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#81 Posted : 24 July 2011 01:18:26(UTC)
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#82 Posted : 24 July 2011 02:26:23(UTC)
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The Post

MattY is sat in the kitchen with a half empty bottle of vodka in his hand, the lid is somewhere on the floor; lost in the piles of dirt and broken things that have become like a carpet to MattY over the past couple of weeks. He has been sat here all night; with a bottle in his hand.

He hears a knock on the door and then he can hear something being pushed through the letter box. It drops to the floor and makes a sound as if something slightly metallic has just hit the floor. MattY remains seated until his curiosity gets too much for him. He stands up and then falls back down onto the floor. He grabs onto the radiator which he has been sat next to all night and uses it as a support to help him get up. A minute later he is stood upright, head spinning. With one hand on the wall for support, MattY slowly walks towards the door.

After stumbling around he finally reaches the doorway. As he bends down to pick up the small letter, he slips down and smacks his head on the floor. “FOR FUCK’S SAKE!!” He shouts. MattY just lies on the floor for a few moments, before rolling over onto his back and sitting up. Then he feels around for the letter and grabs it; he slowly peels open the back, unsure of what he was to find. Once the back was open, MattY put his hand in and removed a small bracelet and a letter. MattY knew at once that the bracelet was Cherise’s. He unfolded the letter and read it aloud to himself. It was easier for him to process it if he read it out.

“we got cherise. you do the things on list and get cherise back.

done by monday – or else”


The words were in big messy writing, on an old piece of messy paper. But MattY knew exactly who it was, he knew before. Kyle. The bracelet was just proof that they had Cherise. MattY now looked down at the list and let out a gasp. “This is ridiculous?! They really want me to do this?! But I could go to jail for that! And… I’ve worked so hard for this! This is just…” MattY can’t finish the sentence; he feels a warm tear of frustration roll down his face. He knows that he has to do it. He can’t not do it. He needs Cherise back; safe.
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#83 Posted : 24 July 2011 02:44:42(UTC)
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Ooc: If Cherise lives, and stays with MattY after this, I reckon Cassie might explode lol
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#84 Posted : 24 July 2011 02:46:01(UTC)
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Ooc: If Cherise lives, and stays with MattY after this, I reckon Cassie might explode lol


OOC: hahahah :') yeah - well we are still working on it xD we don't quite know what is gonna happen yet :')
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#85 Posted : 24 July 2011 02:59:56(UTC)
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Ooc: If Cherise lives, and stays with MattY after this, I reckon Cassie might explode lol



OOC: Lol thats tempting to do just to see Cassie go boom lol
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#86 Posted : 24 July 2011 06:05:19(UTC)
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Night Falls

Cherise lay there in pain as the door opened and she heard footsteps get closer, she could feel and smell the breath as they spoke "Ok time to eat if you promise not to scream" the gruff voice said, Cherise nodded as the person removed the gag from her mouth. "Help me" She cried "Baby somethings not right", "Just shut up and eat and have drink or I just put the gag back on" the voice said with attitude. "I dont know why the fuck I'm here but please I'm not playing somethings not right" Cherise screamed as the man slapped her face "Listen hun, you ain't leaving here til we get what we want so shut the fuck up and play nice, eat or don't make your mind up I got shit to do" the man snapped angrilly.

Cherise cried as she had a sip of water, my baby she thought what am I going to do somethings not right please someone help me she thought as the man grabbed the water "Nuff now, food?" the man questionned her "Not hungry" Cherise replied "Fine your choice" the man said as he placed her gag back over her mouth and turned to leave "Don't worry all being well you be gone soon" he laughed as he said the words that sent chills down Cherise's spine.

As the door slammed shut Cherise curled back up on the floor her eyes were sore from crying, the pain in her stomach was getting worse she needed help and needed it now...
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#87 Posted : 25 July 2011 05:20:58(UTC)
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Task Number One

MattY stood at the gate with his hood up, a cigarette hanging from his lips. He had been stood there for the best part of an hour, debating whether or not he should do it. It was going to hurt him a lot; he had seen this building go from a plot of land to his record company’s beautiful recording studios. MattY stood there for a couple more moments before he opened the gates and walked in, for what would be the last time…

MattY pulls his hood down as he reaches the front door; he pulls the cigarette from his mouth and exhales. Then he throws the cigarette into a bin, situated by the front door. He still liked to keep the place clean and tidy; even though… No, best not to think about it, he told himself. He placed the key into the door and opened it. The lobby was spotless; beautifully looked after, everything MattY had strived to achieve with this studio. He walked through the lobby and to the back of the building; he took his time so as to look through the building for one last time and marvel at it in its final hour.

After a couple of minutes spent wondering through the building, he came to the door. On it was a plaque which said “Security”. He opened the door and went in to a room with several computer screens, all with images of parts of the studio. MattY turned each one off and removed the tapes, putting them into a bag which he slung over his back. MattY closed the door as he left, feeling his eyes slightly watering. He wiped his eye with the back of his hand and continued towards the front doors again.

An hour later, MattY was pulling through the seventh barrel of oil into its place. He had put one in each studio and then one in the lobby. He could feel the hatred pouring from him; Kyle had done this to him. But it was all his own fault, if he hadn’t been addicted to his small time drugs, he would never have even got into this. There was nothing he could do now though, nothing. In each of the barrels, MattY had placed a rope which would lead into it. He lit the end and ran.

MattY reached the second one, lit it and then BANG!!! He heard an explosion. Immediately, he felt the heat rushing through the building. He had to run again, he needed to get all of these done before the whole building was on fire and there was no escape. He got around to all of the barrels within five minutes, tears streaming down his face. He didn’t want to do this, but he loved Cherise, and his baby, with his whole heart. And if anything has happened to them, he will never forgive himself.

MattY lit the final barrel and ran through the door; he reached the gate and turned around for one final glance at his beloved recording studios. And then the final barrel exploded, and all that could be seen of Red Hot Recordings, was red hot fire. The irony of the name and its final state could not escape MattY, and although he loved the building, he did find its final state quite amusing. He suddenly realised what he was thinking, was he sick in the head?! This was weeks of work, building this studio had been the pride and joy of his life; he had been so happy to see it being built, and now he laughs at its destruction. He shook his head and closed the gate behind him, drifting off into the darkness…
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#88 Posted : 25 July 2011 07:51:33(UTC)
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Tasks Two and Three

MattY got home after his announcement and slammed the door. He could feel his face burning up, and the warm tears starting to leak from his eyes. He leant against the door and slowly slid down it, resting his elbows on his knees and his head in his hands. It was too much for him; he had just given up the one thing that he could ever say he had done well - his record label.

MattY sat there for the best part of an hour just crying and thinking about what he had done, and how Cherise had not been anything to do with this and she had been dragged in. If anything had happened to her, MattY was clueless as to what he would do. Not only her, but she was carrying their baby! MattY would never be able to forgive himself if something happened to his little baby girl, he would never be able to forgive Kyle....

Now, MattY was also unsigned, so his music career is also at a stand still, not that music is important right now; Cherise and his baby girl are all that matters... His little Angel.
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#89 Posted : 25 July 2011 22:14:45(UTC)
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The Morning After

MattY woke the next morning at about eleven o'clock; last night had ben the best sleep he had had for a long time, but that was probably becasue he was dosed up on sleeping tablets. He sat up and saw that it was raining outside; for some reason he felt that today was going to be a good day. He climbed out of bed and pulled some clothes on, before going down stairs to go and make himself a cup of coffee to wake him up.

He sat in the remains of the kitchen for probably half an hour before going to see if he had any mail. He walked slowly down the corridor and reached the door. He bent down and picked up the small pile of letters. The first one was a letter from Boots Opticians telling him he has an eye test due soon, the next was his electricity bill, and underneath a newspaper was one final letter. The envelope had not been written on; this caused MattY's mouth to suddenly go dry. He had completley forgotten about what he had done this weekend, this could very well be from Kyle.

He opened the letter and unfolded the piece of paper. On it was written:

"Gud work. U hav dun the job proper. U get ur bitch bck 2day."

So MattY now had to meet Kyle at 5pm in some dark closed off alleyway to get back his beloved Cherise. Hopefully she would still be alright! MattY slowly walked back to the kitchen and sat down; today was going to be a long day.
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#90 Posted : 26 July 2011 05:31:22(UTC)
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The Collection

MattY arrived at the meeting place 10 minutes before 5 o'clock. He was anxious to get Cherise back. Hopefully she would be alright; he just wanted to see her face again. He missed her so much. He missed being able to hold her, even if he didn't do it; he missed knowing that she was alright, even if he never asked; and most of all he missed her company, even if he spent less and less time with her.

5 O'clock came around and three hooded figures came around the corner. They walked over to MattY and he could see that one of them was carrying a slumped figute over his shoulder, "Here she is, make an announcement in the next couple of days saying that I have taken over your record label." Kyle breathed to MattY. He signalled for the man holding Cherise to hand her over; he did so and MattY took a hold of her, pulling her close to him and embracing her limp body for the first time in days. Kyle laughed and the three of them walked back off into the maze of alleyways. MattY slipped his hand into his pocket and pulled out Cherise's bracelet that had been sent to him, then sliding over her hand onto her wrist.

20 minutes later, MattY had got to the hospital, "HELP!! SHE NEEDS HELP!!" He shouts as he rushes through the front doors...

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#91 Posted : 26 July 2011 06:43:13(UTC)
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A Friend In Need..

As Mykaylah rushed to the hospital after hearing about Cherise all sorts of thought were running through her head. She knew deep down MattY had caused this somehow but why and how? Why did he lie? He must of surely she cant of been at spa as he said he was there! Why all of sudden give up his label and quit his contract? nothing made any sense but one thing on Mykaylahs mind was finding out the truth and if MattY was involved he would pay.

As She arrived at the hospital she barged through the press that was waiting outside and headed straight over to the receptionist, "Cherise Darwin, where is she?" Mykaylah said forcefully "I'm sorry family only" the receptionist said sternly. "Ok love hard way or easy way I'm her best bitch now you either tell me where she is or I gonna scream this place down alright" Mykaylah said with her forceful attitude "Ok calm down or I will call security I can see you're upset but this isn't helping anyone let alone your friend", "Cherise, her name is Cherise" Mykaylah quickly fired back. "Ok listen I can see you're distressed but if you take a seat I'll get someone to you as soon as" the receptionist lied and Mykaylah knew it but decided if the bitch wanted to play she'd play along and find Cherise herself. Mykaylah backed away and went and sat down watching and observing, she finally got up and made her way towards the toilets she knew the receptionist was watching, she put her hand on her phone and pressed call, the front desk rang and this was her chance. Mykaylah went down the side ward looking everywhere eventually she saw MattY.

"What you done, What you done to her?" Mykaylah screamed as she lunged towards MattY startling him "Swear down I'm gonna rip ya little head of" she continued as she slapped him, to her suprise MattY didn't respond he just let her hit him and shout at him "This your fault I knew you no good I always defended you what have you done" Mykaylah rampaged at him but still no response he just looked empty, vacant tears strolling down his face "Where is she I wanna see her" Mykaylah questionned as she saw people watcing and security heading towards her "cmon boy tell me" Mykaylah demanded, MattY looked at her and quietly replied "She's in theatre, I Didn't, It wasn't" as he broke down....
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#92 Posted : 26 July 2011 17:06:06(UTC)
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An Angel Taken Away..

Cherise hears a voice in the distance, she can't make out who it is or what it is saying, she slowly opens her eyes, bright lights make her close them again as she hears the voice again it becomes more clearer she again opens her eyes and blinks a few times, she can feel someones hand in her's as the voice becomes clear it was MattY's "Cherise can you hear me, please Cherise. Nurse, nurse" she could finally make out as she looked towards MattY and saw him sat there, eyes red and tears in his eyes as a nurse came through the door behind him.

"Cherise your in hospital, don't try to move just relax" the friendly voice of the nurse said as she checked a machine next to her and a drip that Cherise noticed running to her arm, Cherise tried to speak but just a mumble came out "Here love try some water" the nurse said as passed her a cup with a straw and Cherise took a sip.

MattY got up out of his chair and turned away, Cherise could tell he was crying "Baby" Cherise said through a croaked voice. The nurse looked down as MattY turned round, Cherise was right his eyes were flowing tears he moved towards her and sat next to her and put his hand in her "I'm sorry" he said through a choked voice "What, no please tell me no" Cherise spoke softly as she looked to the nurse for answers, "I'm so sorry hun, your baby died we had to operate you'd lost a lot of blood, there was nothing we could do" The nurse said sympathetically as MattY burst into tears, Cherise eyes filled up as she let out a scream, a scream that will haunt MattY for the rest of his life ".
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#93 Posted : 26 July 2011 19:51:53(UTC)
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#95 Posted : 26 July 2011 19:54:42(UTC)
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#96 Posted : 26 July 2011 20:41:19(UTC)
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Cherise lies there in the hospital bed sleeping, the nurse comes in checks her stats and notes on the chart at the end of her bed and leaves.

mumbling in her sleep she's very unsettled suddenly her eyes wide open cherise lets out a scream, her foreheads dripping in sweat she goes to reach for her nurse buzzer when she feels a hand she looks across to see MattY sitting next to her
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#97 Posted : 26 July 2011 20:42:40(UTC)
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MattY grips her hand and rubs it with his thumb, "Calm down baby, i'm here..." he says, his voice cracking. It is obvious that he has been crying.
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Cherise looks down at Matty's hand holding her's, I'm safe she thinks as she notices her bracelet back on her wrist "MattY, I'm so sorry" she says as tears roll down her eyes "our daughter I can't I'm " She says as she breaks down
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#99 Posted : 26 July 2011 20:48:10(UTC)
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MattY nods, "I know, it's not your fault baby, it's not your fault..." he gets off his chair to move onto the bed. He sits on the edge of the bed so that he can be closer to her.
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Cherise looks at MattY he's obviously in pain as much as she is she could feel her heartbreaking "I don't know what happened" she says as she wipes her eyes "How did I get here, did they get who did it" She questions her voice turning more angry
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