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tension101 wrote:Gettig back on topic, some other lyrics I wrote...
Taken Away:
How was I supposed to know that the lies would carry on
forever?
And how was I supposed to take myself away?
We were just a pair of naïve lovers
Trying to live for the moment
In time
But how was I supposed to know that you would
Take Away
Crush it up and make it
Fall Away
From everything we helped create
I went insane from everything you
Took away
I led myself to kill you
And I
Showed up at your funeral with flowers in my hands
Would it be
Rude to say that I
Kept the knife I used to break your soul?
Your grave has too many good comments
To Say
And my pain has become my signature
Forever
I spit these words of the tip of my tongue
I hope you see that I hate what you’ve become
And I hope you know that I can’t get you back
And I hope you see that I don’t even care
I Hate Your Life!
You Died In My Mind!
I went insane from everything you
Took away
I led myself to kill you
And I
Showed up at your funeral with flowers in my hands
Would it be
Rude to say that I
Kept the knife I used to break your soul?
Now that's what I call some good lyrics Good job Miles :) Edited by user 05 December 2009 13:34:46(UTC)
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Now that's what I call some good lyrics Good job Miles :) Thanks, there's asort of concept behind all my songs. :) |
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Now that's what I call some good lyrics Good job Miles :) Thanks, there's asort of concept behind all my songs. :) I would like to see Troy's lyrics since he's talking so much sh*t
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Now that's what I call some good lyrics Good job Miles :) Thanks, there's asort of concept behind all my songs. :) I would like to see Troy's lyrics since he's talking so much sh*t Well, we'll just have to see. I personally don't think I'm too good of a lyrisist, but I can make due. |
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old.gregg wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:forkboy wrote:old.gregg wrote:This forum sucks at lyrics...
Lewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis Are you trying to get laid or something? Because I'm sure if you keep sucking up you may get lucky Ahah, wait until he posts some of his songs, you'll see what I mean. Hah, he won't beat my one about the Millipede. Well - you've definitely beat him on originality :P And the best thing is, its actually part of a series... And because nobody asked, here's the others: Thousand-Foot Millipede I(13/05/06) Your segments one hundredfold
Each one holding a two pair of limbs
Bar the head end housing
Tömösváry organs round antennae
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
March in waves by crawling claws
Odourous myriapod
Specific diplopod
Thousand-foot, thousand-footThousand-Foot Millipede III(29/10/06) Hail thousand-foot in hushed tapping tones
Hail thousand-foot in overlapped movements
Hail thousand-foot in scuttling ever on
Thousand-foot
I treat the well
Thousand-foot
My mighty odorous ancient one
Thousand-foot!Oh, and get this, a fuckin' spinoff! Hundred-Foot Centipede I(Paul Ferguson 23/10/06) Though lesser by design
Thou art every bit as mighty
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
Segmented antennae
Venom hooks ahoy
In unlit crevices by the dozen
Not as lumbering yet as humbling
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
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Gildermershina wrote:
And the best thing is, its actually part of a series...
And because nobody asked, here's the others:
Thousand-Foot Millipede I
(13/05/06)
Your segments one hundredfold
Each one holding a two pair of limbs
Bar the head end housing
Tömösváry organs round antennae
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
March in waves by crawling claws
Odourous myriapod
Specific diplopod
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
Thousand-Foot Millipede III
(29/10/06)
Hail thousand-foot in hushed tapping tones
Hail thousand-foot in overlapped movements
Hail thousand-foot in scuttling ever on
Thousand-foot
I treat the well
Thousand-foot
My mighty odorous ancient one
Thousand-foot!
Oh, and get this, a fuckin' spinoff!
Hundred-Foot Centipede I
(Paul Ferguson 23/10/06)
Though lesser by design
Thou art every bit as mighty
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
Segmented antennae
Venom hooks ahoy
In unlit crevices by the dozen
Not as lumbering yet as humbling
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
I bow my head
Oh sinister crawling one
Fucking amazing. Masterpeices!! |
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Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:forkboy wrote:old.gregg wrote:This forum sucks at lyrics...
Lewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis Are you trying to get laid or something? Because I'm sure if you keep sucking up you may get lucky Ahah, wait until he posts some of his songs, you'll see what I mean. Hah, he won't beat my one about the Millipede. Well - you've definitely beat him on originality :P And the best thing is, its actually part of a series... And because nobody asked, here's the others: Thousand-Foot Millipede I(13/05/06) Your segments one hundredfold
Each one holding a two pair of limbs
Bar the head end housing
Tömösváry organs round antennae
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
March in waves by crawling claws
Odourous myriapod
Specific diplopod
Thousand-foot, thousand-footThousand-Foot Millipede III(29/10/06) Hail thousand-foot in hushed tapping tones
Hail thousand-foot in overlapped movements
Hail thousand-foot in scuttling ever on
Thousand-foot
I treat the well
Thousand-foot
My mighty odorous ancient one
Thousand-foot!Oh, and get this, a fuckin' spinoff! Hundred-Foot Centipede I(Paul Ferguson 23/10/06) Though lesser by design
Thou art every bit as mighty
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
Segmented antennae
Venom hooks ahoy
In unlit crevices by the dozen
Not as lumbering yet as humbling
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
I bow my head
Oh sinister crawling one Who wrote this shit. Its horrible.
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:forkboy wrote:old.gregg wrote:This forum sucks at lyrics...
Lewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis Are you trying to get laid or something? Because I'm sure if you keep sucking up you may get lucky Ahah, wait until he posts some of his songs, you'll see what I mean. Hah, he won't beat my one about the Millipede. Well - you've definitely beat him on originality :P And the best thing is, its actually part of a series... And because nobody asked, here's the others: Thousand-Foot Millipede I(13/05/06) Your segments one hundredfold
Each one holding a two pair of limbs
Bar the head end housing
Tömösváry organs round antennae
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
March in waves by crawling claws
Odourous myriapod
Specific diplopod
Thousand-foot, thousand-footThousand-Foot Millipede III(29/10/06) Hail thousand-foot in hushed tapping tones
Hail thousand-foot in overlapped movements
Hail thousand-foot in scuttling ever on
Thousand-foot
I treat the well
Thousand-foot
My mighty odorous ancient one
Thousand-foot!Oh, and get this, a fuckin' spinoff! Hundred-Foot Centipede I(Paul Ferguson 23/10/06) Though lesser by design
Thou art every bit as mighty
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
Segmented antennae
Venom hooks ahoy
In unlit crevices by the dozen
Not as lumbering yet as humbling
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
I bow my head
Oh sinister crawling one Who wrote this shit. Its horrible. But it's funny. Which makes it a masterpeice. :D |
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:Gildermershina wrote:old.gregg wrote:forkboy wrote:old.gregg wrote:This forum sucks at lyrics...
Lewiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis Are you trying to get laid or something? Because I'm sure if you keep sucking up you may get lucky Ahah, wait until he posts some of his songs, you'll see what I mean. Hah, he won't beat my one about the Millipede. Well - you've definitely beat him on originality :P And the best thing is, its actually part of a series... And because nobody asked, here's the others: Thousand-Foot Millipede I(13/05/06) Your segments one hundredfold
Each one holding a two pair of limbs
Bar the head end housing
Tömösváry organs round antennae
Thousand-foot, thousand-foot
March in waves by crawling claws
Odourous myriapod
Specific diplopod
Thousand-foot, thousand-footThousand-Foot Millipede III(29/10/06) Hail thousand-foot in hushed tapping tones
Hail thousand-foot in overlapped movements
Hail thousand-foot in scuttling ever on
Thousand-foot
I treat the well
Thousand-foot
My mighty odorous ancient one
Thousand-foot!Oh, and get this, a fuckin' spinoff! Hundred-Foot Centipede I(Paul Ferguson 23/10/06) Though lesser by design
Thou art every bit as mighty
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
Segmented antennae
Venom hooks ahoy
In unlit crevices by the dozen
Not as lumbering yet as humbling
As thy cousin
Hundred-foot
Hundred-foot
I bow my head
Oh sinister crawling one Who wrote this shit. Its horrible. But it's funny. Which makes it a masterpeice. :D It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part.
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you."
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". |
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". I think it would be a hit in the UK!
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". I think it would be a hit in the UK! lulz, prolly not. |
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". I think it would be a hit in the UK! lulz, prolly not. I mean look how smart and witted the chorus sounds "SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN" Now that's creative.
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". I think it would be a hit in the UK! lulz, prolly not. I mean look how smart and witted the chorus sounds "SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN" Now that's creative. You might as well write a song like: Lalala. Someone decided to violate my bowl of cereal lalala My monkey decided to go for a swim in the dead sea lalala Windows have hearts lalala LEELEEHAAHAAYEEYEEDAADAA!!! |
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:It is laughable but I don't know about the masterpiece part. Well, It's original. And so is this m2qUBHUQIASnsdq by nen1 ujq "k nkjdnjdKN KJNDWJkn jkn DSAKNM JN SLDMKQN I DQDWM NQWN LKNWQL SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN YEAH YEAH YEAH!!! I love you." You can't really get writers credit for something like that, but yeah, it's pretty original other than the three "YEAH"s and the "I Love You". I think it would be a hit in the UK! lulz, prolly not. I mean look how smart and witted the chorus sounds "SWMWQ LNMQ DALKM IKNQ3INRIKN" Now that's creative. What you did was just randomly hit keys. I wrote a series of stupid songs that contain scientific descriptions of millipedes, mixed with a slightly disturbing deification of the animal. I don't think they're the best thing ever, but I do think they're a step above random frustrated keypresses. It's funny to me because it's a pun about a millipede being a thousand-foot in length - the name millipede of course being Latin for thousand-foot. Also, amusing to hold as divine such a creature, a myriapod that feasts on decaying matter, as opposed to a great white stallion, or a majestic eagle. It's writing about small things really. Love is a big thing, easy to be too sentimental or vulnerable, or just sound like every other cheesy love song in the world. A song that's a creepy appraisal of a millipede, how can you go wrong with that? |
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Or you can be more creative by doing this song
"Mayahauwka"
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Li pe te Li pe te
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come tototototototototo
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come pupuupupupupu
Li pe te li pe te
Mayahauwka
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Or you can be more creative by doing this song
"Mayahauwka"
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Li pe te Li pe te
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come tototototototototo
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come pupuupupupupu
Li pe te li pe te
Mayahauwka Hmm... I think my song is better... |
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tension101 wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Or you can be more creative by doing this song
"Mayahauwka"
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Li pe te Li pe te
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come tototototototototo
Mayahauwka Mayahauwka
Come pupuupupupupu
Li pe te li pe te
Mayahauwka Hmm... I think my song is better... It is! Which then goes back to my point I'm trying to make in the first place ;)
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