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stephaniewazhere wrote:Aj wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Anyway, I consider my self a great lyricist/song-writer. Though I am better in Spanish, there are things that I can only write in English. And "Ant Pile" was one of them. Really? I would never have noticed. So if your so great, how about you post some lyrics on here? I mean, if your that great surely you could write some more ? Did you read my last post? and that's all you got? Cmon, show us some more lyrics, "mr. i'm so great at writing lyrics" lol |
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First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quite down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. |
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Mt. Epic wrote:I can speak 4 languages, Russian (where I'm from), English (which I speak in my current country), Spanish (learning it in school since 1st grade), and Hebrew (my family is Jewish but I'm not), yet I can speak them all rather fluently. Speak russian at home, english everywhere, I'm complemented by my teacher in spanish, and hebrew, well, I'm okay at it. And I'm still only 13, so language should never be a problem to learn. When did I say I don't speak English fluently? I speak English fluently but it doesn't mean that I speak it and write it well. I'm pretty sure you don't speak and write the languages you've learned well, especially since you only learn a certain amount of words per day, it would be very difficult especially since you are only 13. Not saying that it is impossible, it'll just be extremely difficult. And if you really do without any sarcasm whatsoever Congrats!
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:I can speak 4 languages, Russian (where I'm from), English (which I speak in my current country), Spanish (learning it in school since 1st grade), and Hebrew (my family is Jewish but I'm not), yet I can speak them all rather fluently. Speak russian at home, english everywhere, I'm complemented by my teacher in spanish, and hebrew, well, I'm okay at it. And I'm still only 13, so language should never be a problem to learn. When did I say I don't speak English fluently? I speak English fluently but it doesn't mean that I speak it and write it well. I'm pretty sure you don't speak and write the languages you've learned well, especially since you only learn a certain amount of words per day, it would be very difficult especially since you are only 13. Not saying that it is impossible, it'll just be extremely difficult. And if you really do without any sarcasm whatsoever Congrats! You said before you have difficulty speaking english earlier on in this thread. And I can write russian moderately well, english and spanish well cuz they are basically the same, and hebrew, not so much. Edited by user 06 December 2009 08:10:21(UTC)
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Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:I can speak 4 languages, Russian (where I'm from), English (which I speak in my current country), Spanish (learning it in school since 1st grade), and Hebrew (my family is Jewish but I'm not), yet I can speak them all rather fluently. Speak russian at home, english everywhere, I'm complemented by my teacher in spanish, and hebrew, well, I'm okay at it. And I'm still only 13, so language should never be a problem to learn. When did I say I don't speak English fluently? I speak English fluently but it doesn't mean that I speak it and write it well. I'm pretty sure you don't speak and write the languages you've learned well, especially since you only learn a certain amount of words per day, it would be very difficult especially since you are only 13. Not saying that it is impossible, it'll just be extremely difficult. And if you really do without any sarcasm whatsoever Congrats! You said before you have difficulty speaking english earlier on in this thread. And I can write russian moderately well, english and spanish well cuz they are basically the same, and hebrew, not so much. Different people are capable of different levels of linguistic learning. Gee I sound so intelligent. Oh, and yeah Steph I did read your last post. It basically said I'm great and I don't want anyone to copy my lyrics. Which is complete twaddle, because I doubt you've even written this 'Ant Pile' song. |
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TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it.
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Aj wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:I can speak 4 languages, Russian (where I'm from), English (which I speak in my current country), Spanish (learning it in school since 1st grade), and Hebrew (my family is Jewish but I'm not), yet I can speak them all rather fluently. Speak russian at home, english everywhere, I'm complemented by my teacher in spanish, and hebrew, well, I'm okay at it. And I'm still only 13, so language should never be a problem to learn. When did I say I don't speak English fluently? I speak English fluently but it doesn't mean that I speak it and write it well. I'm pretty sure you don't speak and write the languages you've learned well, especially since you only learn a certain amount of words per day, it would be very difficult especially since you are only 13. Not saying that it is impossible, it'll just be extremely difficult. And if you really do without any sarcasm whatsoever Congrats! You said before you have difficulty speaking english earlier on in this thread. And I can write russian moderately well, english and spanish well cuz they are basically the same, and hebrew, not so much. Different people are capable of different levels of linguistic learning. Gee I sound so intelligent. Oh, and yeah Steph I did read your last post. It basically said I'm great and I don't want anyone to copy my lyrics. Which is complete twaddle, because I doubt you've even written this 'Ant Pile' song. Remember this post.
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stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it. How do we even know you are even signed? You lied about being a girl and gay, what makes us think you were recording in a studio, let alone even writing the music? |
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Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it. How do we even know you are even signed? You lied about being a girl and gay, what makes us think you were recording in a studio, let alone even writing the music? I AM NOT Signed, I was turned down actually and when did I even say I was. I have pictures and video that I will be posting on my website. And why would a care that bunch of strangers believe me or not, this is something big a did and personally do not care if you believe me or not especially that I know It will be proven to you that you're wrong. Just like I did when I finally told these people I was a man. Edited by user 06 December 2009 08:36:22(UTC)
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it. How do we even know you are even signed? You lied about being a girl and gay, what makes us think you were recording in a studio, let alone even writing the music? I AM NOT Signed, I was turned down actually and when did I even say I was. I have pictures and video that I will be posting on my website. And why would a care that bunch of strangers believe me or not, this is something big a did and personally do not care if you believe me or not especially that I know It will be proven to you that you're wrong. Just like I did when I finally told these people I was a man. You said you have a producer, he'd be pretty dumb to be working without a label, which leads to the speculations that you DON'T have a producer |
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Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it. How do we even know you are even signed? You lied about being a girl and gay, what makes us think you were recording in a studio, let alone even writing the music? I AM NOT Signed, I was turned down actually and when did I even say I was. I have pictures and video that I will be posting on my website. And why would a care that bunch of strangers believe me or not, this is something big a did and personally do not care if you believe me or not especially that I know It will be proven to you that you're wrong. Just like I did when I finally told these people I was a man. You said you have a producer, he'd be pretty dumb to be working without a label, which leads to the speculations that you DON'T have a producer Why do you think I put "". He is not licensed as a producer but he know someone who is and has thought him how to produce. He doesn't work for anyone and has the equipment to make descent music. I have the right to call him my producer because if it wasn't for him my music wouldn't be made in the first place. I'm done with this, I really do not care if you believe me or not.
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stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:Mt. Epic wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:stephaniewazhere wrote:TheCDs wrote:
First off, you are from the US as far as I know so if someone does steal your work after posting in this forum you would easily be able to sue. Copyright protections start the moment the idea is put on paper and do not require governmental registration. But as for benefits to you, I would think any possibility for constructive criticism would be beneficial. I know, you made it perfectly clear above that you are a fantastic songwriter/lyricist (or at least you think so) but I am pretty sure those terrible people on American Idol think they are fantastic signers as well. I am sure if you asked for honest constructive criticism the core members of this community could give you something better than "total shit" or "utter rubbish" as a response.
That's not the reason. First of all, this forum's reception of me isn't so great. For people here to criticize my writing would not be considered constructive to me , I don't think many people on here are mature enough to look my art without thinking that I'm a Puerto Rican bilingual who has trouble with English and has lied about his sex because he's embarrassed of begin confused about his sexual orientation. People here focus so hard on making look bad that if I come out with something good, they'll quiet down and pretend like they didn't see what I posted Anyway, I am not allowed to post audio of my lyrics anyway as of yet. Lyrics I can though. Which I wont. And American Idol? I was going to try out bit I realized that American Idol is the best way to loose your real art. I would hate to be forced to sing something that is not my style, just to win a competition that eventually would make people think you are overrated. Th While I may not buy into the whole "ZOMG the forum is out to get me" mentality you have (I personally believe you bring this upon yourself by making very opinionated and sometimes poorly worded or thought out points and then get upset or offended when people try to debate or counter them) I can still respect your decision. The American Idol thing was not about the show so much as your claims to songwriting greatness. It is easy for you to think you are good at something, like the terrible singers in American Idol who believe they are the greatest ever, but when you show the product to someone that may be further form the truth. I know your next response will be to say "well I showed it to so and so and they liked it and said I was a good songwriter" but that is not something that I can believe. Since you have already admitted to lying before it isn't a stretch to assume you will do it again, and quite frankly your credibility (what little you may have had at least) has suffered because of it. Wrong wrong wrong! The only people who have heard my music is my "producer" and "sound mixer" (who happen to be a friend in Puerto Rico who has rough experience in producing and mixing music). The only reason it has come to me doing it with them, is because I gave up on "Phantom City". And no one else has other than them have heard it. And when I soon post the music on the website I'll soon will be launching (which will contain my music in it. I would not care if you like my music or not. I'm not trying to impress anyone. My goal in the "music business" was to figure myself musically and hope to see that people can relate to it and without no lie make some money so I can better with my sound and work with people who have a lot experience who can help me reflect what I feel. Not what some random songwriter feels. I gave up on the whole thing of making it big because I realized you have to be fake in order to make it big. So after I'm done with my degree, I'll go into sound engineering. I personally do not want to post my music on here, because I feel like it deserves a more respectable debut. Which I'm working on. Now it's totally my business not your as to why I can't post them yet, so don't ask me why. Anyway, the whole point that I was trying to make before it lead to this, is that you have the right to nio like something but you do not have the right to say someone's music sucks when you haven't even heard it. How do we even know you are even signed? You lied about being a girl and gay, what makes us think you were recording in a studio, let alone even writing the music? I AM NOT Signed, I was turned down actually and when did I even say I was. I have pictures and video that I will be posting on my website. And why would a care that bunch of strangers believe me or not, this is something big a did and personally do not care if you believe me or not especially that I know It will be proven to you that you're wrong. Just like I did when I finally told these people I was a man. You said you have a producer, he'd be pretty dumb to be working without a label, which leads to the speculations that you DON'T have a producer Why do you think I put "". He is not licensed as a producer but he know someone who is and has thought him how to produce. He doesn't work for anyone and has the equipment to make descent music. I have the right to call him my producer because if it wasn't for him my music wouldn't be made in the first place. I'm done with this, I really do not care if you believe me or not. whatever you say is a lie lol |
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The Nimrods wrote:Here's the lyrics to a new song I wrote called Sub Zero it's about cold stuff lol.Just tell me if you like and if you don't like what I can improve on.
Blistering cold hypothermia grips me into the ice, i cannot escape. frozen internally, blue is my skin. i wish for heat, the cold always wins my skin begins to crack away from my being. i slowly collapse,death overtakes me. in winter i've fallen, alone in the snow. i've died in this weather temperature......sub zero.
As I fall to the ground I wonder what happened I can't escape this frozen hell Where have I been I won't survive this freezing ice I give out one last breath I'd never see the sun a gain I die a frozen death
My journey was long Impossible it was The cold struck my bones It ran through my blood My heart had slowed down I needed some rest It was the last time I would
Mourning in the day Feasting in the night A hero has fallen Frostbitten, in plight Reminds me of a poem I read in my English Literature class. Is it something you wrote for someone or something you wrote just to write it?
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Here's one Steph might like:
The Last Dance
You told me what you wanna hear But how did we get here? We were friends from the start But now we're shadowed and dark. And no one can hide from shock.
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever.
You left me in the dark So now I'm taking back my heart It worked once, but died twice, this can't keep happening here. So now I'm taking back my heart.
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever.
This is the last dance, this is your last chance This was the last chance, this is your last dance
I gave you my heart But you abused it for too long.
I tried my best and I gave you my all And now it's gone and I'm starting to fall
Everything I've earned is coming to a draw.
This is the last dance, this was your last chance This was the last dance, it was your last chance
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever
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tension101 wrote:Here's one Steph might like:
The Last Dance
You told me what you wanna hear But how did we get here? We were friends from the start But now we're shadowed and dark. And no one can hide from shock.
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever.
You left me in the dark So now I'm taking back my heart It worked once, but died twice, this can't keep happening here. So now I'm taking back my heart.
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever.
This is the last dance, this is your last chance This was the last chance, this is your last dance
I gave you my heart But you abused it for too long.
I tried my best and I gave you my all And now it's gone and I'm starting to fall
Everything I've earned is coming to a draw.
This is the last dance, this was your last chance This was the last dance, it was your last chance
Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Dreams go, they fade away Nothing stays, nothing stays Forever Forever
Nothing Stays. That's alright actually, shame about the name of it :L It's a tad cliché but hey unless your looking into being serious about your music that's fine. Try writing about subjects like Gildermershina does. Actually, best you don't. |
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tension101 wrote:Here's one Steph might like:
The Last Dance
So now I'm taking back my heart It worked once, but died twice,
That part is genius.
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Try writing about things you feel, if its love it is love, if it is having a good night out dancing then it is dancing. Never be fake especially if you feel like you need to be heard. Love is a serious topic, just how killing, rape and all the other is. Love in fact is more serious in my opinion.
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stephaniewazhere wrote:tension101 wrote:Here's one Steph might like:
The Last Dance
So now I'm taking back my heart It worked once, but died twice,
That part is genius. Yeah, I know. :DD |
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I made some new lyrics, I think there good PLEASE state your opinion.
No name yet: I come from,a country built on hypocrisy our rulers, those fascists call it "the land of the free" depleting,economies other countries in poverty destroying, the lives of several other human beings
In america there are no freedoms in america the nazis are our leaders in america opression rules in america country full of fools
The children, are poisoned with lies from facilities in schools we, are teaching leaders of anti-democracy taking the liberties given to them on platters with connections but the dreams of the poor are shattered
In america the blind go to ivy league in america tongues are bound of those in need in america laws are broken by the righteous in america laws are made only to spite us
Break me down but I'll never obey you the rich when convicted simply pay you a country with citizens who hate it the ones who don't are rich people who made it
in america i never wanted this in america soldiers in iraq are missed in america killing people for no reason in america the poor constantly pleadin'
now so you can understand the sound, it's screamed, but not like those screamo guys, more like chuck schuldiner in the later death era, to be exact i was going for his sound on the the "the flesh and the power it holds" of of "the sound of perseverance" the verses are fast and the chorus is slow the "break me down" part is also slow. yeah. i think it's pretty good i figured calling it in america but that's too cliche so im taking suggestions. |
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