starfactory with a guitar strapped around his shoulder he smiles as he sees the faces in the crowd Joshua had never performed in front of a crowd before this would be the first time and it actually excited him unlike his sister who was nervous the first time Joshua felt as if he was on cloud nine and he hadn't even started yet he walks over to the nic stand which is in the middle of the stage and smiles at each if the judges who he auditioned in front if before it was still odd singing in front of them since he actually liked a lot of them especially Jennifer Armstrong who's music he loved he also had a huge crush on her so it made him a bit nervous during his audition however the nerves seemed to fade away when he sang in front of them before so he figured it'd the same now Joshua moves closer to the mic and then speaks his speaking voice wasn't very deep and wasn't extremely masculine however it wasn't to light either "Hey guys I'm Joshua and this song is called "Only Thing I'll Miss" he smiled he wasn't speaking to the judges as they already knew who he was he was speaking to the crowd more than them Jackb begins lightly strumming the guitar playing a little intro to the song as the lights began to dim down a little behind him were two blue lights which lit up the arena a bit Joshua continued playing the light intro to the song a little longer Joshua was obviously very talented when it came to playing guitar as he has been playing for an extremely long time and even played in a band before after finishing the intro which didn't seem very hard to do he began strumming the guitar keeping it slow he was now playing very simple chords which didn't show off his guitar talents much he then moved closer to the microphone and began singing his voice was nice it was smooth and light however his voice wasn't as strong as his sisters if it was he wasn't showing that now anyway Joshua continued singing the first verse of the song the lyrics spoke of a relationship that is coming to an end one person in the relationship has lost the feelings they had before while Joshua seems to still feel the love that they had Joshua sings about being alone on the home they once shared the other person in the relationship isn't with him and Joshua sings the emotion he was singing with really made the song sound good he sounded hurt and alone as he sang just like the lyrics of the song says Joshua looked out at the crowd who seem to be enjoying the performance so far he then looked over at the judges table hoping the judges were also enjoying the song

Sitting in this house alone wondering if you'll
Ever pick up the phone you told me everything we had is gone
But I don't believe it cause I still feel something when my lips
Are against your lips when you're wrapped in my arms like this
But you say you don't feel the same all the feelings just went away
Well tell me how'd they disappear when I still feel you here

After finishing the first verse Joshua goes into the chorus as he makes his way to he chorus he begins strumming the guitar a little harder as the song begins to pick up a bit in pace Joshua continues singing showing the same emotion he did in the verse before Joshua continues singing to the judges as the cameras begin to move around him a bit he doesn't really look into any if then though Joshua's voice sounded a bit stronger now however he was still no Ashley Joshua continues singing while looking at judges table Joshua obviously felt every word in this song you could tell by the look on his face and the sound in his voice the emotion he had on display was almost heartbreaking the song had a sad sounding beat to it which really fit the lyrics and Joshua's voice Joshua continues singing as he questions how the relationship could come to an end so easily when he obviously wasn't ready to let go he even asks the person in the relationship for one more hug or one last kiss he sounded desperate for this like he really needed it he then begins to tell the person that she's the only thing he'll ever miss before bringing the chorus to an end

If yesterday's gone and today is fading will you be out
Of my life by tomorrow baby cause I don't wanna see
You go don't want you to walk away so if I sing this
Song will you maybe stay just for tonight because I can't take
It to see leave behind something just like this can I have one
More hug or one last kiss because you're the only thing
I'll ever miss yeah you're the only thing that I'll ever miss


Joshua then begins strumming the guitar the way he did before on the first verse however he doesn't start singing again just yet he moves away from the microphone and just plays the guitar for a shirt instrumental break he looks out at the crowd once again who seem to still be liking the performances Joshua then closes his eyes and nods his head a little as he continues playing before moving to the microphone once again he then begins singing the second verse the emotion in his voice is still present as he sings Joshua's eyes were now open he looks into one if the cameras as if he was singing to the viewers secretly he hoped the girl the song was written about was watching however he knew she probably wasn't Joshua then looks back over to the crowd as he continues singing the second verse Joshua actually thought the crowd was beautiful he loved every moment he performed for them the nerves he felt about performing in front of Jennifer had disappeared like he knew they would Joshua was so caught up in the crowd and the song he had actually forgot this was a competition and he was singing to stay in he felt like it was his first performance at a concert or something which is strange considering how nervous the competition and performing use to make his sister obviously it wasn't a genetic thing since Joshua seemed to be fine with it after finishing the second verse the pace picks up a little again Joshua begins singing the Chirus the way he did before showing that same heartbreaking emotion

How'd it all just go away how could something so right be gone
In a day and why is your presence still here why is your
Voice the only thing I hear is there anything I can do or say because
If you ask I'll do it baby

If yesterday's gone and today is fading will you be out
Of my life by tomorrow baby cause I don't wanna see
You go don't want you to walk away so if I sing this
Song will you maybe stay just for tonight because I can't take
It to see leave behind something just like this can I have one
More hug or one last kiss because you're the only thing
I'll ever miss yeah you're the only thing that I'll ever miss


After he finished the second chorus chorus Joshua goes into the bridge which is played differently than the rest if the song he now asks the person not to leave showing that same emotion here of bit than he shows more the emotion can easily be heard and seen as the song goes on Joshua still doesn't show too much power in his voice which would probably lead some to believe he wasn't a strong singer maybe he wasn't but the emotion he showed in this performance was amazing and he wasn't the greatest singer in this competition but he also showed he was far from being the worst Joshua had a voice that was easy to listen to however he could use a little more control over it Joshua continues to sing the bridge which is very short before he makes his way back into the chorus which is now sing full if emotion he shows a different side to his voice which wasn't strength but it sounded better than before Joshua looked into the camera again as he continued singing the final chorus after finishing he began lightly strumming the guitar once again just like in the intro after finishing he takes a deep breathe and looks at the crowd then gives a small smile he then looks over to the judges table as he waits to hear what they have to say about the performance and song

Don't walk out tonight don't walk out tonight
It doesn't have to be this way
Don't walk out tonight don't walk out tonight
Baby could you please just stay

If yesterday's gone and today is fading will you be out
Of my life by tomorrow baby cause I don't wanna see
You go don't want you to walk away so if I sing this
Song will you maybe stay just for tonight because I can't take
It to see leave behind something just like this can I have one
More hug or one last kiss because you're the only thing
I'll ever miss yeah you're the only thing that I'll ever miss

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Evangeline stands up and cheers for Joshua, clapping with her hands above her head. "Oh no! Please don't make me choose which Grimmie I like more!" she says jokingly, giggling as she sits back down. "Joshua, that was absolutely fantastic. I would have thought that you were a professional... One of the most important parts of indie music is emotion, and you have that nailed!" She claps again for him. "So great! I can't wait to see you again!"

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"Man you've definitely got talent and you worked that guitar very very well! Nice. This was a all round great performance but in terms of the lyrical content of the song, I felt it was more pop then indie, it really reminded me of a full on pop record but the thing about indie music like Evangeline said earlier was that indie music is very bendable so you kind of get a way with it. Talented guy you are Joshua. You must have learned alot from your sister. Nice emotion and instrumental work"

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Joshua laughs when Evangeline jokes about which choosing which Grimmie she likes more "Well I won't force you but I'm just going to say it should be me" he laughs a little before listening to her comments about the performance and smiling "Thank you"

He then looks over at Will and listens to his comments he nods a little as Will mentions the lyrics sounding more like pop lyrics he nods a little when Joshua wrote this song it was leaning a bit towards the pop side however he decided to change it around a little he then smiles again as Will comments him and brings up Ashley "Thank you and yeah she's helped me out a little" he says smiling
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Alright coming up next to the stage Rapper Young Hood, We don’t know what to expect from the Detroit native putting his spin on Indie, will he made D-town proud or will he go back to streets?

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I’m Young-Hood, and I’m from D-town. I never really got to Indie music so I didn’t know what to expect when I got the challenge so I have to listen to a lot, lot of indie sounds but I still wanted to keep it me. Then I hear the indie beat and feelings started to come back that I didn’t feel before. So I just wrote what I felt like. I’m not going to say that I’m going to knocked this out of the park but I just want to show that I’m versatile with my style, and I’m going to be here for a while. Lot of people think that “Oh, you are a rapper so you can’t do Indie but if that was the case Kidd Amaze couldn’t do a song with Carmen Grant, and Liyah song bubbles wouldn’t be that good. So I deserve to be here and I’m not leaving on the first day.”



As the beat came in YoungHood stood in the middle of the stage swaying side to side and his voice was come what in a trance

Yea,
Young-hood
Indie
Rap
Just let the music ride,
I’m going to get in my zone
Zone
I’m getting in my zone

[Waits until the beat comes in]

He stop swaying and start to point the the crowd as he almost talks to them about how the play will paly out

So what we going to do
Is give indie some hip-hop flare
So what I ask all of you
Is listening to the rhymes if you dare
Now, I going to spin this tale
Bout a boy that refuse to fail
How he got out of any rumble
And make it through the iron jungle
And make it to the stage
Stage
Stage
Stage

As the beat kicks in he starts to move around more until the beat drop and he starts jumping up with his free hand up. As the song slows down he also slows down and cover his faces as he say the final word damn.

(Speed Rapping)
See long long long time of 19 years
Women got knocked up and had to face tears
Cause her man left, stage left leaving the women with two,
Mouths to feed, so she rolled her sleeves,
Lifted the struggles of a single mother, all alone,
Small home, size for a gnome
But she made do, when the cut the power you saw a different hue
But that was his cue to do better not to get mix with crews
Sat in his living room with only room in the house
He had to move because it was more of a cat and mouse
Tom and Jerry, and the music bury all the problems,
But didn’t bring the answers to solve them
Locked away, was thought about the donor
Other half that created him,
He didn’t know if he should be sad,
Cause the hate just ate at him
Why the f… should he care
Bout how their relationship should fair
Now he’s up on stage and feels a chill up in the air…
Damn,
(End of Speed rapping)

At This point he looks around and sits at the edge of the stage as the song slowly plays out

But he stayed on stage,
Stage
But what was he going to do now
With his father out in the crowd
Was he going to let the problem come up?
Was he going to be the runner up?
Could he ever come up?
He wasn’t going to let the problems drown him
Cause all he wanted was the stage
Stage
Stage.

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life round here james blake chance the rapper

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Evangeline smiles at YoungHood and claps, letting out little "woo's!" as she does. "You know, what even is indie?" she asks seriously, looking at her fellow judges with a shrug. "Because that was indie to me. That was indie rap and... I... loved it!" She claps for him again, letting out more cheers. "I think the most important part of the indie genre is being able to tell a story with your words and showing your emotion, and you did just that. So wonderful job." She nods.
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Will looked pleased

"Really good. I really enjoyed this. You definitely had the lower edge coming into this as a rapper but you stood among everyone and definitely stood out tonight. Yeah man!! Awesome work!!"
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Zack look on as YoungHood nods and everyone seem to be impress with his song. "Wow, Give it up for YoungHood one more time, that was impressive. Next we Have Kim-Lee Wong, he is from the LA area and not much is known about him but he tell his story in this piece right here so let us get to know more about Kim-Lee.

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I’m Kim-Lee Wong and I’m from Los Angeles area. My parents were very strict and wanted me to learn classical music. I grew up around R&B and mostly loved blues but I was train to do classical music. This challenge right here is different, but I think I could handle Indie as I listen to some blues players that had indie bluegrass root in them. I don’t have a lot of experience but I been playing instruments since I was able to stand on my feet. So here is to seeing me a lot more in the future 祝我好運吧 (<--- Translates to Wish me Luck,)


Here to preform his own song Heart Tough Kim-Lee Wong

Kim-Lee comes in with someone else playing the guitar. He is tapping his foot and gives off this slow depressing song feel and his voice matches that, through out the song his voice flows and gives off a bleak dreary emotion but can give give off powerful vocals going into the chorus without any strain.


Heart Tough

Knowing that is, the end
I don’t where, to fit in
Why did you, how could you?
Questions always seem to come
What to do, what to do?
Wondering what I am to you.
Maybe I just didn’t see,
We weren’t ever meant be
How did this turn into so, wrong
Looking on how far we came, along.
[Hook]
I can’t find all the pieces, to my broken heart
Wish that I could go back to the start, the start
And warn myself that I’m not strong enough
Now I’m praying to get my heart tough
Heart tough
I’m praying praying to get my heart tough
[verse 2]
I can’t see an end to the pain
Burdens is all I have left, to gain
I can’t believe, won’t be deceive
You weren’t what you claim to be
My love is blind, now in a bind
My soul trapped and intertwined
Depression seems to have a hold, on me
Every moment is a struggle to breathe
[Hook]
I can’t find all the pieces, to my broken heart
Wish that I could go back to the start, the start
And warn myself that I’m not strong enough
Now I’m praying, to get, my heart tough
Heart tough
I’m praying praying to get my heart tough
[Outro]
Praying, Praying
To get my heart tough

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"Oh my goodness!" Evangeline says, her hand on her heart, blown away. "I had no idea there would be so much talent on this show!" She laughs, clapping. "Kim-Lee, I love you! This was so fantastic! I know I've said it before, but... the emotion! My goodness! You got it, hunny! You got it! I want to see more of this! Great job!"
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Will claps

Nice to meet you Kim. Gonna have to agree but disagree with Evangeline here. You definitely got a spark. Don't know if you've really got that it factor but maybe its just this week. I think the song was OK and you have a great voice, but compared to what we've seen tonight I don't know how I feel about this performance. You're an instrumentalist I can tell and this was a pretty good showing but since we've seen such great talent tonight nothing really stood out here which is nothing wrong right now, aside from emotion. Next week , I'd love to see you show some more! Nice job all in all !

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Evangeline nods and smiles with Will's summation of Kim-Lee's performance. "That's fair, that's fair," she says. "You know, I think that music like yours, Kim-Lee, is going to be seen in several different ways - that's just the way the acoustic sound is. And some people and going to love it, and some people aren't going to be so sure by it. Both opinions are completely valid and fair. It's a difficult genre to go with, and I think that - no matter how good I think that you are - you're going to have some difficulty if you stay with just the acoustic sound. I hope that you'll get to branch out more in the weeks to come."
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Zack came on stage and nodded, "Alright how is everyone feeling, lot of good stuff so far right. Alright up Next to the stage She is hot because she is from the desert, Marina!


Hi! My name is Marina Balan and I sincerely want to be your Star factory star! Last week I was so nervous about the challenge before we even knew it and was even more nervous when I found out about it. Indie? That was something I really felt was not up my ally because of course this is a competition where we have to show our versatility as artists, so it was fulfilling getting to learn about another type of music and applying it to my performance. When I think Indie, I think of it being not your typical mainstream song, I think it has to tell a discriptive story and I really applied that to my song this week. I hope you call enjoy it and remember vote Marina Balan! I'll be singing an original number ,Long Drive! Its deep and emotional and tells a story ...



Marina walks out onto the stage. Her stage is dark and a spotlight is put on her. On the big screen behind her, gray dark clouds arise better getting across the emotion of the song. The record is more indie rock driven. She closes her eyes, and looks up as she begins go sing. Through out the performance Marina keeps her emotions to the tee, bringing her arms our and making a fist as she sings about a long drive home.

In her mind, Marina is thinking how nervous she is but she knows this is the chance of a life time to be on front of thousands and with millions watching at home. She couldn't crumble. As she's singing she often looks into the crowd but takes a moment to look at the judges in Evangeline, Will Rocca and Jennifer Armstrong. As she's singing, smoke also feels the stage better giving off an emotional dreary feeling as she continues to sing this original track she wrote just for the challenge.


When the song comes to a very end, the crowd begins to clap and Marina closes her eyes again, and when the performances completely finishes, she opens her eyes and the lights comes back on "thank you!" She says as she smiles looking nervous and hoping the judges enjoyed her performance.


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All I want to do is go back home
But it's so hard to leave when all I want to see is you
So don't get me started about how it ends
You could forget about it like it was all pretend
But don't you see, it's to hard for me
But you laugh at my misery

But I'm sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please don't say that we're through
On this long drive home, all i'm thinking about is you
But I'm sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please don't say that we're through
On this long drive home, all i'm thinking about is you


I'll pack my bags and leave you for good
I'll be leaving my old neighborhood
I hope that you'll be happy
Although I cant help but be angry
If only you could see, how hard it is for me


But im sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please dont say that were through
On this long drive home, I only think about you
I know it can be hard not knowing then
But now i'm on this long drive home, again
But im sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please dont say that were through
On this long drive home, I only think about you
I know it can be hard not knowing then
But now i'm on this long drive home, again


But im sitting here all alone
Dredding the long drive home
It's to far to go
But where we're heading, we'll never know


But im sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please dont say that were through
On this long drive home, I only think about you
I know it can be hard not knowing then
But now i'm on this long drive home, again
But im sitting on this long drive home
In the darkness I feel all alone
Please dont say that were through
On this long drive home, I only think about you
I know it can be hard not knowing then
But now i'm on this long drive home, again


On this long drive home
We hit the end of the road.....

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Will clapped after Marina was finished performing

"I must say this, you've definitely got the look that people are looking for and sometimes that may over shadow the talent. I'll be honest, I thought you were a fully fledged one dimensional type of act but to be very honest you really shocked me here. You've got good writing skills and the overall attitude you have off was haunting and dark as the lyrics suggest. Very surprising coming from you Marina, and will likes being surprised! Welcome to the competition!
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Evangeline claps loudly, putting her hands above her head again as she does, shaking her head is disbelief. She waits for the audience's cheers to die down before she speaks. "Marina! I don't believe you!" she says, with a laugh. "I don't believe that you were nervous about this challenge, because you blew it away!" The crowd cheers when she finishes her comment. "I'm glad you chose indie rock verses indie folk or any other of the sub-genres, because I think that worked really well, not only with who you are as you've shown us in your personality, but also your style. And I hope you continue to bring this enthusiasm and willingness to show your versatility in the weeks to come, because even though you may not have thought that the indie genre was up your alley, you've shown that it's definitely something you have the ability to do. So wonderful job, hunny."
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